1、高考英语读后续写细节描写讲解练习一、对话描写对话描写公式in a +情绪形容词+ tone 用的语气“I would love to,” said Emily in a pleasant tone.“ I dont think so, ” replied Mark in an angry tone.形容词可以用：开心的happydelighted生气的angryfurious(狂怒的)难过的saddepressed害怕的frightened惊讶的surprisedshocked紧张的nervous骄傲的proud后悔的regretful焦虑的anxious兴奋的excited疑惑的puzzle
2、d失望的disappointedhopeless动词+副词 (通过副词可以让动作更加生动、形象) He answered happily,“Yes, you are right.”“Whats wrong with you?”I asked puzzledly.“Nothing!” replied Fern frightenedly.I said to my mom happily,“Mom, I have passed the exam!”形容词变副词原则：1.对话符合人物性格特点；2.对话符合原文主题和中心；3.要控制对话的比重，1-2处即可，即：简单+地道+量少。二、心理描写心理描写公式
3、非谓语动词Sb.felt a great sense of +情绪名词+welling up in sbs heart and surging through sb.某人感到一股强烈的在内心升腾、奔腾。Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.简感到一种巨大的恐惧感涌上心头，涌遍全身。名词可以用：开心happinessdelight生气anger难过sadnessdepression害怕frightfear惊讶surpriseshock紧张nervousness骄傲prou
4、d后悔regret焦虑anxiety兴奋excitement疑惑puzzle失望disappointmenthopelessness a wave of 情感名词 swept over sb. 某人感到无灵主语（无生命的名词或短语）+有灵动词动词：sweep over 袭来； seize/take hold of sb.抓住，控制住；strike (过去式：struck) 突袭A wave of happiness and excitement swept over me.我感到一阵幸福与温暖。A sense of despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing
5、 on the doorstep.绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。三、动作描写 动作链 动作+动作+ and 动作She lowered her head, closed her eyes and made wishes.低头+闭眼睛+许愿 (万能句)Shedashedforward,knelt downandgatheredher sonintoher arms.冲向前+蹲下+抱住儿子I sat down in my seat slowly, picked up my drink and swallowed it在座位上坐下来+拿起我的饮料+吞了下去关于身体动作的表达笑smile bitte
6、rly 苦笑turn tears into smiles 破涕为笑a wide smile appears on ones face 面露喜色哭burst into tears热泪盈眶tears roll down ones cheek 眼泪顺着脸颊滚落wipe the tears from ones face 擦去某人的眼泪说（嘴巴）say 说； reply 回答； explain 解释； whisper低声说; ask 问；add 继续说; shout 大声说; whisper 小声说；apologize 道歉insist坚持说complain 抱怨say without hesitati
7、on 毫不犹豫地说speak in a serious voice 严肃地说看（眼睛）stare at盯着 watch 看； glare at 怒视look into ones eyes 直视某人的眼睛头部动作raise ones head 抬头nod ones head in agreement 点头同意shake ones head in disbelief怀疑地摇头lower ones head 低头手部动作hug sb.tightly 紧紧拥抱pat sb.on the shoulder 拍某人的肩膀put her arms round sb.and hold sb.close to
8、her heart.她伸出手臂将某人紧紧搂在胸前腿脚动作rush into 冲进stamp 跺脚head for 朝前进quicken ones pace 加快脚步pace up and down 来回踱步make ones way to 前往某处 时间状语从句，主谓After purchasing the tickets and drinks, we entered the cinema happily.买完票和饮料后，我们高兴地进入了电影院。When you apply for a job, you must present your certificates.当你申请工作时，你必须递交你
9、的有关证件。【小试牛刀】翻译下列句子：我紧张地向父亲解释迟到的原因。I _the reason of my being late.父亲满意地回答道，“你做得不错！”Father _ ,You have done a good job!当他听到这个消息，他感觉一阵兴奋席卷了他。听到这话，她母亲轻轻地拍了拍她的背当他看到包里的外套，他显得很惊讶，然后叫妈妈出去。Mike 被这个感人的故事触动得忍不住抽泣起来。【答案】nervously explained to fatheranswered satisfiedlyWhen he heard the news, he felt a wave of excitement swept over him.Hearing the news, her mother patted her on the shoulder softly.When he saw the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and asked his mother to go out.Touched by the moving story, Mike burst into tears.3
