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Read the poster and get information about the diving programs.Choose the diving program Choose the diving program 1.What diving programs are available?2.What can you see and do?3.Which program appeals to you more?The Farne Islands,UKLook back on the adventure:what did you see?Look back on the adventure:what did you see?shipwreckseaweed forestsgrey sealcoral reefsschools of fishLook back on the adventure:what did you do?Look back on the adventure:what did you do?jumped off the shipchased after me/gave me a bitepetted/stroked the grey sealexplored the wreckviewsactionsfeelingsDescriptiveWritingcontentlanguageCollect writing techniquesCollect writing techniquesDiscuss how Jules Verne describes the undersea adventure so vividly.Collect writing techniquesCollect writing techniquesUse adjectives and adverbs to add more details.Collect writing techniquesCollect writing techniquesthis dazzling carpetwonderful intensityCollect writing techniquesCollect writing techniques1._ jumped off the shipwreck2._ chased after me3.gave me a _ bite4.schools of _ fish5.the _ shipwreckgracefully/bravelynaughtily/curiouslyplayful/harmlessunusual/fearsome mysterious/sleeping Use adjectives/adverbs to describe the following views/actions.Collect writing techniquesCollect writing techniquesUse comparison to describe unfamiliar experiences.Collect writing techniquesCollect writing techniquesUse simile/metaphor(比喻比喻)to create a vivid image.Collect writing techniquesCollect writing techniquesUse comparison/figurative speech to describe the following experiences.as ifthan as.aslike The grey seal was as cute as a puppy.I jumped off the wreck as if I was a bird flying off the mountain.Write a Write a diary entry diary entry about your diving adventureabout your diving adventureviewsactionsfeelingslanguageDescriptiveWritingadjectives/adverbscomparison/contrastmetaphor/simile(比喻比喻)contentstructureopening+body+endingWhile-writing:What did you do?What did you see?How did you feel?Imagine you have been on this adventure.Make notes about your experience.Now write a diary entry about your adventure.While-writing:BeginningGiven the layout,you can add more.Main character(s)TimePlaceGive basic information about a diving experienceI,my parents,instructorsone dayThe Farne IslandsWhile-writing:Give basic information about a diving experience例如:Seeing the poster,I want a diving experience with my parents.I want to experience an undersea adventure one day.I want to explore the magical undersea world around Farne Island.BeginningGiven the layout,you can add more.While-writing:What happened?例如:Seeing the wrecked ship Somail,I felt as though she were about to set sail once again!What surprised/attracted me most was that.Swimming with Farnes most lovely grey seals,I could experience.Given the layout,you can add more.Main bodyWhile-writing:Show your own feelings例如:Diving turned out to be much less difficult than I had imagined.The world here was so quiet that it felt that time had stopped.I ll never forget the diving experience which/thatConclusionGiven the layout,you can add more.Take that adventure!Mentally or Physically.读万卷书,行万里路。读万卷书,行万里路。
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