1、让高考书面表达神采飞扬让高考书面表达神采飞扬 Composition Writing SkillsComposition Writing Skills Xia Guibin Weiyuan Middle School Apr.15.2013 A 1.Tom is a boy.2.He is seven years old.3.He was watching TV in the living room when he heard a terrible noise.4.Then he rushed out immediately.5.At last he found it was just a d
2、aydream.B Hearing a terrible noise,Tom,a seven-year-old boy who was watching TV in the living room,rushed out immediately,only to find it was a daydream.如何使书面表达如何使书面表达 显出文采显出文采 展示个性展示个性 亮而出众亮而出众Tips to make some beautiful sentences Try to use advanced words （高级词汇)Try to use different sentence struct
3、ure or complicated structure (不同/复杂句式)Try to use complex sentences （复合句）Try to use proper transitional words (过渡词)Try to use advanced wordsE.g.:in the endeventually1.Richards wife came back home after the advanced training，feeling very tired.exhausted2.The map is good for all the visitors.be benefic
4、ial to3.The students should be here before 8 oclock every day.be supposed/expected toTry to use different sentence structure or complicated structure1.They sang and laughed as they went back home.(用用-ing 形式形式)2.The teacher walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(用用-ed形式形式)3.I passed th
5、e English exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气用虚拟语气)4.You can improve your English only in this way.(用倒装句用倒装句)They went back home,singing and laughing.the teacher walked out of the lab.Followed by many students,But for your help,I wouldnt have passed the English exam.Only in this way can you improve you
6、r English.Try to use complex sentences E.g.：1.The little boy knows so many things.2.It surprises the man.1.Sothat(结果状语从句)The little boy knows so many things that the man feels surprised.2.Noun Clause（名词性从句）_ surprises the man is _ the little boy knows so many things.3.Attr.Clause（定语从句）（定语从句）The litt
7、le boy knows so many things,_ surprises him.WhatthatwhichTry to use proper transitional words 1.表示顺序：首先表示顺序：首先然后然后最后最后 2.表示递进：况且表示递进：况且/再者再者 3.表示对比：一方面表示对比：一方面另一方面另一方面4.表示并列表示并列/选择：既选择：既.又；要么又；要么.要么；既不要么；既不也不；不但也不；不但而且而且 first，then，finally,etc.besides,whats more,in addition，etc.bothand，eitheror,neit
8、hernor，not onlybut also,etc.on the one hand，on the other hand，etc.I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks.We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life.On the Internet,we can read news and get much information.We can send E-mails or make phone calls to
9、our family.We can attend the net school,read many books and even teach ourselves English.In my opinionrather thanAs we all know is playing a more and more important roleUse better phrases to replace the common ones.Practice Improve the passagenot only but also Besides,we半开放式作文半开放式作文【写作指导写作指导】半开放式作文是
10、近年来高考英语学科书面表达半开放式作文是近年来高考英语学科书面表达的一个趋势。所谓的一个趋势。所谓“半开放半开放”是指试题是指试题给出部分要给出部分要点，考生自己再增加一些要点点，考生自己再增加一些要点。考生考生不仅要精确地不仅要精确地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，不，不可以随意发挥，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，可以随意发挥，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。How to write a good composition？1.main points in a com
11、position 2.tips to make your composition better than others 3.good handwriting书面表达（满分35分）-2011四川卷 最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1.你校开展课外活动的情况；2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议；4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议；注意：1.词数100 左右；2.文中不得提及具体人名,校名及地名；3.稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）After-
12、class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.5.Para1Para2Para3Discuss the following with your partner 1.What after-class activities are there in your school?2.What after-class activities do you like most?Why?(maybe three reasons are OK)3.what su
13、ggestions do you give to students about after-class activities?What about schools?4.What else do you want to say to make students take an active in after-class activities?Combine the answers into paragraph1 1.What after-class activities are there in your school?2.What after-class activities do you l
14、ike most?Why?(maybe three reasons are OK)Para1 Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our schools,there are all kinds of after-class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.I like playing football and reading stories most.They are
15、 good for me.They build my body.They enrich my knowledge.They free me from the heavy work of study.Combine the answers into paragraph2 3.what suggestions do you give to students about after-class activities?What about schools?Para2 Here I have some suggestions.To students,youd better choose the acti
16、vities.They interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities when they give students less homework.Combine the answers into paragraph3 4.What else do you want to say to make students take an active in after-class activ
17、ities?Para3 Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities.They will make your school life colorful.They will improve your learning.A Composition From a Student Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our schools,there are all kinds of
18、after-class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.I like playing football and reading stories most.They are good for me.They build my body.They enrich my knowledge.They free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions.To students,youd better choose the activ
19、ities.They interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities when they give students less homework.Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities.They will make your school life colorful.They will impr
20、ove your learning.A Composition From a Student Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our schools,there are all kinds of after-class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.I like playing football and reading stories most.They are
21、 good for me.They build my body.They enrich my knowledge.They free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions.To students,youd better choose the activities.They interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for a
22、ctivities by giving them less homework.Dear friends,please actively take part in after-class activities.They will make your school life colorful.They will improve your learning.Replacement .Combination+;+;+;+One Possible Version Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in h
23、igh schools.In our schools,there are various kinds of after-class activities,for example,arts and sports.We enjoy them very much.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge,they also free me from the heavy work of
24、 study.Here I have some suggestions.To students,youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you;To schools,they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.Dear friends,please actively take part in after-clas
25、s activities,which will not only make your school life colorful,but also improve your learning.Good writing is necessary compare two passages and tell which is better Summary Tips to make some beautiful sentencesn advanced wordsn different sentence structure or complicated structuren complex sentenc
26、esn use proper transitional words How to write a good compositionn main points in a compositionn tips to make your composition better than othersn good handwritingHomework 假设你是某校高三（1）班学生李华，将参加学校举行的主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列提示用英语撰写一份演讲稿，并呼吁同学们过低碳生活。1.汽车带来的问题（两个方面）2.骑自行车的益处（两个方面）注意：1.词数120词左右；2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇；低碳生活 low-carbon life Good morning,everyone.I am Li Hua from Class 1,Senior 3.The topic of my speech is Lets Ride Bicycles.Thank you for listening!Proverbs Rome is not built in one day.Practice makes perfect.
