1、读后续写 样题 分析与技巧 新高考英语 OneOne weekendweekend inin July,July, JaneJane andand herher husband,husband, TomTom, , hadhad drivendriven threethree hourshours toto campcamp overnightovernight byby a a lakelake inin thethe forestforest. . Unfortunately,Unfortunately, onon thethe wayway anan unpleasantunpleasa
2、nt subjectsubject camecame upup andand theythey startedstarted toto quarrelquarrel. . ByBy thethe timetime theythey reachedreached thethe lake,lake, JaneJane waswas soso angryangry thatthat sheshe saidsaid toto Tom,Tom, “Im“Im goinggoing toto findfind a a betterbetter spotspot forfor usus toto camp,
3、”camp,” andand walkedwalked awayaway. . WithWith nono pathpath toto follow,follow, JaneJane justjust walkedwalked onon forfor quitequite a a longlong timetime. . AfterAfter sheshe hadhad climbedclimbed toto a a highhigh place,place, sheshe turnedturned around,around, hopinghoping toto seesee thethe
4、lakelake. . ToTo herher surprise,surprise, sheshe sawsaw nothingnothing butbut forestforest and,and, farfar beyond,beyond, a a snowcappedsnowcapped mountainmountain toptop. . SheShe suddenlysuddenly realizedrealized thatthat sheshe waswas lostlost. . “Tom!”“Tom!” sheshe criedcried. . “Help!”“Help!”
5、NoNo replyreply. . IfIf onlyonly sheshe hadhad notnot leftleft herher mobilemobile phonephone inin thatthat bagbag withwith TomTom. . JaneJane keptkept moving,moving, butbut thethe fartherfarther sheshe walked,walked, thethe moremore confusedconfused sheshe becamebecame. . AsAs nightnight waswas beg
6、inningbeginning toto fall,fall, JaneJane waswas soso tiredtired thatthat sheshe hadhad toto stopstop forfor thethe nightnight. . LyingLying awakeawake inin thethe dark,dark, JaneJane wantedwanted veryvery muchmuch toto bebe withwith TomTom andand herher familyfamily. . SheShe wantedwanted toto holdh
7、old himhim andand telltell himhim howhow muchmuch sheshe lovedloved himhim. . 真题分析：情节 JaneJane roserose atat thethe breakbreak ofof day,day, hungryhungry andand thirstythirsty. . SheShe couldcould hearhear waterwater tricklingtrickling ( (滴落滴落) ) somewheresomewhere atat a a distancedistance. . Quick
8、lyQuickly sheshe followedfollowed thethe soundsound toto a a streamstream. . ToTo herher greatgreat joyjoy, , sheshe alsoalso sawsaw somesome berryberry bushesbushes. . SheShe drankdrank andand ateate a a fewfew berriesberries. . NeverNever inin herher lifelife hadhad sheshe tastedtasted anythingany
9、thing betterbetter. . FeelingFeeling strongerstronger now,now, JaneJane beganbegan toto walkwalk alongalong thethe streamstream andand hopehope itit wouldwould leadlead herher toto thethe lakelake. . AsAs sheshe pickedpicked herher wayway carefullycarefully alongalong thethe stream,stream, JaneJane
10、heardheard a a helicopterhelicopter. . IsIs thatthat forfor me?me? Unfortunately,Unfortunately, thethe treestrees mademade itit impossibleimpossible forfor peoplepeople toto seesee herher fromfrom aboveabove. . A A fewfew minutesminutes later,later, anotheranother helicopterhelicopter flewflew overh
11、eadoverhead. . JaneJane tooktook offoff herher yellowyellow blouseblouse, , thinkingthinking thatthat sheshe shouldshould gogo toto anan openopen areaarea andand flagflag themthem ifif theythey camecame backback againagain. . 真题分析：情节 OneOne weekendweekend inin July,July, JaneJane andand herher husba
12、nd,husband, TomTom, , hadhad drivendriven threethree hourshours toto campcamp overnightovernight byby a a lakelake inin thethe forestforest. . Unfortunately,Unfortunately, onon thethe wayway anan unpleasantunpleasant subjectsubject camecame upup andand theythey startedstarted toto quarrelquarrel. .
