1、QG英语英语英语英语 名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【诊断平台】Hi,Mike.Thank you for your telephone call.Im glad to tell you what we have two rooms for you now.They are on the fourth floor,faced the West Lake,so you can see them well.You can choose one from them.The price to each room is$150 one night.Every morni
2、ng from 7:00 to 9:30,we offer free breakfast,so you have to pay for if you have lunch and supper in our hotel.Dont forget bring your ID card with you.If you have any more question,please call Miss Black at 3846572,she you have any more question,please call Miss Black at 3846572,she will be pleasing
3、to help you.We are expecting you to come to our hotel on August 16.We hope you would enjoy your stay with us.Thanks a-gain for choosing our hotel.【答案】Hi,Mike.Thank you for your telephone call.Im glad to tell you we have two rooms for you now.They are on the fourth floor,the West Lake,so you can see
4、well.You can choose one from them.The price each room is$150 one night.Every morning from 7:00 to 9:30,we offer free breakfast,you have to pay for if you have thatwhatwhat或去掉facingfaceditthembutso名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考lunch and supper in our hotel.Dont forget bring your ID card with you.If
5、 you have any more,please call Miss Black at 3846572,she will be to help you.We are expecting you to come to our hotel on August 16.We hope you enjoy your stay with us.Thankstoquestionsquestionpleasedpleasingwillwould again for choosing our hotel.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考题号错误类型错误根源1名词性从句混淆了th
6、at和what引导名词性从句的区别2非谓语动词对动词-ing形式和过去分词的用法缺乏了解3代词指代代词指代不一致4介词混淆了介词to和for的异同5连词上下文逻辑关系不清6介词多余对某些动词和其构成的短语概念不清7缺少to忽视了动词不定式符号to的使用【误区诊断】名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考8名词忽视了名词的单复数9形容词不能正确区分某些形意相近的形容词的含义10时态缺乏对一般将来时和过去将来时用法的理解(续表)【误区警示】通过分析近几年高考短文改错,我们可以看出,该题型难度不大,但不容易得高分。究其根源,首先在于考生对语法知识掌握不牢固,句子结构不明确。其
7、次,句法成分分析不熟练,无法确定文章中所出现的词性错误。再次,对于上下文的逻辑关系缺乏判断,导致对but,so等连词的错误视而不见。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【名师解析】第一处:观察句子结构可知,tell后应为双宾语,由此可知后面的句子要作tell的宾语。根据语法规则可知,what在宾语从句中可作主语、宾语等成分,that不作句子成分,本身没有含义,可以省略。而此处的句子成分完整,所以把what改为that,或者也可以去掉what。第二处:faced与are之间没有连接词,face应用非谓语动词形式,由于face和they有逻辑上的主谓关系,所以用动词-i
8、ng形式作状语。第三处:前面提到the West Lake,是单数形式,所以要用代词it来代替,而them只能代替复数名词。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考第四处:根据语义可知,此处指的是每个房间的价格,所以要把to改为for。第五处:上文提到提供免费的早餐,下文又说午餐和晚餐要付钱,所以上下文是转折关系,因此要把so改为but。第六处:表示“为付款”是要用pay for.,但是此处后面没有宾语,所以要去掉介词for。第七处:forget后面接动词可以有两种形式:forget doing sth(忘记做了某事)和forget to do sth(忘了去做某事),
9、此处的意思是“别忘了要带上身份证”,所以要在bring前加to。第八处:question是可数名词,根据前面的more可知,此处应为复数,所以要把question改为questions。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考第九处:pleasing意为“令人愉快的”,而此处所表达的是Miss Black的心理感受,所以要改为pleased“感到愉快的”。第十处:观察句子结构可知,该句是含有宾语从句的复合句。hope是一般现在时,而enjoy是将要发生的动作,所以不能用过去将来时,需把would改为will。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高
10、考【考情报告】考点分布统计表考点全国新课标卷年份试题错误类型1.冠词2011,for long holidayfor a long holiday缺少冠词2.名词数与格 2010,classmateclassmates2011,luggagesluggage;at my friendfriends2012,toytoys名词的数名词的数名词的所有格名词的数名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考考点全国新课标卷年份试题错误类型3.介词2010,except for2011,on my packetin my packet2012,to youfor you介词多余介词错
11、误介词错误4.形容词和副词2010,talk manytalk much;attractivelyattractive;closestclose 2011,herethere2012,littleless形容词错误副词错误最高级误用副词误用比较级误用(续表)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考5.代词2010,theirour 2011,itthem;while parents while my parents物主代词错误代词错误缺少代词6.连词2010,although in the summereven 2011,butand连词误用连词错误7.动词2010,w
12、ornwore2012,did wrongwent/go时态形式错误缺少动词或时态形式错误8.主谓一致2010,waswere主谓不一致9.名词性从句2012,which was happeningwhat连接词错误(续表)名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考10.动词的时态 2010,comecame2011,feelfelt2012,teartore误用现在时误用现在时误用现在时11.非谓语动词 2010,seemed careseem to care2011,buybuying2012,make my toys to last缺少不定式符号to误用动词原形不定
13、式符号多余12.情态动词2012,mustcan误用情态动词(续表)新型短文的改错短文长度在110词左右,体裁为记叙文,题材为考生熟知的内容。设题的形式通常是多词和缺词各1题,错词8题。设题以句为单位,每句最多两处错误。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【考向预测】2013年的全国卷该题型仍将以记叙文或信件为主,设题类型基本不变,考查项目覆盖全面。【解题技巧】短文改错的错词在词法方面主要是:动词的时态错误、形容词或副词的误用、名词的单数复数错误、代词误用、介词误用、连词误用、非谓语动词形式错误等;句法方面是考查名词性从句连接词、定语从句关系词和主谓一致等。多词或缺
14、词主要考查冠词、不定式符号to或介词。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考1.名词名词主要考查单、复数的正确使用以及名词的所有格。(2012全国卷)We,as well as animal,cannot live with-out water and neither agriculture nor industry can go without it.【点石成金】animal是可数名词,前面没有冠词,意义上与we并列,所以此处应改为animals。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(2012辽宁卷).as a result,there
