1、英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 1 - 高考英语作文高分技巧大全：审题谋篇 目录目录 Part01 Part01 审题审题 Part02Part02 运用运用多变的多变的复杂句式复杂句式 Part03 Part03 高级词高级词江的应用江的应用 Part04 Part04 简单句的巧妙运用简单句的巧妙运用 Part01 审题 一、审题谋篇的讲解与训练与训练 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华, 你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣, 计划 明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件, 内容包括: 1. 表示欢迎; 2. 推荐他上哪所大学; 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注
2、意:1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 步骤一、审题立意 确定中心 体裁 建议信 时态 一般现在时和将来时 人称 I and you 结构 三段或四段 要点 1. 欢迎到中国学习 2. 推荐并介绍北京大学 3. 上学之前的准备工作 步骤二、结构清晰 层次分明 步骤三、巧用功能句 如何开头、如何结尾 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 2 - 功能句功能句开篇点题开篇点题 1. Im so glad that you will come to study in China. 2. You have asked me for my advice on the recomm
3、ended school and its my great honor to share my ideas. 功能句功能句希望与祝愿希望与祝愿 1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 2. These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for your study in China. 步骤四：组句成篇 Dear Jim, Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in y
4、our last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its
5、 Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese l
6、anguage environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours, Li Hua 二、综合提升训练 1.校学生会为了帮助大家学好电脑, 特邀广州大学计算机系王平教授在 9 月 15 日星期六下午两点来校 做讲座, 请根据下面所给的情景说明, 写一份书面的通
7、知, 通知日期是 9 月 11 号。 1. 事宜:关于计算机的用途以及如何利用 Internet 网络进行学习的讲座; 2. 讲座人:广州大学计算机系王平教授; 3. 地点:图书馆三楼; 4. 参加对象:电脑爱好者; 5. 要求:参加者准备一些自己在学习过程中遇到的问题。 注意:1. 词数 80 左右; 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 3 - 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 2.一家英语报社向中学生征文, 主题是“十年后的我”, 请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1. 家庭;2. 工作;3. 业余生活。 注意:1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增
8、加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【参考范文】1 Notice To help students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang Ping from the Computer Department of Guangzhou University to give us a lecture on Saturday, the fifteenth of
9、September. Professor Wang will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet. The lecture begins at 2:00pm on the third floor of the Library Building. Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 4 - your questions in computer learning, whic
10、h will be answered by Professor Wang after the lecture. Dont forget to be on time. The Students Union Sept. 11th 【参考范文】2 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family,
11、probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games
12、. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. Part02 运用多变的复杂句式 一、常见复杂句式归纳与训练常见复杂句式归纳与训练 1. 句子形式多样化: 根据表达的需求, 可以采用多种句式, 这样既能恰当表达, 又能避免形式单一 经典例子： The snakes were so frightening that we were frightened . (so.that.句型) There is no doubt that i
13、t is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. (同位语从句) 小试牛刀： In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes our environment more and more colorful. , our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with 复合结构) Nowadays, who start to protect o
14、ur environment that our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (there be 句式) If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. (并列句) 2. 使用非谓语动词形式 经典例子： 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 5 - After learning it, I m sure Ill have a better understanding of the differences and similarities between Chinese culture a
15、nd Western culture. On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. 小试牛刀： She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词) She walked out of the lab, . . They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词) They went back
16、to school, . . 3. 运用定语从句 经典例子： Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance with
17、more friends with the same interest. 小试牛刀： Youd better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, (使你容易通过这门课). Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, (从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识). I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street
18、near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, (其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen. 4. 巧用倒装句 经典例子： Not only will our clubs works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Not only did you help i
19、mprove my English, but you also gave me more confidence in learning. Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. 小试牛刀： Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (倒装) Ill make the effort. 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 6 - He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装) than he
20、was sent abroad. 5. 恰当使用强调句 经典例子： It is you who taught me how to learn English well. It was on Friday that our activity began. 小试牛刀： He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句) he had read the news in the newspaper he knew what had happened. working in teams
21、instead of on my own has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. 6. 运用各种名词性从句 经典例子： If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. 小试牛刀： To his surprise, t
22、he little girl knows so many things. (主语从句) is that the little girl knows so many things. I have just found (我那天下午得参加一个重要会议). 7. with or without 结构 经典例子： Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions
23、 enjoy great popularity. Without any hesitation, we began to work. 小试牛刀： As an old saying goes, living (没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass. I cant thank you enough for your generous help, (没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步). 8. 巧用副词 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 7 - 经典例子： I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. I
