1、写作课私人电子邮件UNIT 1LIFE CHOICES 课前准备：课本，导学案，过关条，红笔和黑笔1.junior 2.formal 3.informal 4.adapt 5.gym 6.moment7.presentation 8.slide 9.forward 10.adapt to sth.11.at the moment12.look forward to(doing)sth.1.adj.低年级的2.adj.正式的，官方的 3.adj.非正式的4.vi.（使）适应5.n.体育馆，健身房6.n.某一时刻 7.n.报告；陈述，说明 8.n.幻灯片 9.adv.向前；进展10.适应某事11.
2、此刻，目前，眼下 12.期待，盼望复习重点单词:(3mins)学习目标：1.通过学习例文，掌握电子邮件的结构及写作技巧。2.通过学习写作技巧，学会写电子邮件。1.Who are you going to write to?2.What do you want to tell him/her?3.What do you want to know from him/her?Now,lets read an email to talk about how to write a personal email.文体介绍私人电子邮件属于应用文。私人邮件是指亲朋好友或同事之间的来往邮件，写法与普通信件的写法
3、相似，主要包括称谓(salutation)、正文(body)、结束语(complimentary close)和签名(signature)四部分。Write an email Write an email ReceiverSubject line Body Dear Mrs Xu,How is everything going with you?I am writing to.I hope.I look forward to hearing from you as early as possible.All the best!XXX自学指导1：阅读邮件并回答下面的问题。1.Who is Fan
4、g Lan?Why is Wang Ying writing to her?2.How does Wang Ying feel about her new school?3.How many aspects does Wang mention about her school in her writing?4.Why does Wang Ying have to finish the email?Fang Lan is the writers friend.Reasons:a.to say hello;b.to share her new senior secondary school lif
5、e with Fang Lan;c.to ask about Fang Lans new school life.She loves her new senior secondary school.e.g.“I like the new me”.Three aspects are mentioned:school facilities;school students;school life,including classrooms,subjects,clubs and competitionsShes got a presentation tomorrow and she needs to f
6、inish her slides.自学检测1：()()()()()()()cbefdag a.ending and wishes b.greeting 问候 c.subject line标题 d.reasons to finish writing e.questions about the other person f.information about ones own life g.signature签名自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧1.写电子邮件的注意事项(1）明确对象定称呼：不同的对象可以使用不同的称呼，一般常用Dear，如果彼此是比较熟悉
7、的朋友，也可以用Hi(2）明确目的定内容：如果是回信，应仔细阅读来信，有针对性地子以回复。(3）明确内容定时态和人称。自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧2.正文篇章结构(1)首段：开门见山表明意图。在邮件的第一段就要表明写信的原因，以及收到信的开心之情。(2)主体段：陈述事由。主体部分需要有针对性地对来信内容进行回复。(3）结尾段：礼貌地提出自己的愿望或希望。第一段主要写:_;_ _ _ _ _ _简单的自我介绍,如：I am Li Hua,who is.直截了当表明写信意图，如：I am writing to ask.此次写信我想咨询一下 Im wr
8、iting to express.我写信是为了表达表示关心与询问,如：How are you doing these days?最近在忙什么How are you getting on these days?最近几天过得怎么样？How are you getting on with your work/studies?你的工作/学业如何？表示高兴,如：I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your email.我很高兴收到你的邮件。I am glad to hear that.我很高兴得知Im very pleased to tell you.我很乐意告
9、诉你Glad to receive your letter of 1 June.很高兴收到你六月一日的来信。表示感谢，如：Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting email.感谢你精美的礼物/有趣的邮件。I want to say thank you.我想对你说谢谢你表示歉意，如：Im sorry that.很抱歉Im sorry to learn that.很遗憾得知自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧第二段是信的主题部分，注意审题，明确写信主要内容，为了使要点分明，最好使用诸如此类的词：_;_;_;
10、_;_._Firstly/To start(begin)with/Fisrt of all,we should.自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧Secondly/Whats more/Besides,its a good habit to.此外，是个好习惯。Thirdly/In addition/Finally/In the end/Last but not the least,you should.最后，你应该最后，你应该I suggest you.我建议你我建议你Youd better.你最好你最好第三段是结束段落，这段可以展示同学们的高情商，你
11、可以向对方表达你的意愿，如_或结束书信的委婉理由，如_,或表达你真诚的邀请，如_,或表达你的热情耐心，如_;最后一定要以这句经典的句型结束你的书信_.自学指导2：理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧理解并识记写书信的基本要求和技巧I really hope my introduction is of great help to you.I must go to do my homework,so I have to finish.If possible,I would like to invite you to come to my school and experience my new sch
12、ool life If you want to know more,dont hesitate to contact me.I am looking forward to your early reply.温馨提示：温馨提示：1.1.考试考试必须用书面英语，不可以必须用书面英语，不可以hi,well,hellohi,well,hello等语言。等语言。2.2.如果你想拿作文高分，如果你想拿作文高分，漂亮的书写和排版漂亮的书写和排版是标配。是标配。3.3.课后要求课后要求背诵并默写背诵并默写以上内容。以上内容。自学检测2：根据上面所学，完成下面的典题演练。假定你是李华，你的好朋友Tom在升入高中
13、后感到学习压力很大。请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。内容包括：1快乐学习，轻松减压；2参加体育活动和听听音乐；3多与同学交流。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Dear Tom，_ All the best，Li Hua 典题演练you feel stressed about in a relaxing way make your study an easy job build up your body provides you with time exchange ideas with find it easier to memorise 当堂检测当堂检测Thank you!
