1、 1 短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1分。分。2 通篇人称错误，统扣通篇人称错误，统扣2分。分。3 拼写拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。3个小错相当于个小错相当于1个大错。个大错。4 相同错误，只扣一次。字数过多或过少词扣相同错误，只扣一次。字数过多或过少词扣2分。分。5 文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣2分。分。6 书写潦草，卷面不清，扣书写潦草，卷面不清，扣1分。分。一、评分档次：一、评分档次：二、评
2、分原则：二、评分原则：第五档第五档A（1315分）：能写明分）：能写明全部全部要点，语言要点，语言基本无误或有少量基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。流畅，表达清楚。第四档第四档B（1012分）：能写明分）：能写明大部分大部分要点，语言有要点，语言有一些一些错误（句子结构或动词时错误（句子结构或动词时态错误态错误12处处),但行文但行文基本基本流畅，表达流畅，表达基本基本清楚。清楚。第三档第三档C（79分）：能写明分）：能写明一些一些要点，语言错误要点，语言错误较多较多（句子结构或动词时态错误（句子结构或动词时态错误34处），但意思处），但意思基本基本连贯，表达连贯，表
3、达基本基本清楚。清楚。第二档第二档D（46分）：能写明分）：能写明少数少数要点，语言错误要点，语言错误多多，意思，意思不不连贯，影响意思表达。连贯，影响意思表达。第一档第一档E（13分）：只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。分）：只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。中考写作中考写作技巧技巧1、审：审：主题主题、人称人称、时态时态2、列：列：分段分段，要点齐全要点齐全3、连：连：过渡句（首、中、尾）过渡句（首、中、尾）关联词（恰当、避免重复）关联词（恰当、避免重复）4、美：美：多用短语多用短语代替单个单词代替单个单词 巧用高级词汇巧用高级词汇 多用多用经典经典句型结构句型结构 5、查：查：a.大小写、拼
4、写；大小写、拼写；b.要点；要点；c.语法（时态、语态、词组搭配、句式结构）；语法（时态、语态、词组搭配、句式结构）；d.标点；标点；e.中式表达；中式表达；f.书写、字数书写、字数Dear editor,Id like to say something about this topic.I think students should use the Internet properly.With the development of the Internet,many students begin to use the Internet to help with their study.The
5、rere many rich study resources on the Internet.The students can search for useful information easily.Some websites also provide students with teaching videos.They can learn whenever they want to.Some students are crazy about playing computer games.They spend most of their spare time on games.They ha
6、ve little time to communicate with their parents and friends.However,surfing the Internet causes many problems.随着互联网的发展，许多中学随着互联网的发展，许多中学生开始利用互联网进行学习。生开始利用互联网进行学习。过渡句过渡句关联词关联词 I am _lively _energetic._ I am tired,I keep on doing my homework till midnight.I like doing many kinds of sports _ swimming,
7、running and playing football.I stay up late._,I cant get enough sleep.I enjoy my life very much._,I have some teenage problems.My favourite colour is orange,_it can _cheer me up _bring me good luck.Which is better?1.一些学生非常喜欢玩电脑游戏。A.Some students like playing computers very much.B.Some students _ com
8、puter games.2.我认为学生们应该正确使用网络。A.I think students should use the Internet properly.B.,students should use the Internet properly.善用意义相近善用意义相近的高级词汇，的高级词汇，避免单调避免单调.are crazy about playingIn my opinion3.我不玩电脑游戏。A.I dont play computer games.B.I stay away from computer games.结果状语从句结果状语从句I have too much home
9、work to do.I dont have enough sleep.I have too much homework to do and I dont have enough sleep.I have so much homework to do that I dont have enough sleep.How to make better sentences?变换句式变换句式并列句并列句复合句复合句I have too much homework to do to have enough sleep.tooto结构结构【经典句型结构】【经典句型结构】1.做某事是做某事是 Its adj
10、.(for sb.)to do sth.Its+adj.+that从句从句 Doing sth.is.(动名词做主语动名词做主语,V谓三单谓三单)2.太太而不能而不能 too+adj./adv.+to do sth.3.足够足够 adj./adv.+enough to do sth.4.如此如此以至于以至于 such+adj.+n.+that从句从句 so+adj./adv.+that从句从句5.目的是为了目的是为了 .so that/in order that从句从句;.in order to do6.不仅不仅.而且而且.not onlybut also.7.而不是做而不是做 instead
11、 of doing sth8.find/think/make it+adj.+to do sth.9.花花 It takes sb.time to do sth.sb.spend time/money doing sth.10.宾语从句、定语从句、各类状语从句宾语从句、定语从句、各类状语从句11.被动句、感叹句被动句、感叹句 12.谚语谚语Each coin has two sides.事物都有两面性。事物都有两面性。It is never too old to learn.活到老学到老活到老学到老No pain,no gain.一分耕耘，一分收获。一分耕耘，一分收获。There is no
