1、 第 03 周 范文范文11 安慰安慰考试失利考试失利的同学的同学 假设你叫李华，你的澳洲朋友Devin参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过，请你写一封信，安慰一下你的 朋友。内容包括： 1.对考试失利的安慰； 2.对汉语学习提出建议。 注意： 1.词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Devin, I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK._ _ _ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 语言学习是学生学校生活中最重要的活动之一，也是高考的命题热点。本话
2、题贴近高中生的生活实际， 而且具有一定的开放性，使得每个学生都能够有话可说。这符合高考的命题方向。 【必背范文】 Dear Devin, I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met. As we know, language learning is never an
3、easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think youd better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn fro
4、m the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, youve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese. Good luck next time. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 范文范文 12 安慰安慰中文交流中文交流有有困难困难的的美国美国朋友朋友 假定你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jack 来信，说他寒假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然 担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，鼓励其自信并给出几点建议，要点如下: 1. 大胆自信;2. 放慢语速
5、;3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。 参考词汇:自信的 confident 肢体语言 body language 注意: 1.信的格式已为你写好； 2.信中不得出现你的真实情况； 3.词数100左右。 Dear Jack, How is everything going ? Im glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. _ _ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 本文要求用英文给Jack写一封慰问信，鼓励Jack应该自信并给出几点建议。写作时可遵循以下几点：(1)确定 要点：得知他的情况，
6、表示鼓励，并给出合适建议，最后希望他取得成功；(2)扩展要点，丰富要点，将句 子补充完整；(3)连句成篇，将句子连成短文，打好草稿；(4)全面检查，检查草稿，修改拼写、标点符号错 误，修改人称、时态、句子结构逻辑错误。另外应考虑语篇的结构、句式的变化和词汇的丰富。 【必背范文】 Dear Jack, How is everything going? Im glad to learn that youre going to China this winter. You say youre worried about your Chinese if you are in China. Now le
7、t me give you some advice. First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. We Chinese are very friendly, so you dont be afraid to make any mistakes. Second, speak Chinese slowly and clearly when you talk to others. In this way, you can make yourself unders
8、tood easily. Finally, you can use pictures or drawings and body language. As you know, most of body language is in common in the world. I hope these suggestions will help you and may you succeed in learning Chinese. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 范文范文 13 安慰身患癌症的美国女孩安慰身患癌症的美国女孩 据报道，7 岁的美国女孩 Amy Bruce 得知自
9、己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌 协会(ACS)决定,每当 Amy 收到一封慰问信，就给她增加 3 美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给 Amy 写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 1.自我简介； 2.得知的情况； 3.表示鼓励； 4.打算为她做什么； 5.祝她早日康复。 注意: 1.信的格式已为你写好； 2.信中不得出现你的真实情况； 3.词数 100 左右。 Dear Amy, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 【思路点拨】 本文要求用英文给 Amy 写一封慰问信，鼓励 Amy 与病魔斗争。写作时可遵循以下几点：(1)确
10、定要点： 自我介绍，得知她的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，最后祝她早日康复；(2)扩展要点，丰富要点，将 句子补充完整；(3)连句成篇，将句子连成短文，打好草稿；(4)全面检查，检查草稿，修改拼写、标点符号 错误，修改人称、时态、句子结构逻辑错误。另外应考虑语篇的结构、句式的变化和词汇的丰富。 【必背范文】 Dear Amy, I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having
11、a lung cancer. At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, scho
12、olmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. Hope they will give you more courage to live on. May you recover soon. Yours, Li Hua 范文范文 14 安慰安慰英语学习有困难英语学习有困难的朋友的朋友 假定你是李华。你的笔友晓东是某学校一名高一学生。最近他来信说不知道如何学好高中英语，感到苦 恼。请你给他写一封回信，给以安慰并提出建议。 建议内容如下：1. 尽量用英语交流，不要怕犯错误；2. 坚持每天早晚朗读英语；3. 多读英文
13、报纸，看英 文电影。 注意： 1.词数100左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 【思路点拨】 本文属于提纲作文，内容是给晓东写一封回信，向晓东同情和慰问，并针对她的问题提出三点建议。写作 时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2.提纲是文章 的总体框架，要在提纲范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要根据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。 3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。 【必背范文】 Dear Xiao Dong, Im sorry you are havi
14、ng trouble in learning English in senior high school. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. Firstly, why not try to communicate with others in English? If you do so, you will feel confident gradually. Also, don t be afraid of making mistakes
15、because everyone makes mistakes. Secondly, you should keep on reading aloud English sentences every morning and evening. That way, youll learn many important expressions. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you read more English newspapers and watch English movies. I hope you will make great progres
16、s in English. Yours, Li Hua 范文范文 15 因故因故不能不能参加生日晚会参加生日晚会给朋友道歉给朋友道歉 假设你是李华，你本来计划周六下午要去参加好朋友Tom生日晚会，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要 点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 内容： 1.表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 祝福他生日快乐。 注意： 1. 词数120150；2. 可适当增加细节。 【思路点拨】 根据题目要求写一篇道歉信。文章分为三部分：首先说明自己的致歉的理由；第二部分解释原因；第三部 分再次表达歉意，并另约时间。 时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 人称以第一人称为主。 【必背范文】 Dear To
17、m, How is everything going with you? Im terribly sorry that Im not able to go to your birthday party this Saturday afternoon. Im in Beijing now because my mother is seriously ill and will have an operation here. She is in bad need of my care these days, so Im staying here to take care of her in the hospital. I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well with the party. By the way, I have sent you the latest CD of Xu Song. I hope youll like this birthday present. Im looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Hua
