1、祝贺信祝贺信 一、一、 写作架构要规范写作架构要规范 应用文写作常见应用文写作常见 8 大文体大文体(六六) 祝贺信祝贺信 祝贺信是一种向收信人表示祝贺的信件，一般用于对收信祝贺信是一种向收信人表示祝贺的信件，一般用于对收信 人有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩，如婚姻、节日、寿诞、毕业人有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩，如婚姻、节日、寿诞、毕业 等的祝贺。具体写作结构为：等的祝贺。具体写作结构为： 二、二、 靓点句式背一番靓点句式背一番 (一一)开头常用语开头常用语 1I want to congratulate you with all my heart. 我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。我想向你致以最诚挚的
2、祝贺。 2Congratulations on your winning first prize in the . contest. 祝贺你在祝贺你在比赛中获得一等奖。比赛中获得一等奖。 3You dont know how excited and happy we felt at the news of .We are proud of your achievement. 得知得知的消息，你不知道我们有多激动、多开心。我们的消息，你不知道我们有多激动、多开心。我们 为你取得的成就而自豪！为你取得的成就而自豪！ (二二)主体部分常用语主体部分常用语 1I have been watching
3、your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in. 这些年来，我一直钦佩地注视着你的进步，我比任何人都这些年来，我一直钦佩地注视着你的进步，我比任何人都 知道你付出了多大的努力。知道你付出了多大的努力。 2I am delighted that the three years of your effort has been rewarded in this way. 我很高兴你三年的努力得到了这样的回报。我很高兴你三年的努力得
4、到了这样的回报。 3It is obvious that you will have a promising future. 很显然，你将会有一个充满希望的未来。很显然，你将会有一个充满希望的未来。 (三三)结尾常用语结尾常用语 1Wish you good luck and success in the coming . 祝你在接下来的祝你在接下来的中有好运并取得成功。中有好运并取得成功。 2I hope you can make every effort to realize your dream. 我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。 三、三、 润色完善很关键
5、润色完善很关键 (2018 潍坊三模潍坊三模)假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友 Tom 通通 过了来华支教的申请，将于今年七月到边远地区教学。请根据过了来华支教的申请，将于今年七月到边远地区教学。请根据 下面的提示给他写一封祝贺信：下面的提示给他写一封祝贺信： 1表示祝贺；表示祝贺； 2分析可能遇到的挑战；分析可能遇到的挑战； 3告知提前了解当地的风俗习惯。告知提前了解当地的风俗习惯。 注意：注意：1.词数词数 100 左右；左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 (一一)准审题、准表达保基本分准审题、准表达保基本分 开头：祝贺事
6、由开头：祝贺事由(通过了来华支教申请通过了来华支教申请) 主体：面临的挑战主体：面临的挑战(天气、学生基础、与人交流天气、学生基础、与人交流) 结尾：个人建议结尾：个人建议(了解当地风俗了解当地风俗)；表达祝愿；表达祝愿 定要点定要点 定结构定结构 一般现在时和一般将来时为主一般现在时和一般将来时为主 定时态定时态 第二人称为主第二人称为主 定人称定人称 祝贺信祝贺信 定体裁定体裁 中档作文中档作文 Dear Tom， Congratulations to you ！ You have passed your application to be a volunteer teacher for
7、rural areas .I m more than delighted to learn you will come to China this July.Im writing to tell you some relevant details. There is no doubt that you will face all kinds of challenges during this time.Firstly, the weather there is totally different from the weather of London.You must prepare for t
8、he changeable weather in the mountainous area.Secondly, children there are poor in English .You will have difficulty in communicating with each other . Besides, you should learn more about local customs and manners in advance.It will help you adapt to the new surroundings.You will be able to do your
9、 work better only when you are well prepared . Yours， Li Hua (二二)巧润色、大升级创高分巧润色、大升级创高分 (请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文) Dear Tom， (1) (合并句合并句为一个简单为一个简单 句句)Im more than delighted to learn you will come to China this July.Im writing to tell you some relevant details. Congratulations to you for havi
10、ng passed your application to be a volunteer teacher for rural areas There is no doubt that you will (2) (词汇升级词汇升级 (3) (词汇升级词汇升级) challenges during this time.Firstly, the weather there is totally different from (4) (词汇替换词汇替换) of London.You must (5) (词汇升级词汇升级) the changeable weather in the mountainou
11、s area.(6) . (合并句合并句，升级为状语从句，升级为状语从句) be faced with varieties of that make preparations for Secondly, children there are so poor in English that you will have difficulty in communicating with each other Besides, you (7) (词汇升级词汇升级) learn more about local customs and manners in advance, (8) (升级句升级句为定语
12、从句为定语从句). (9) (升级句升级句为倒装句为倒装句) Yours， Li Hua are supposed to which will help you adapt to the new surroundings Only when you are well prepared will you be able to do your work better 四、四、 “一题两用”错不犯“一题两用”错不犯 下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有 10 处语言错误，请改正。处语言错误，请改正。 Dear Tom， Congratula
13、tions for you! Im truly happy to learn that your application to be the volunteer teacher for rural areas has approved and youll come to China this July. Since this is your first visit to China, and I would like to list several things relating.First, prepare for the changeable weather in the mountain
14、 area.Second, children there were poor in English.Third, you might not be accustomed to the local diet. In addition, dont forget to learn about local customs and manner in advance, what will help you fit in with the new surroundings.Only when you are well prepared will you be able to do your work good. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 答案：答案：第一句：第一句：forto 第二句：第二句：thea; has 后加后加 been 第三句：去掉第三句：去掉 and; relatingrelated 第四句：第四句：mountainmountainous 第五句：第五句：wereare 第七句：第七句：mannermanners; whatwhich 第八句：第八句：goodbetter
