1、第10讲选准时机,表达清晰常用时态在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航时态错误是学生在英语书面表达中经常出现的问题之一。在写作中选择合适的时态对于保证语言的准确和清晰起着非常重要的作用。(一)投“时”问路在写作中常用的时态主要有一般过去时、过去进行时、一般现在时、现在进行时、现在完成时、一般将来时,大家应对这几种时态的用法熟记于心并在实践中力求熟能生巧。1.一般过去时:表示过去某个时间发生的动作、存在的状态或过去习惯性的动作。一般过去时不强调动作对现在的影响,只说明过去的情况。,雕词琢句(1) Material collecting took us a whole week(收集材料花了我们整整一周)
2、, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.(2)听到他说的话,我抑制不住自己的眼泪。(2015湖南卷)On hearing what he said,I couldnt hold back my tears.2.过去进行时:表示过去某时正在进行的动作或存在的状态。雕词琢句(1)Last Monday,we were having our Chinese class(正在上语文课) when the teacher suddenly slipped and
3、 fell.,(2)老师进入教室的时候,我正在玩电脑游戏。When the teacher entered the classroom,I was playing computer games.,3.一般现在时:表示现在经常、反复发生的动作,存在的状态或习惯性的动作。雕词琢句(1)We are very proud(非常自豪)of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.(2)在我们的文化中它是一个为老人设立的日子。(2015课标全国卷)It is the day for the elderly in our cultur
4、e.,4.现在进行时:表示说话时或当前一段时间正在进行的动作。雕词琢句(1)I am writing(正在给你写信)to draw your attention to some improp-er behavior among us students:littering and scribbling. (2)我现在正给你写信告诉你我的激动人心的暑假计划。I am writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.,5.现在完成时:表示说话时已经完成的动作,且这个动作的结果对现在仍有影响,或过去的某一动作一直持续到现在。雕词琢
5、句(1)I have already finished(已经完成)my application and resume.(2)在几项英语活动中,我已经成功地向她伸出援手。Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities.6.一般将来时:表示将来某一时刻要发生的动作或存在的状态,或将来某一段时间经常发生的动作或存在的状态。雕词琢句(1)Our school photography club is going to hold/will hold/is to hold(打算举办)an Interna
6、tional High School Student Photography Show.(2016课标全国卷)(2)我们将在早上六点钟从校门口出发。We will start at 6 oclock in the morning from the school gate.,(二)时态选秀尽管时态的使用千变万化,但在书面表达中却“有章可循、有律可遵”,现总结如下:1.叙事多用一般过去时。雕词琢句That weekend,we went to(去了)a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.,2.表述观点或议论文中主要
7、使用一般现在时。雕词琢句Personally, I prefer to work in a team(我更喜欢在团队里工作),which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and share my experiences with them.,3.说明文通常用一般现在时。雕词琢句Every student can do something for our environment in daily life.For example,remember to turn off the lights in time bef
8、ore you leave the classroom in the evening(晚上在你离开教室之前).,4.介绍客观情况常用一般现在时。雕词琢句The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48% of the boys choose sports stars(48%的男孩子选择体育明星).,二、学以致用1.完美文章根据所给提示完成下面短文,注意时态。Located beside the Yangtze River,my hometown is a beauti
9、ful place now.In the past,(1) it was a poor village where people led a hard life(它是个贫穷的村庄,在那里人们过着艰苦的生活).However,(2) in the past twenty years great changes have taken place (在过去的20年里发生了巨大的变化) here,thanks to the good policy of the Party.To begin with,a large number of new houses have been set up which
10、 are equipped with modern appliances such as computers,fridges,TV sets,washing machines and so on.Whats more,there is a large supermarket in it,(3) where there are varieties of goods that people need(那里有人们需要的各种各样的商品).,Much to our delight,(4) a much bigger school is being built (一所更大的学校正在建设当中).There
11、is no doubt that (5) the children will receive a better education(孩子们将会接受更好的教育)by the time it has been put into use,because lots of modern teaching facilities will be used in the new school,(6) which will help teachers make their classes lively and interesting(它们将帮助老师使课堂变得生动有趣).Such is my hometown (
12、7) where all the people are living a happy life(在这里所有的人正过着幸福的生活).And I am sure(8) it will become a more charming and comfortable place (它将会变成一个更加迷人和舒适的地方) to live with the development of economy and society as well.,2.话题写作【本期话题】书信交流【写作微练】根据下面的信息提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。1.我是一名四川的学生李华,从小就是大熊猫爱好者;2.三年前,我很高兴得知大
13、熊猫白云生了她的女儿苏林;3.在你们的网站上我一直关注着苏林的成长;4.得知她在你们动物园生活得非常好,我很高兴;5.明年夏天我去美国的时候要去动物园看她;6.非常感谢你们为照顾大熊猫付出的劳动。注意:正确使用时态进行短文写作。,答案One possible version:I am Li Hua,a student in Sichuan.I have been a panda lover since I was a child.Three years ago I was delighted to learn that BaiYun gave birth to her daughter SuL
14、in and I have been watching her growth on your website.When learning SuLin is living well in your zoo now,I am very happy.I will visit her when I go to America next summer.Thank you very much for your caring for the pandas.,本文档仅为全套资料之一，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！,请点此到下载本文全套资料,三、实战提能某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你
15、有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1.谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。A friend in need is a friend indeed.Where theres a will,theres a way.注意:1.词数:120150;2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。参考词汇:谚语proverb,我会审题,我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)有价值的valuable(2)幸运的是fortunately(3)实现achieve/reach(4)灰心lose heart(5)使某人想起 remind sb. of(6)获得回报pay off(7)增强自信
16、increase/build up ones confidence,2.句型搭桥(1)The moment/As soon as.(2)Just as the saying goes,. 我会表达,答案One possible version:Where there is a will,there is a way.I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment I came into the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard.I like
17、the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realise them.Once I was not good at English.I didnt know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English t
18、eacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Dont lose heart.Remember:Where there is a will,there is a way.” Suddenly,I was reminded of the sentence on the blackboard.From then on,I had worked hard on my English and it finally paid off.My English improved a lot,and more importantly,I gained much
19、confidence.,美句必背1.When entering junior high school,I saw this proverb for the first time.2.In spite of the fact that it is not easy to achieve our goals,we are bound to make it with a strong will.3.Suddenly it occurred to me that a strong will plays an important role in succeeding in what we desire to do.,