13、ByBy thethe timetime theythey reachedreached thethe lake,lake, JaneJane waswas soso angryangry thatthat sheshe saidsaid toto Tom,Tom, “Im“Im goinggoing toto findfind a a betterbetter spotspot forfor usus toto camp,”camp,” andand walkedwalked awayaway. . WithWith nono pathpath toto follow,follow, Jan
14、eJane justjust walkedwalked onon forfor quitequite a a longlong timetime. . AfterAfter sheshe hadhad climbedclimbed toto a a highhigh place,place, sheshe turnedturned around,around, hopinghoping toto seesee thethe lakelake. . ToTo herher surprise,surprise, sheshe sawsaw nothingnothing butbut forestf
15、orest and,and, farfar beyond,beyond, a a snowcappedsnowcapped mountainmountain toptop. . SheShe suddenlysuddenly realizedrealized thatthat sheshe waswas lostlost. . 真题分析：情节 expositionexposition OneOne weekendweekend inin July,July, JaneJane andand herher husband,husband, TomTom, , hadhad drivendrive
16、n threethree hourshours toto campcamp overnightovernight byby a a lakelake inin thethe forestforest. . Unfortunately,Unfortunately, onon thethe wayway anan unpleasantunpleasant subjectsubject camecame upup andand theythey startedstarted toto quarrelquarrel. . ByBy thethe timetime theythey reachedrea
17、ched thethe lake,lake, JaneJane waswas soso angryangry thatthat sheshe saidsaid toto Tom,Tom, “Im“Im goinggoing toto findfind a a betterbetter spotspot forfor usus toto camp,”camp,” andand walkedwalked awayaway. . WithWith nono pathpath toto follow,follow, JaneJane justjust walkedwalked onon forfor
18、quitequite a a longlong timetime. . AfterAfter sheshe hadhad climbedclimbed toto a a highhigh place,place, sheshe turnedturned around,around, hopinghoping toto seesee thethe lakelake. . ToTo herher surprise,surprise, sheshe sawsaw nothingnothing butbut forestforest and,and, farfar beyond,beyond, a a
19、 snowcappedsnowcapped mountainmountain toptop. . SheShe suddenlysuddenly realizedrealized thatthat sheshe waswas lostlost. . 真题分析：情节 inciting inciting incidentincident OneOne weekendweekend inin July,July, JaneJane andand herher husband,husband, TomTom, , hadhad drivendriven threethree hourshours to
20、to campcamp overnightovernight byby a a lakelake inin thethe forestforest. . Unfortunately,Unfortunately, onon thethe wayway anan unpleasantunpleasant subjectsubject camecame upup andand theythey startedstarted toto quarrelquarrel. . ByBy thethe timetime theythey reachedreached thethe lake,lake, Jan
21、eJane waswas soso angryangry thatthat sheshe saidsaid toto Tom,Tom, “Im“Im goinggoing toto findfind a a betterbetter spotspot forfor usus toto camp,”camp,” andand walkedwalked awayaway. . WithWith nono pathpath toto follow,follow, JaneJane justjust walkedwalked onon forfor quitequite a a longlong ti
22、metime. . AfterAfter sheshe hadhad climbedclimbed toto a a highhigh placeplace, , sheshe turnedturned around,around, hopinghoping toto seesee thethe lakelake. . ToTo herher surprise,surprise, sheshe sawsaw nothingnothing butbut forestforest and,and, farfar beyond,beyond, a a snowcappedsnowcapped mou
23、ntainmountain toptop. . SheShe suddenlysuddenly realizedrealized thatthat sheshe waswas lostlost. . 真题分析：情节 rising actionrising action “Tom!” she “Tom!” she criedcried. “Help!”. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phon
24、e in that bag with Tom. Jane with Tom. Jane kept movingkept moving, but the farther she walked, the more , but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she tired that
25、she had to stop for had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane Jane wantedwanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted wanted to hold to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.him and t
26、ell him how much she loved him. 真题分析：情节 rising actionrising action JaneJane roserose atat thethe breakbreak ofof day,day, hungryhungry andand thirstythirsty. . SheShe couldcould hearhear waterwater tricklingtrickling ( (滴落滴落) ) somewheresomewhere atat a a distancedistance. . QuicklyQuickly sheshe fo
27、llowedfollowed thethe soundsound toto a a streamstream. . ToTo herher greatgreat joyjoy, , sheshe alsoalso sawsaw somesome berryberry bushesbushes. . SheShe drankdrank andand ateate a a fewfew berriesberries. . NeverNever inin herher lifelife hadhad sheshe tastedtasted anythinganything betterbetter.
