1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、分享信：外语周活动（浙江强基联盟2023学年第一学期高一12月联考）假定你是李华，上周你校第十五届“外语周（Foreign Language Week）”活动结束。请你写信给英国笔友Kate，告知她该活动的相关信息，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动收获。注意：写作词数应为80左右。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山交代写作目的分享外语周活动；第二段介绍活动目的（要点1）、活动内容（要点2）和活动收获（要点3）；第三段期待对方分享。【参考范文】Dear Kate,I hope this letter finds
2、 you well.Last Friday witnessed the end of my schools 15th Foreign Language Week.I am writing to share it with you.Aiming to inspire students interest in English learning and improve their English communication skills, the Foreign Language Week had a wealth of activities, ranging from a speech conte
3、st and a dubbing competition, to a drama performance.The activity enabled me to learn through fun, exposing me to the beauty of the language and bringing me a feast for both eyes and ears.What about any activity in your school? Your sharing is highly expected.(101 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的凯特：见信好。上
4、周五，我校第十五届“外语周”活动落下帷幕。我写信和你分享一下这次活动。此次活动旨在激发学生的英语学习兴趣，提升他们的英语交际能力。活动形式多样，有英语演讲比赛、英语配音大赛、英语话剧表演等。这次活动寓教于乐，不仅让我们感受到语言之美，也带给我们一场视听盛宴。你们学校最近有啥活动？期待你的分享。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为分享信；（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为分享外语周活动，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）I hope this letter finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）witn
5、ess运用无灵主语结构；（3）inspire .and improve .运用头韵手法；（4）a wealth of丰富的；（5）ranging from .and .to .列举活动多样性时常用的结构；（6）learn through fun寓教于乐；（7）exposing sb to sth使某人接触/体验某事；（8）bring sb a feast for both eyes and ears给某人带来一场视听盛宴；（9）.is highly expected某事是高度期待的。二、投诉信：网上商城购买电子词典质量问题（湖南天壹名校联盟：五市十校教研教改共同体2024届高三12月大联考）假
6、定你是李华，上周你在国外某购物网站买了一台电子词典，发现质量有问题，跟店家沟通无果后，决定给商城的官方客服写一封邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.质量问题；3.你的诉求。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Customer Service,Yours Sincerely,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山提出写作目的：投诉网上商城购买的电子产品质量问题（要点1）；第二段描述具体质量问题（要点2）及诉求（要点3）；第三段期待回复。【参考范文】Dear Customer Service,I
7、m Li Hua, who bought an electronic dictionary in your online shopping mall last week.This shopping experience, however, turned out to be the worst experience I had ever met.I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with it.The electronic dictionary often went into automatic shutdown for no reason,
8、which brought great inconvenience to my use of the product.Worse still, far from satisfaction is the service of the store, refusing my exchange request and even ignoring my complaint.Therefore, a full refund is highly expected.Id appreciate it if you could take my appeal into consideration.Looking f
9、orward to your favorable reply.(104 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的客服：我是李华，上周在贵商城购买了一台电子词典。然而，此次购物经历却是我最糟糕的经历。我写信想要表达我对此的不满。这台字典经常无故自动关机，对我使用字典造成极大不便。更糟糕的是，店家服务态度很差，不但不予退换，且对我的申诉直接不理睬。因此，我希望能全额退款。希望您能认真考虑我的诉求。期待您的回复。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定本文为投诉信；（2）因对方是网上商城客服，故李华身份要交代；（3）因文本主体部分为投诉网上购买电子词典的质量问题，故本
10、文总体时态定调为一般过去时和一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）bring inconvenience to给某人带来不便；（2）worse still更糟的是；（3）far from satisfaction is表语置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（4）.is highly expected某事是高度期待的；（5）Id appreciate it if you could .如果.我将不胜感激；（6）take sth into consideration把某事考虑在内；（7）favorable reply肯定答复。三、建议信：美国“汉语桥”活动（2023届重庆市高三第一次联合诊断检测康德卷）假定你
11、是李华，美国“汉语桥（Chinese Bridge）”网上冬令营组织方正在网上征集活动内容，欢迎网友献计献策。请你给组织方写一封建议信，内容包括：1.你建议的活动（至少两项）；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear committee members,Im glad to know thatYours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山提出建议；第二段提出建议（要点1）并说明理由（要点2）；第三段表达希望（要点3）。【参考范文】Dear committee members,
12、Im glad to know that you are seeking for the events of Chinese Bridge online winter camp.Here comes my advice as a guideline.Music knows no borders.It always comes first to hold an instrument concert, in which students can play some familiar Chinese classical folk music, which can further stimulate
13、students interest in learning Chinese and help them feel the weight of history of traditional Chinese music.A Chinese story speech contest is also preferable, since there are a wealth of classic myths and legends in China.These activities, Im convinced, will definitely bring the students a cultural
14、feast.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.I hope the winter camp will be a great success! (118 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的组委会：听说你们正在征集“汉语桥”网上冬令营活动内容，我很高兴。我有一些建议供参考。音乐无国界。首先可以组织一场乐器演奏会，让同学们演奏一些耳熟能详的中国经典民乐，这可以进一步激发学生学习汉语的兴趣，帮助学生深入感受到中国传统音乐的历史厚重感。其次，中国有很多非常经典的神话传说，所
15、以可以开展一次中国故事演讲大赛。我相信，这些活动定会让学生寓教于乐，享受一场文化盛宴。希望你们能考虑我的建议。祝此次冬令营活动取得圆满成功！李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因文本开头已给出，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为提出并说明原因，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）Here comes my advice运用完全倒装结构；（2）Music knows no borders音乐无国界；（3）It always comes first to do sth首先要做某事；（4）stimulate ones interest in激发某人的兴趣；（5）feel the weight of history感受历史的厚重感；（6）.is also preferable也是更可取的；（7）a wealth of丰富多彩的，很多的；（8）Im convinced我相信，文中用作插入语；（9）definitely明确地；（10）bring sb a cultural feast带给某人一场文化盛宴；（11）I would appreciate it if如果.我将不胜感激；（12）take sth into consideration把某事考虑在内。4
