1、求助信假定你是某校高中生李华，在最近几次英语考试中，写作部分得分较低。请给你的英国笔友Jim写封邮件，寻求他的帮助。要点如下：1.自己的困难和困惑；2.希望得到帮助书信类型：书信类型：主题：主题：对象：对象：人称：人称：时态：时态：要点：要点：求助信希望英国笔友Jim帮助解决写作难题英国笔友注意语气第一、二人称一般现在时为主结合书信结构三段式假定你是某校高中生李华，在最近几次英语考试中，写作部分得分较低。请给你的英国笔友Jim写封邮件，寻求他的帮助。要点如下：1.自己的困难和困惑；2.希望得到帮助Para 1Para 2Para 3写作背景+写作目的求助原因+具体内容表达感谢+期待回复1.请某
2、人帮忙请某人帮忙2.遇到一些困难遇到一些困难3.付出巨大努力付出巨大努力4.进展甚微进展甚微5.更糟糕的是更糟糕的是6.做某事有困难做某事有困难7.伸出援手伸出援手8.迅速的答复迅速的答复9.尽早尽早10.感谢感谢1.请某人帮忙请某人帮忙2.遇到一些困难遇到一些困难3.付出巨大努力付出巨大努力4.进展甚微进展甚微5.更糟糕的是更糟糕的是6.做某事有困难做某事有困难7.伸出援手伸出援手stretch out your helping hand8.迅速的答复迅速的答复9.尽早尽早at your earliest convenience10.感谢感谢be grateful to sb.for sth
3、.appreciate vt.Para 1假定你是某校高中生李华，在最近几次英语考试中，写作部分得分较低。请给你的英国笔友Jim写封邮件，寻求他的帮助。要点如下：1.自己的困难和困惑；2.希望得到帮助因为我最近几次写作分都很低(get low scores)，所以我写信向你求助。Im writing.因为我最近几次写作分都很低(get low scores)，所以我写信向你求助。I got low scores in writing recently,so Im writing to ask for your help.花式表达:low scores in writing recently 句
4、型1:非谓作状，主句+if宾语从句假如你是李华，乘坐国泰航空(Cathay Pacific Airways)的KA721航班从长沙飞往波士顿Boston以后，你发现你的行李(suitcase)丢失了。请给国泰航空写一封信说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：（1）行程信息；（2）行李箱特征；（3）联系方式。HavingHaving lostlost mymy suitcase,suitcase,Im Im writing to see if you could do writing to see if you could do me a favor.me a favor.句型1:升级 假定你是李华。你
5、的英语老师建议你们阅读一些合适的英文书籍以提高英语阅读能力。请你给你的笔友Tom发一封邮件，请他推荐相关书目，内容如下：1.写邮件的理由；2.你喜欢的书籍及原因和你的英语水平。被建议读一些英文书，我写信来请你推荐一些好书。Im writing to see if you Im sorry to,but I have some problems and Im writing to.句型2:Im sorry to,but I have some problems and.句型2:句型1:Para 21.自己的困难和困惑 我的困难：在哪方面扣分了？（拼写/语法表达/内容我的困惑？努力却徒劳无功2.希
6、望得到帮助努力却徒劳无功。普通版：I tried very hard but still got low scores.升级：To improve my writing skills,I have been making great efforts.Unfortunately,little progress has been made.句型:人间不值得have difficulty in doing sth.have no idea about doing sth.find it hard to do sth.“我太难了”短语：Could you be so kind as to help m
7、e with sth.I am wondering if it would be possible for you to offer me some help.“救救孩子吧”Para 3Looking forward to your reply.Thank you!萌新版大神版I would be so grateful if you could stretch out your helping hand.A prompt reply(即刻回复即刻回复)at your earliest convenience would be highly appreciated.亮点句1 I am writ
8、ing to ask for your help.I am writing to ask for your help.Im writing to ask a favour from you.assistance.ask a favour from you.I hope to get your help.亮点句1求助原因？Because I have met some problems with ,Im writing to ask a favour from you.Having met some problems with.,Im writing to ask a favour from y
9、ou.metencounteredwithconcerningI hope to get your help.亮点句1Having encountered some problems concerning,Im writing to ask a favour from you.In the face of亮点句2 I am writing to report the loss of my wallet,and hope to get your help.get your help.obtain kind assistance from you.hoping to/in the hope ofI
10、 want to find my wallet亮点句2Im writing to report the loss of my wallet,hoping to obtain kind assistance from you.亮点句3如何表达有困难？I am encountering great difficulty in I find it extremely challenging to I cant concentrate on study.亮点句3如何表达专注学习？concentrate on study dedicate myself to study study attentivel
11、y without being distractedI cant concentrate on study.亮点句3 I am encountering great difficulty in dedicating myself to study.I find it extremely challenging to study attentively without being distracted.I cant concentrate on study.亮点句3有何后果？It troubles me a lot.It reduces my learning efficiency.reduce
12、simpairsI cant concentrate on study.亮点句3 I am encountering great difficulty in dedicating myself to study,which troubles me a lot.I find it extremely challenging to study attentively without being distracted,which impairs my learning efficiency.亮点句4Meeting my parents expectations is difficult.Living
13、 up to my parents expectations is an exacting task.MeetingSatisfyingLiving up todifficult.tough.an exacting task.My parents expect too much from me.亮点句4有何后果？It gives me lots of mental pressure.It troubles me a lot.put sb.under pressureMy parents expect too much from me.亮点句4 Living up to my parents e
14、xpectations is an exacting task,putting me under great mental pressure.What troubles me a lot is to live up to my parents high expectations.亮点句5如何表达没有？I hardly have time to relax myself.Hardly do I have time to relax myself.HardlyScarcelyto relax myself.for entertainment.I dont have time to relax my
15、self.亮点句5为何没时间？Because I have too many assignments,scarcely do I have time for entertainment.With too many assignments to do,With my life fully occupied with various assignments,I dont have time to relax myself.亮点句5With my life fully occupied with various assignments,scarcely do I have time for ente
16、rtainment.亮点句6如何表达迫切？I am eager to change I am anxious to overcome my fear ofI am anxious to overcome my fear of talking with people.I feel shy to talk with people,and I want to change.亮点句6如何表达内向？too introvert to communicate with others too introvert to initiate conversations with others I am anxiou
17、s to overcome my fear of initiating conversations with others.I feel shy to talk with people,and I want to change.亮点句6I am eager to overcome my fear of initiating conversations with others.亮点句7 My wallet was gone when I arrived at Heathrow Airport yesterday.I found my wallet lost upon my arrival at
