1、bullyingBlog postBloggerBlog1.Where is the blog post from?2.What parts does the blog post include?Whats the main idea of the blog post?Tip 1:Use as few words as possible to catch the attention of the readers.information about the author can we get?He/She is not an _,but an experienced _.expertblogge
2、rbeing a blogger for many yearsTick what the writer tells the reader in Para.1.Tip 2:Ask a question to introduce the topic.definition of online safetybackground informationthe writers knowledgethe topic of the post“How do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet?”How?How does t
3、he author answer the question?by _giving 3 golden rulesTip3：Use imperative sentences(祈使句)to make the language powerful.dosdontsleave the site immediatelyprotect your privacybe politepost comments/click on anythinggive out your address/phone numberThird rule in Para.2:be politedont be rudedont be a t
4、rolldont.dont be a cyberbullydont stir up troubledont be mean to othersdont post embarrassing photos and informationThe more polite you are,the less likely it is you will be attacked.First of all SecondThirdTip4：Use linking words to express ideas clearly and coherently(连贯地).How can we explain new wo
5、rds or key terms in Para.2?Identity TheftA TrollA CyberbullyIt is a problem.steal your identity.A troll is a person.stir up trouble online.Like a troll,a cyberbully will use.explanationdefinitioncomparison Tip 5:Add details and use skills such as explanation,definition and comparison to make the inf
6、ormation clear and understandable.“Have you had any bad experience online,or do you have some good advice for staying safe?Post your comments below!”What does the author ask the readers to do?make comments请根据以下要点以“Online Shopping Safety”为题写一篇关于如何安全地网上购物的帖子并发表在你的博客上。词数100左右。1.挑选你熟悉的购物网站；2.使用较为复杂的密码；3
7、.勿使用公共网络购物explain the rulesask others to give commentsothers commentstell the main ideaintroduce a topic and introduce oneselfstructureTip3：Use linking words to express ideas clearly and coherently(连贯地).Tip4：Use imperative sentences(祈使句)to make the language powerful.Tip 5:Add details and use skills
8、such as explanation、definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.Tip 1:Use as few words as possible to catch the attention of the readers.Tip 2:Ask a question to introduce the topic.skills当谈及网上购物安全，作为一个有经验的网民，我确信对此我还是当谈及网上购物安全，作为一个有经验的网民，我确信对此我还是略知一二的。略知一二的。Para1:introd
9、uction When it comes to online shopping safety,as an experienced netizen,I am sure that I know one thing or two.随着网络的快速发展，在过去几年里网上购物也大幅度地增长。但随着网络的快速发展，在过去几年里网上购物也大幅度地增长。但网上购物真的安全吗？当然不！网上购物真的安全吗？当然不！With the rapid development of the Internet,online shopping has greatly grown in the past few years.How
10、ever,is online shopping really safe?Of course not!虽然网上购物给我们带来极大的便利，但也有着很多不安全的隐患。虽然网上购物给我们带来极大的便利，但也有着很多不安全的隐患。我们要如何使网上购物更加安全呢？我们要如何使网上购物更加安全呢？Although online shopping brings us great convenience,there are many insecure risks.How should we make online shopping safer?有着以下几点简单的建议，你可以愉快地享受网上购物的便利。有着以下几点
11、简单的建议，你可以愉快地享受网上购物的便利。Para1:introduction With these following simple tips,you can enjoy the convenience of online shopping with much pleasure.当你在网上购物时，这些简单的建议能够帮助你避免一些糟糕的购当你在网上购物时，这些简单的建议能够帮助你避免一些糟糕的购物体验。物体验。When you shop online,these simple suggestions can help avoid some terrible experiences.建议当你在
12、网上购物前，有必要阅读以下几点建议，这会使网上购建议当你在网上购物前，有必要阅读以下几点建议，这会使网上购物毫无风险。物毫无风险。It is recommended that it is neccessary to read the following advice before shopping online,which makes your online shopping risk-free.+transitional sentences 首先，挑选熟悉的购物网站。最好在你了解且信任的网站上购物，首先，挑选熟悉的购物网站。最好在你了解且信任的网站上购物，它会保护好你的隐私。如果你很需要从不
13、知名的网址购买商品，在它会保护好你的隐私。如果你很需要从不知名的网址购买商品，在购买前先试着去浏览一下网站的其他评价。购买前先试着去浏览一下网站的其他评价。Para2:rules/advice First of all,choose the website you are familiar with.Its best to shop from the website you know and trust,because it can protect your privacy.If you feel the need to shop from an unknown website,try to
14、go through others reviews on it.linking words+imperative sentences其次，使用较为复杂的密码。只有几个数字或字母的简单的密码很其次，使用较为复杂的密码。只有几个数字或字母的简单的密码很容易被入侵容易被入侵(hack)(hack)。为了安全起见，更加推荐使用较为复杂的密码。为了安全起见，更加推荐使用较为复杂的密码。而且，不要轻易泄露你的密码。而且，不要轻易泄露你的密码。Para2:rules/advice Second,use a strong password.A simple password with only few num
15、bers or letters is easily hacked.For better safety,a strong password is highly recommended.Plus,dont give out your password.linking words+imperative sentences最后，勿使用公共网络购物。使用公共网络购物有着巨大的风险。最后，勿使用公共网络购物。使用公共网络购物有着巨大的风险。你可以使用手机热点你可以使用手机热点(hotspot)(hotspot)去购物，而不是公共网络。或者，去购物，而不是公共网络。或者，可以将你想要购买的商品加入购物车，直
16、到回家后再使用安全网络可以将你想要购买的商品加入购物车，直到回家后再使用安全网络去购买。去购买。Para2:rules/advice Third,dont shop on public network.Shopping on public Wifi is a huge risk.(You can)use your phone as a hotspot instead of public Wifi.Or,add those items that you want to buy into your shopping cart and shop until you are at home and o
17、n your safe network.linking words+imperative sentences你有什么关于安全网上购物的建议吗？欢迎在下方评论！你有什么关于安全网上购物的建议吗？欢迎在下方评论！Para3:Ending(ask others to give comments)Do you have any good tip about shopping online safely?Your ideas are welcomed below!欢迎大家分享自己的故事和发表任何与安全网上购物的评论！欢迎大家分享自己的故事和发表任何与安全网上购物的评论！You are welcomed
18、to share your stories and make any comment on online shopping safety!1.Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic?2.Are the tips and suggestions well organized?3.Has the writer defined the new words?4.Does the author include examples,comparisons,or explanations?5.Does the writ
19、er end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions?6.Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes？Lets polish the passage.Sample writingOnline Shopping SafetyWhen it comes to shopping online safety,Im sure that I know one thing or two.My net age is 10 years.Here are some tips for you.Fir
20、st,use the shopping websites you are familiar with.Download familiar app or software like taobao.Second,when registering a shopping website,use a strong password and keep it well.Third,never use public computers to shop online,or your privacy will be recorded in the computers.Last,install a firewall
21、 to watch over your information.A firewall is a kind of software to protect your using Internet.Have you any good tips about shopping online safely？Your ideas are welcomed below!HomeworkCheck and revise your draft blog post and exchange it with your deskmate to find any spelling or grammar mistakes.
