1、试题原题第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。“Come in, dear,”said old Maggie when she opened the door. Every day after school, Id come to her home; she was my babysitter.After walking in, I begged, “Tell me a story from when you were little!”“Alright! What should the story be
2、 about today?”she asked. “How about your favorite toy?”I replied.Maggie nodded, smiling, “On my eighth birthday, my parents bought me a beautiful doll. It had a ribbon（丝带）on its brown hair.”After a further description, she said, “Owning such a doll was a dream for a poor farm girl like me. How much
3、my parents loved me!”With tears welling up, Maggie continued, “Unfortunately, before long, our cat broke it into pieces! It was broken forever.”The rest of the day we played games, but I couldnt stop thinking about how sad Maggie had looked remembering her broken doll. Later that night, Mom said, “S
4、aturday is Maggies birthday. Why dont we bake a cake for her and bring it over there on that day?”“Perfect!”I smiled.The next day after school, I saw a doll in Mulligans second-hand store. It looked like the one described by Maggie. But its hair was blond and it didnt have a ribbon. I thought Maggie
5、 might like it anyway. I told Mulligan that I wanted to buy that doll for Maggie. Mulligan said, “Thats an expensive antique. How about selecting a handkerchief instead?”“No. How much does the doll cost?”I replied. “35 dollars,”he said sincerely. I was shocked. Where would Iget 35 dollars? Our famil
6、y had a tight budget. That night, after reaching home, I emptied my elephant bank and counted my money: 8 dollars.On Friday after school, I went to Mulligans store. “I really need that doll,”I said to Mulligan. “I have 8 dollars to pay for it right now. Ill help out in your store every weekend until
7、 I have paid the rest of the money.”Mulligan replied, “Yesterday, I found the back of its hair is somehow stained. If you need it badly, I can consider a fair price8 dollars.” “Deal!”I shouted with excitement. Then, Mr. Mulligan took down the doll and handed it to me.Paragraph 1: When seeing the sta
8、ined hair, I had an idea._Paragraph 2: On Saturday, carrying the packaged doll, I went to see Maggie together with Mom. _试题分析1.主要人物：Maggie：我小时候的保姆。每天放学后，我都会去家里坐坐。I：每天去Maggie家坐坐。Mulligan：二手店店主Mom：在下文中应该有所描述2.情节：Maggie是我小时候的保姆。现在每天放学后，我都会去家里坐坐。有一次，进了家门后，我请求Maggie给我讲个她小时候的故事，让她讲讲“玩具”。Maggie答应了，笑着给我讲了她8
9、岁时候的故事。在她8岁生日的时候，虽然家里拮据，但她父母还是给她买了一个棕发玩偶，头发上扎着一根丝带。但是，不幸的是，家里的小猫把这个漂亮的玩偶撕了个稀巴烂，这让她很伤心。故事讲完了，但却让我想起了很多。妈妈告诉我过几天就是Maggie的生日了。于是，我就决定给Maggie送个玩偶。第二天放学后，我在Mulligan二手店里看到一个玩偶，虽然是金发，也没有丝带，但感觉跟Maggie描述的那个玩偶很像，于是在我的请求下，店主愿意把一个头发上有污点的玩偶以8美元的价格卖给我。我非常高兴。于是，.3.主题：“人与社会”人与人之间的理解4.续写安排：第一段：When seeing the staine
10、d hair, I had an idea.（与前一句衔接）这个点子到底是什么呢？有什么想法？做了什么决定？具体是怎么做的？（头发怎么弄成brown？彩带哪里找？）（与下一段开头句衔接）最终，把玩偶做成了Maggie描述的那个样子。第二段：On Saturday, carrying the packaged doll, I went to see Maggie together with Mom.（做好与开头句的衔接）我们说明了来意，Maggie来开门。Maggie对我送的礼物的反应如何？（主题升华）小小的礼物了却了Maggie多年的心愿。范文1Paragraph 1: When seeing
11、 the stained hair, I had an idea. After putting the doll into my bad, I went directly to Maggies. When she asked me what was in my bag, I told her it was a secret. After getting home, I quickly and secretly took the doll out and spread its hair out on a piece of paper. Then, carefully, I colored all
12、 the blond hair brown. The stain disappeared! Then, I removed a pink ribbon from my favorite and only party dress, and then tied it to the dolls hair. It looked perfect! (85words)Paragraph 2: On Saturday, carrying the packaged doll, I went to see Maggie together with Mom. She opened the door and sai
13、d, “Dear, what a surprise!”Mom and I went in, saying, “Happy birthday!”Then, I gave Maggie the present and Maggie carefully opened it. When seeing the doll, she cried with joy, “Where did you find it and how could you afford it?”Mom looked at me, feeling confused too. After I explained, tears ran do
14、wn Maggies face. And she hugged me tight, thanking me for such a special gift. (75words)范文2Paragraph 1:When seeing the stained hair, I had an idea. “What if I turned it into brown hair and gave a surprise to Maggie?”I thought to myself with great excitement. Subsequently, I started my work and it se
15、emed that everything went well. However, it was when I confronted with a grave problem: How could I get a ribbon? I exerted every effort to find a way, only ending up hitting the wall. Then my mom passed by and curiously observed my masterpiece, so I turned to her for assistance. Surprisingly, she f
16、ound a delicate ribbon, which was absolutely suitable for the doll. A sense of achievement flooded over me and I couldnt wait to give it to Maggie.(109words)Paragraph 2:On Saturday, carrying the packaged doll, I went to see Maggie together with Mom. Opening the door, Maggie welcomed us warmly. The i
17、nstant I saw her, I presented the box to Maggie and uttered in an exciting voice, “Happy birthday! Heres a special gift for you!”Upon hearing my words, she opened the box curiously and was too astonished to have a doll, which was once a dream for her. She had difficulty containing her emotions and tears trickled down her cheeks uncontrollably. Maggie caressed my hair gently with her hand and said sincerely, “Thank you, my dear. Its the best gift Ive ever received!”It gradually downed on me that how important the doll meant to her!(104 words)习作展示