12、end to learning.学无止境学无止境Where there is a will there is a way.有志者有志者,事竟成。事竟成。知识就是力量知识就是力量Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.世上无难事，只怕有心人。世上无难事，只怕有心人。活用谚语，丰富文章内容，增加说服力活用谚语，丰富文章内容，增加说服力范文一范文一Su Bingtian-The Olympic Hero in My Heart Did you watch the Olym
13、pic 100-metre race last summer vacation?Did you notice a great man who is now called“China Speed”?He is Su Bingtian.Su is a Chinese athlete as well as a professor of a university.He is very modest,hard-working and serious.In 2020 Tokyo Olympics,he wore red and yellow sports clothes,because red and y
14、ellow are symbols of hope and good luck.His training is very hard,but he never gives up.Whenever he meets trouble,he always believes his dream will come true through hard work.Just as the saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way”.He broke the Asian record with 9.83 seconds at the Tokyo Olym
15、pic Games on August 1,2021.We are all proud of him.范文二范文二I am Li Hua,Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.First,I am not tall and I dont look cool.However,I tell myself not to pay attention to my height and looks.It is important to believe myself.Second,sometimes my parents don
16、t understand me,and I hardly have any close friends to talk to.I think it necessary for me to learn to communicate and be kind to others.As we all know,no one likes an impolite person.Whats worse,at present students often feel stressed and there are few after-school activities.Its a good idea to lis
17、ten to light music to make us relaxed.Doing sports is also a good choice.I also try my best to manage the time better so that I can have more time for my hobbies.I hope my advice is worth taking./I hope my advice is of some value to you.Thats all.Thank you!范文三范文三Im happy to share my school life with
18、 you.I hope my answers will be helpful to you.On the one hand,I feel a little nervous because the exam is so important that I cant imagine what life will be like if I fail.On the other hand,the exam can give me a chance to learn more.As a result,I feel a bit excited.However,there are a few problems
19、I have to face.For example,there is too much homework to do.Sometimes I cant work out the Maths problems.So I have to make full use of my spare time to do my homework.If possible,I turn to my teachers and classmates for help.I would like to get some advice on how to make myself more relaxed before t
20、he exam.Can you give me some advice?Recently,I have felt so stressed that I dont know how to solve the problem.There are some main causes.First,I have difficulty understanding some subjects.Whats worse,I am too shy to ask for help.Second,I have so much homework to do that I dont have enough sleep.As
21、 a result,I often feel sleepy in class.Third,my parents are too strict with me.It seems that they care only about my marks after each exam.Whats more,I have no close friend to talk to.Im feeling bad about it,so I think it is necessary to make a change.I hope you can give me some valuable advice and
22、I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.范文四范文四Dear Daniel,Im glad to receive your letter.I hope I can offer you some useful advice.If you often feel stressed about exams,you can wear white or blue.They can help you feel calm and relaxed.When you are unhappy,youd better wear warm colours like o
23、range because warm colours can cheer you up.Green is one of the energetic colours.When you are tired,its a good idea to wear green to become energetic.It is known that strong colours can make it easier for you to take action.Red is one of the strong colours.Why not wear red when you have difficulty making a decision?I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