24、genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us. 小试牛刀： She (仔细地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them. We were (完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment. 9. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受 经典例子： If you have further questions, please f
25、eel free to let me know. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast. 小试牛刀： I wonder (你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework. What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, (请尽快告诉我). 二、综合提升训练 根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级句式的应用。 假定你是李华, 你校的交换生 Tom 对中
26、国的民间艺术很感兴趣, 本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”, 请你写一封电子邮件, 邀请 Tom 去体验编织艺术。 Dear Tom, (来好消息了). The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, its a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us. The activity is scheduled to last approximately two hours, f
27、rom 3:30 pm to 5:30 pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content. (我们不仅能够看到许多吸引人的编织艺术作 品, 从桌椅到各种装饰品不一而足), but also well watch the documentary (有关的) the history of the weaving art. 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 8 - In addition, (一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver a lecture about (如何促进编织艺术的发展), (在这期间你 定
28、会对它有更好的了解). By the way, if you are available, well meet at three outside the school gate. (我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)! Your timely reply will be highly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 答案答案 一、常见复杂句式归纳与训练常见复杂句式归纳与训练 1. 句子形式多样化 小试牛刀： In recent years, more and more people start to protect our environment, which makes
29、 our environment more and more colorful. In recent years, with more and more people starting to protect our environment, our environment is becoming more and more colorful. (with 复合结构) Nowadays, there are so many people who start to protect our environment that our environment is becoming more and m
30、ore colorful. (there be 句式) If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. Study hard and you will make rapid progress. . (并列句) 2. 使用非谓语动词形式 小试牛刀： She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词) She walked out of the lab, followed by many students. . They sang and laughed as they
31、 went back to school. (非谓语动词) They went back to school, singing and laughing. . 3. 运用定语从句 小试牛刀： Youd better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课). 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 9 - Besides, t
32、here will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识). I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the oth
33、er two are bathroom and kitchen. 4. 巧用倒装句 小试牛刀： Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (倒装) Weak as/though I am, Ill make the effort. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装) No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. 5. 恰当使用强调句 小试牛刀： He did not know
34、what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. 6.运用各种名词性从句 小试牛刀： To his surprise, the
35、 little girl knows so many things. (主语从句) What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要 会议). 7. with or without 结构 小试牛刀： As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达
36、到的目标) is like sailing without a compass. I cant thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldnt have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步). 8. 巧用副词 小试牛刀： She patiently(仔细地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them. 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 10 - We wer
37、e perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment. 9. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受 小试牛刀： I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework. What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as possible(请尽快告诉 我). 二、综合提升
38、训练 根据所给信息补全短文, 并注意高级句式的应用。 假定你是李华, 你校的交换生 Tom 对中国的民间艺术很感兴趣, 本周五学校将要举办“校园文化节”, 请你写一封电子邮件, 邀请 Tom 去体验编织艺术。 Dear Tom, Here comes a piece of good news(来好消息了). The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday. Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art, its a great pleasure for me to invi
39、te you to join us. The activity is scheduled to last approximately two hours, from 3:30 pm to 5:30 pm in the school hall. It covers a wide variety of content. Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations(我们不仅能够看到许多吸引人的编织艺术作品, 从桌椅到各
40、 种装饰品不一而足), but also well watch the documentary concerning(有关的) the history of the weaving art. In addition, some distinguished professors(一些著名教授)will be invited to deliver a lecture about how to promote the development of the weaving art(如何促进编织艺术的发展), during which time you will definitely gain a be
41、tter understanding of it(在这期间你定会对它有更好的了解). By the way, if you are available, well meet at three outside the school gate. How I hope you can take my invitation into consideration(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)! Your timely reply will be highly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 英语写作宝典英语写作宝典 - 11 - Part03 高级词江的应用 一、常见高级词汇
42、归纳与训练 1.高级词汇替换常用简单词 (1)动词变身 简单词汇 高级词汇 come on the way, approach, around the corner, up-coming help do sb. a favor, go/come to ones aid, with the assistance of, give sb. a hand like be fond of, fall in love with, have an affection for，have a passion for improve polish up, promote, enhance, strengthen
43、 make enable, allow never give up insist on doing, stick to it , persist in, adhere to say, believe, think figure, hold the view that, assume that, I am convinced that should be supposed to do, It is wise/sensible/ makes sense to do, nothing could be better than. . . , Its worthwhile to do, deserve doing, find it rewarding and enjoyable to do. . . thank appreciate, be grateful to, convey my gratitude to u