18、Heathrow Airport yesterday.when I arrived atupon my arrival atMy wallet was gone when I arrived at Heathrow Airport yesterday.亮点句7一到希思罗机场我就发现我的钱包不见了，肯定是我在飞机上从口袋里拿纸巾的时候，不小心掉出来了。I found my wallet lost upon my arrival at Heathrow Airport yesterday,which I guess may result from my carelessness when taki
19、ng tissues out of my pocket during the flight.中英丢失原因？My wallet was gone when I arrived at Heathrow Airport yesterday.亮点句7I found my wallet lost upon my arrival at Heathrow Airport yesterday,which I guess may result from my carelessness when taking tissues out of my pocket during the flight.亮点句8如何使语气
20、委婉？I wonder if you could help me.需要何种帮助？I wonder if you could offer me some advice onconstructiveCould you help me?亮点句8面临以上问题，我希望您能给我提供一些关于提升专注力的建议。Faced with the above problems,I wonder if you could offer me some constructive advice on improving concentration.Faced with the above problems,I wonder
21、if you could kindly offer me some constructive advice concerning boosting concentration.中英英In the face ofCould you help me?亮点句8In the face of the above problems,I wonder if you could kindly offer me some constructive advice concerning boosting concentration.亮点句9如何表达感谢？I would appreciate it if you co
22、uld give me some suggestions.I would appreciate it if you could help me out by offering me some corresponding suggestions.Thank you so much for your help.I would be obliged if亮点句9I would be obliged if you could help me out by offering me some corresponding suggestions.What do you find?What do you fi
23、nd?Level 1Level 2 I hope to get your help.I want to find my wallet.Having encountered some problems concerning,Im writing to ask a favour from you.Im writing to report the loss of ,hoping to obtain kind assistance from you.What do you find?Level 1Level 2 I cant concentrate on study.I am encountering
24、 great difficulty in dedicating myself to study,which troubles me a lot.I find it extremely challenging to study attentively without being distracted,which impairs my learning efficiency.What do you find?Level 1Level 2 My parents expect too much from me.Living up to my parents expectations is an exa
25、cting task,putting me under great mental pressure.What troubles me a lot is to live up to my parents high expectations.What do you find?Level 1Level 2 I dont have time to relax myself.I feel shy to talk with people,and I want to change.With my life fully occupied with various assignments,scarcely do
26、 I have time for entertainment.I am eager to overcome my fear of initiating conversations with others.What do you find?Level 1Level 2 My wallet was gone when I arrived at Heathrow Airport yesterday.I found.lost upon my arrival at.,which I guess may result from my carelessness when taking tissues out
27、 of my pocket during the flight.What do you find?Level 1Level 2 Could you help me?In the face of the above problems,I wonder if you could kindly offer me some constructive advice concerning boosting concentration.What do you find?Level 1Level 2 Thank you so much for your help.I would be obliged if y
28、ou could help me out by offering me some corresponding suggestions.锤炼词汇ask for your helpask for your assistanceask a favour from youmeet problems withencounter problems concerningget your helpobtain kind assistance from you010203锤炼词汇concentrate ondedicate oneself to doingmeet ones expectationslive u
29、p to ones expectationsbe difficultbe an exacting task040506do sth.attentively without being distracted锤炼词汇give sb.pressure put sb.under pressure be shy to talk to sb.be too introvert to initiate conversations with sb.improve concentrationboost concentration070809锤炼句式I have met some problems with ada
30、pting a play from textbook.I hope you could help me with it._ some difficulty in adapting a play from textbook,I am writing _.01Having encountered some difficulty in adapting a play from textbook,I am writing to ask a favour from you.锤炼句式The adaption from textbook is quite a challenge because we are
31、 uncertain about the plot.Uncertain about the plot,_ to adapt from textbook.02Uncertain about the plot,we find it extremely challenging to adapt from textbook.锤炼句式I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports.With _,hardly _.03With too much time spent on the assi
32、gnments,hardly do I have time to take sports.锤炼句式The high expectations from the teachers and my parents make me extremely stressful.It troubles me a lot._ troubles me a lot is _ the high expectations from the teachers and the parents,_ makes me extremely stressful.04What troubles me a lot is to live
33、 up to the high expectations from the teachers and the parents,which makes me extremely stressful.锤炼句式My camera was gone when I arrived at home.I must have left it in the stadium._,I found my camera gone,_ I believe must have been left in the stadium because of _.05Upon my arrival at home,I found my camera gone,which I believe must have been left in the stadium because of my carelessness.满分句型满分句型满分句型满分句型满分句型
