1、为什么考读后续写？读后续写属于综合性语言测试题，是一个集阅读与写作于一体的考查综合语言运用能力的题型。从某种程度上说，读后续写是英语写作的“集大成者”，涵盖了阅读、分析、创造与写作。实际上，原文本为考生提供了正确使用语言的、可供借鉴的模板，让考生在与阅读文本互动的过程中发挥想象力并创造性地模仿和使用语言，达到培养学生创新思维能力。读后续写文本故事大意 主人公遇到问题/需求-解决问题-主人公实现了自我成长，完美结局（升华感悟）简称为需求法（NDSD）N:Needs即故事中的需求 D:Difficulty故事中的困难或障碍 S:Solution解决方案或行动路径 D:Denouement：结局（故
2、事需求解决了）The final part of a play,film or a narrative in which the strands of the plot are drawn together and matters are explained or resolved.动作描写读后续写之简单有效的四个微技能简单有效的四个微技能 基础技能：1.运用具体动词替代 笼统动词 2.运用恰当短语替代普通动词中阶技能：3.增加修饰成分 4.构造动作链 如何使动作描写更饱满？如何使动作描写更饱满？感知感知:结合语境结合语境,如何优化表达？如何优化表达？1.Because of his lies
3、,she looked at him.Because of his lies,she at him.2 With only twenty seconds left,I ran to the line.With only twenty seconds left,I to the line.3.With only two minutes left,he ate his meal.With only two minutes left.He up his meal.4.She heard her mother say quietly as she walked down the hall,Dont w
4、ake your dad up.She heard her mother as she down the hall,Dont wake your dad up.glaredrush/dashed swallowed whisperedtiptoedSkill 1：Choose Accurate Verbs用精准动词代替笼统动词用精准动词代替笼统动词general words（笼统词）（笼统词）concrete words(具体词）具体词）walk run look say/talk cry eat general words（笼统词）（笼统词）concrete words(具体词）具体词）wa
5、lk (蹑手蹑脚地走蹑手蹑脚地走)run (猛冲猛冲)look (瞥见瞥见)(怒视怒视)(凝视凝视)say/talk (闲聊闲聊)(耳语耳语)cry （啜泣啜泣)eat (咬咬)（咀嚼咀嚼)(吞下吞下)tiptoedash/rush glance glarestare chatwhisper weep/sobbite swallowchew start/begin decide cry remember tired see attract get down to doingmake up ones mindburst into tearskeep in mindworn outcatch si
6、ght ofappeal toSkill 2：Choose proper phrases用恰当短语代替普通动词用恰当短语代替普通动词l The fierce wolf stared at Mac with its _ teeth.l _ (adv),he jumped off the bicycle and dashed into the car.l As the hungry wolf was almost reaching him,Macs eyes were wide open _.(in/with+名词)in fear/panic/horror/shocksharp/bloody/fr
7、ightening/scary/terribleImmediately/Instantly/Hurriedly/Breathlessly Skill 3：探究添加介词短语添加介词短语/副词修饰动作副词修饰动作Skill 4：分解动作，形成动作链分解动作，形成动作链Action chains把动作过程分解成一连串的动作，构造动作链，让你的动作描写既丰富又生动！拥抱拥抱hug/embrace冲向前跳起来一把抱住思考：思考：Which picture is more vivid?感知一把抱住she dashed forward,jumped up and hugged the boy tightly
8、.拥抱 hug冲向前跳起来1.连续的动作，直接用连续的动作，直接用并列谓语并列谓语表达。表达。Sentence pattern 1：Sb.谓语 A,谓语B and 谓语 C动作链ACTION CHAINS More examples冲向湖边冲向湖边脱掉衣服脱掉衣服跳入水中跳入水中+=孩子们跳入孩子们跳入湖中嬉戏湖中嬉戏rushed to the laketook off their clothesjumped into the waterThe boys rushed excitedly to the lake,took off their clothes and jumped into th
9、e water.孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。思考：跳入湖前有哪些动作思考：跳入湖前有哪些动作I put on my coat hurriedly,grabbed my bag and rushed to school this morning.我早上匆忙去上学。我早上匆忙去上学。思考：匆忙上学前有哪些动作思考：匆忙上学前有哪些动作穿外套穿外套抓起书包抓起书包冲去学校冲去学校+=匆忙去上学匆忙去上学put on my coatgrabbed my bagrushed to school动作链动作链ACTION CHAINS动作链 句型1