15、was a long line of traf-fic for the least six mile.【点石成金】mile是可数名词,由前面的six可知,此处应用复数,所以改为miles。(2011新课标全国卷)When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.【点石成金】由句意可知,此处在my friend后省略了home,因此应改为friends,表示“到达朋友的家”。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考2.冠词冠词考查分两个方面,一是冠词残缺或多余,考生要注意关于含有冠词和不含冠
16、词的用法以及加冠词与不加冠词的区别。二是冠词the,a,an之间的相互误用。(2012辽宁卷)Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly behind a lorry.【点石成金】由句意可知,此处的car是泛指,所以要加不定冠词a。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考3.动词(1)时态通常是一般现在时改为一般过去时;(2012陕西卷)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijin
17、g last month.【点石成金】根据句子的时间状语last month可知,此处应为过去时,所以改为visited。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(2)语态主要是缺少助动词。(2012吉林高三质检)Most of the work had finished when I got back to the factory.【点石成金】由于finish和most of the work有动宾关系,应用被动语态,句子是过去完成时,所以要加been。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(3)非谓语动词主要是现在分词与过去分词之间的误用,
18、动词不定式符号to的添加,动词原形变成动名词或现在分词的形式等。(2012四川卷)Thank you so much for not only giving me life,but also teach me how to be a good person.【点石成金】由前面的not only giving.可知,此处的but also teach.与其应为并列关系,所以要把teach改为teaching。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 (2012陕西卷)I also share with my friends many photos taking in Be
19、ijing.【点石成金】动词take和photos有逻辑上的动宾关系,要用过去分词作定语,所以taking要改为taken。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考4.代词主要是代词的格与数的误用,以及代词指代统一性方面的错误。如男性用了女性代词;单数用了复数代词或相反;应该使用形容词性物主代词却用了名词性物主代词等。(2012四川卷)Im sorry that I am abroad and cant send your flowers,so Im writing to you.【点石成金】动词send后需要接双宾语,此处的词应作宾语,而不是作定语,所以用you。名师
20、诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(2012辽宁卷)They finally dropped Gina off at her par-ents and made our way home.【点石成金】由上文的we drove to the service station.可知,此处为代词指代错误,应用We。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考5.数词主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用,以及hundred,thousand,dozen,score等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。(2012陕西西安一中质检)Hundred of s
21、tudents took part in the sports meeting last week.【点石成金】hundred,thousand,million等词和具体的数字连用时不加s,和of连用表示不确定的数目时需要加s,所以hundred要改为hun-dreds。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考6.形容词与副词主要涉及形容词和副词的原级、比较级与最高级的误用,以及形容词和副词的误用等。(2012辽宁卷)Unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.【点石成金】分析句子结构可知,Unfortunate在
22、句中应作状语,unfor-tunate是形容词,所以改为Unfortunately。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(2010辽宁卷)Like the rest of my classmate,I didnt re-ally want to get closest to her.【点石成金】由上下文的语义可知,此处没有比较的范围,所以不能用最高级,应改为close。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考7.介词主要考查介词的使用与省略,以及介词与其他词类之间的固定搭配。(2012全国卷).especially bath water fo
23、r which is quite a lot,and that will save much water.【点石成金】从句子结构上看,这是一个定语从句,先行词是water,定语从句的关系代词作主语,需用which或that,因此for多余,要去掉。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 (2012辽宁卷)It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend.【点石成金】该句属于固定搭配,在it is so kind of sb to do sth句型中,介词不能用for,因此for要改为of。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专
24、案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考8.连词并列连词(递进式、转折式、选择式和因果式四种之间)的误用,主要是but与so/and之间的误用。从属连词之间的误用以及并列连词与从属连词之间的误用等。(2012辽宁卷)In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.【点石成金】根据语义可知,此处所要表达的是“直到为止”,而unless的意思是“除非”,因此要改为until。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 (2012全国卷)We,as well a
25、s animals,cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it.【点石成金】此处为固定搭配,neither.nor.“既不;也不”。所以or应改为nor。(2012陕西卷)It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.【点石成金】根据句子的语义可知,此处为并列关系,而不是转折关系,所以but应改为and。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对
26、点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考9.主谓一致not only.but also.,neither.nor.,either.or.,as well as,together with.等连接两个主语时以及从句作主语时的主谓一致。(2012陕西卷)What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.【点石成金】该句是个主语从句,句子的主语是what I liked best,因此谓语动词要用单数,所以were要改为was。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考Not only I
27、 but also my sister like playing computer games.【点石成金】not only.but also.连接两个并列主语时,谓语动词在人称和数上要就近一致。由于my sister是第三人称单数,所以要把like改为likes。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考10.句法结构注意分析句子结构,保证其完整性,如主从复合句、并列分句中的连词使用等。(2012四川卷)Whenever I am,I always love you.【点石成金】根据句子的语义可知,此处所表达的意思是“无论我在哪里”,所以要把whenever改为wher
