1、 A letter of giving advice 写作攻略写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写作步骤首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段
2、：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。建议信写作的注意事项：a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句 A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4
3、.I am writing to you for the purpose of-5 I am writing to share some advice with you 6 In my personal opinion,it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认在下认为，为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种如果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。明智的选择。B.建议信第二段常用句式建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议，井然有序。1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfi
4、nally。meanwhile 2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could-我想如果你能-可能会更好建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will take my advice into account.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.I will be more than happy
5、to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：1.一定要做好课前预习2.课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记3.课后认真独立完成作业4.每天进行英语听说练习5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量第一步：列举要点 英语学的不大好 You are not good
6、 at EnglishYou dont do well in EnglishYou have difficulty with EnglishYou are not getting along well with English提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。give you some advice on English/learning English/how to learn English I will give you some suggestions which I think may be helpful to you.Here are my suggestions/tips on .做
7、好课前预习 previewPrepare/make preparations for Look through课堂上认真听讲 Listen to the teacher carefullyPay attention to what the teacher says carefully记好笔记 Set/write downMake/take notes课后认真独立完成作业每天进行英语听说练习 Finish your homework by yourself/on your own/dont copyPractise listening and speaking every day加强课外阅读扩大
8、词汇量Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.注意衔接词使用注意衔接词使用:表先后次序：表先后次序：First,second,third.Finally Firstly,secondly，eventually to begin with/to start with,at last 递进关系：递进关系：furthermore；moreover；not only.but also.；not.but.；,besides；in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.；meanwhile；at the same time；点睛
9、之笔：Nothing is impossible to a willing heart!Practice makes perfect Never give up/lose heart If you have any trouble,please turn to me for help.Id like to share my methods with you.Only in this way,can you learn English well read novels,magazines and everything to do with English改错1.Ill help you in y
10、our English2.My English is not very well.3.Finish it on yourself.4.There are some advise.5.Dont afraid of English.6.Set up a learning aim,go ahead to achieve it.7.Set down the knowledge in the class8.You must listen carefully and follow teachers said.9.Only if you read about it ahead of schedule,you
11、 will learn it better.with/On your ownisbeandwhatadvicewill youWell-goodOn-by I am sure youll be success.You can set down that you think is important.successfulYou can set down what you think is important.allBeautiful sentences in you compositions 1.Here is some useful advice for you about how to le
12、arn English well(class 2 Jirun Ze)2.Hearing that you are in trouble with English,Id like to give you some advice on how to get along well with English.(Class 1 Maguo Qin)3.No one can fail to notice the fact that listening and reading are playing an important role in learning English.(Class 1 Han Xu)
13、4.I will give you some necessary advice which can improve your English.(Class7 Xie Shuang)5.No one can deny the fact that it is important to listen to the teacher carefully.(Cass 7 Liuxin Yan)6.Only in these ways,can you have a good command of English.如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分整体三部分 Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题