10、 PracticeI anxiously glanced at the audience,took a deep breath and began to sing.我在台上开始唱歌 扫视观众扫视观众 紧紧抱住Wife walked forward,bent down and hugged the husband tightly.妻子拥抱躺在病床上的丈夫 走上前弯下腰深吸一口气深吸一口气 开始演唱开始演唱动作链 看到戒指后，妻子感到很震惊。Seeing the ring,she felt shocked.句型2 Doing/Having done,句子2.同时发生的动作，可以用同时发生的动作，可
11、以用现在分词作状语现在分词作状语表达。表达。我父亲拍拍我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃我的梦想。我父亲拍拍我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃我的梦想。My father patted me on the shoulder,encouraging me never to give up my dreams.摔门摔门slam the door手抖手抖转转头头struggle to ones feetthrow oneself into ones arms心心激动得直跳激动得直跳咆哮咆哮用尽全力奔跑用尽全力奔跑run with all ones strengthhowlpound with excitemen
12、t投入某人的怀抱投入某人的怀抱挣扎着站起来挣扎着站起来turn ones head aroundones hands tremble tears well up inside ones eyes 眼含泪水眼含泪水冲进冲进dash into结尾升华结尾升华本专题包括：本专题包括：（一）成长型主旨句（一）成长型主旨句（二）助人型主旨句（二）助人型主旨句（三）脱险型主旨句（三）脱险型主旨句 （四）引用名言结尾（四）引用名言结尾 一、成长型主旨句一、成长型主旨句 功能：成长是读后续写的一个重要主题，包括学习学习知识、克服困难、追逐梦知识、克服困难、追逐梦想战胜自我想战胜自我等子主题。宝藏金句宝藏金句
13、追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】take full advantage of 充分利用，realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”1.活到老学到老 Its never too late to learn.2.克服困难 overcome all the difficulties 3.完成目标accomplish your goal 4.实现梦想realize your dreams 5.追逐梦想 pursue ones dream 6.创造奇迹create miracles 7.充分利用take
14、 full advantage of 8.做出努力make every effort 9.只要as long as 10.克服恐惧conquer fear二、助人型主旨句二、助人型主旨句 功能：帮助别人或受到帮助，一直以来是我们读后续写的一个重要主题。句型一句型一：from then on+行动。行动。我们先看例句：From then on,I would try my best to help sb like sb.从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力帮助某些人，就像某人一样。Only in this way,could more and more people help each other in
15、 the future.只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。从这个句型的内涵上看：自己被别人帮助后，主动把这种助人的行为进行“传递”，即：去积极帮助他人。这种精神的升华具有正能量，是值得鼓励的。从句式结构来看，该句用到了倒装，属于高分亮点句。这个“动作”可以是：看到了某情景，或者拿着一样东西。“感动”很好理解，别人帮助了自己，产生的情绪就是“感动”，最常见的就是“眼泪往下流”。“感悟”这一句，往往是“爱”“善行”“付出”等关键字的励志句。三、脱险型主旨句三、脱险型主旨句功能：在往年高考真题中，出现过三次脱险型故事：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾
16、，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。语料库积累语料库积累：1.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.2.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。Finally,we went out of the forest that trapped us.What an unforg
17、ettable experience!It turns out that theres always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.四、名言式结尾四、名言式结尾 使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采，同时也能起到凝炼中心，深化主旨的作用 It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.（越是在最黑暗的时刻，我们越要寻找光明。）这则名言通过前后反复概念的对比，突出光明的重要性，引申为在困境中保持积极乐观的生活态度，可以用于主要人物经历重大坎坷，最后凭借乐观心态度过艰难岁月的文章。Thank you!