28、ever。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考 (2012辽宁八校联考)Our English teacher asked us to keep in mind that he said in class.【点石成金】分析句子成分可知,此处应为宾语从句,由于said是及物动词,所以连接词要作宾语,that引导宾语从句时不作句子成分,所以改为what。名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考短文改错口诀短文改错要做好,常见类型应记牢。名词重在“数”与“格”,冠词常考“错”“多”“少”。时态和语态细思量,非谓搭配莫错了。连、代、形、副错相似,多是
29、故意来混淆。介词大多考搭配,多、漏、误用想周到。主语谓语要一致,关联词语也常考。词法句法均未错,逻辑推理去寻找。附:名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(一)One day when I was in a restaurant had a quiet lunch,two girls arrived at the restaurant to have lunch,either.After two and three minutes,I noticed one of the girls.She was very beautifully and was looking a
30、t me,too.They looked at each other and then she waved her hand as if she is saying bye.I waved back and smiled,thinking that she was wav-ing to me,but the disaster was she was waving to her friend who were sitting behind me.For that moment,my face got red.She began laugh-ing at me,and I couldnt do a
31、nything but to laugh at myself.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【答案】One day when I was in a restaurant a quiet lunch,two girls arrived at the restaurant to have lunch,.After two three minutes,I noticed one of the girls.She was very and was looking at me,too.looked at each other and then she waved her
32、 hand as if she saying bye.I waved back and smiled,thinking that she was waving to me,but the disaster was she was waving to her who werehavinghadtooeitherorandbeautifulbeautifullyWeTheywasisthatfriendswerewasfriend或把改为 sitting behind me.that moment,my face got red.She began laugh-ing at me,and I co
33、uldnt do anything but to laugh at myself.AtFor名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(二)For the first time in my life I was interviewed by an university profes-sor for a teaching position at a high school.I was very excited that as soon as we sat down I started to introduce myself in English before asked.B
34、ut to my surprise,I saw,out of the corner of his eye,that the professor was becoming impatient.He said my spoken English was contained too much bad idioms and non-American expressions.I felt hurt and discouraging.I stood up in silence and made to the door.Now three years has passed,so the job interv
35、iew still remained fresh in my mind.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【答案】For the first time in my life I was interviewed by university professor for a teaching position at a high school.I was excited that as soon as we sat down I started to introduce myself in English before asked.But to my surprise,
36、I saw,out of the corner of eye,that the professor was becoming impatient.He said my spoken English was contained too bad idioms and non-American expressions.I felt hurt and.I stood up in silence and made the door.Now three years aansoverytomyhismanymuchdiscourageddiscouragingfortohas passed,the job
37、interview still fresh in my mind.butsoremainsremained名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考(三)I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday.It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes.I looked all around and finally find an at-tractive jacket.When I was asked the price,the assistant said,“Seven-ty
38、 dollars.”He added that if I paid by cash,he would give me a dis-countten percent off the fixing price.I thought it was so expensive and started to leave.As I was left,he grabbed me and said,“Okay.Forty-five dollars.”Delighting,I bought the jacket.However,when I got home and tried on my new jacket,I
39、 realized that anything was wrong with it.It had a pocket where wouldnt open.I was speechless and looked at it in amazement.名师诊断名师诊断专案突破专案突破对点集训对点集训决胜高考决胜高考【答案】I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday.It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes.I looked all around and finally an attract
40、ive jacket.When I was asked the price,the assistant said,“Seven-ty dollars.”He added that if I paid cash,he would give me a discountten percent off the price.I thought it was expensive and started to leave.As I was,he grabbed me and said,“Okay.Forty-five dollars.”,I bought the jacket.However,when I
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42、ou fail to make friend,you should examine that you are doing and see if you are doing something wrong.Maybe you have social faults such like snobbishness,talkativeness and using foul language,which drives away your new friends.Whatever your so-cial faults may,look at them honestly and try your best
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