28、 . FeelingFeeling strongerstronger now,now, JaneJane beganbegan toto walkwalk alongalong thethe streamstream andand hopehope itit wouldwould leadlead herher toto thethe lakelake. . AsAs sheshe pickedpicked herher wayway carefullycarefully alongalong thethe stream,stream, JaneJane heardheard a a heli
29、copterhelicopter. . IsIs thatthat forfor me?me? Unfortunately,Unfortunately, thethe treestrees mademade itit impossibleimpossible forfor peoplepeople toto seesee herher fromfrom aboveabove. . A A fewfew minutesminutes later,later, anotheranother helicopterhelicopter flewflew overheadoverhead. . Jane
30、Jane tooktook offoff herher yellowyellow blouseblouse, , thinkingthinking thatthat sheshe shouldshould gogo toto anan openopen areaarea andand flagflag themthem ifif theythey camecame backback againagain. . 真题分析：情节 rising actionrising action Para 1： But no more helicopters came and it was getting da
31、rk again. Para 2： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 真题分析：情节 climaxclimax falling action(resolution)falling action(resolution) denouementdenouement 1. What central conflicts drive the plot? 2. Are they internal (within a character) or external (between characters ; between a character or a force)? 3
32、. How are the conflicts resolved? Central conflict: quarrel Related conflict: get lost 真题分析：情节 OneOne weekendweekend inin JulyJuly, , JaneJane andand herher husband,husband, TomTom, , hadhad drivendriven threethree hourshours toto campcamp overnightovernight byby a a lakelake inin thethe forestfores
33、t. . Unfortunately,Unfortunately, onon thethe wayway anan unpleasantunpleasant subjectsubject camecame upup andand theythey startedstarted toto quarrelquarrel. . ByBy thethe timetime theythey reachedreached thethe lakelake, , JaneJane waswas soso angryangry thatthat sheshe saidsaid toto Tom,Tom, “Im
34、“Im goinggoing toto findfind a a betterbetter spotspot forfor usus toto camp,”camp,” andand walkedwalked awayaway. . WithWith nono pathpath toto follow,follow, JaneJane justjust walkedwalked onon forfor quitequite a a longlong timetime. . AfterAfter sheshe hadhad climbedclimbed toto a a highhigh pla
35、ceplace, , sheshe turnedturned around,around, hopinghoping toto seesee thethe lakelake. . ToTo herher surprisesurprise, , sheshe sawsaw nothingnothing butbut forestforest and,and, farfar beyond,beyond, a a snowcappedsnowcapped mountainmountain toptop. . SheShe suddenlysuddenly realizedrealized thatt
36、hat sheshe waswas lostlost. . 真题分析：语言 OneOne weekendweekend inin JulyJuly, , JaneJane andand herher husband,husband, TomTom, , hadhad drivendriven threethree hourshours toto campcamp overnightovernight byby a a lakelake inin thethe forestforest. . Unfortunately,Unfortunately, onon thethe wayway anan
37、 unpleasantunpleasant subjectsubject camecame upup andand theythey startedstarted toto quarrelquarrel. . ByBy thethe timetime theythey reachedreached thethe lakelake, , JaneJane waswas soso angryangry thatthat sheshe saidsaid toto Tom,Tom, “Im“Im goinggoing toto findfind a a betterbetter spotspot fo
38、rfor usus toto camp,”camp,” andand walkedwalked awayaway. . WithWith nono pathpath toto follow,follow, JaneJane justjust walkedwalked onon forfor quitequite a a longlong timetime. . AfterAfter sheshe hadhad climbedclimbed toto a a highhigh placeplace, , sheshe turnedturned around,around, hopinghopin
39、g toto seesee thethe lakelake. . ToTo herher surprisesurprise, , sheshe sawsaw nothingnothing butbut forestforest and,and, farfar beyond,beyond, a a snowcappedsnowcapped mountainmountain toptop. . SheShe suddenlysuddenly realizedrealized thatthat sheshe waswas lostlost. . 真题分析：语言 时空背景时空背景(setting)(s
40、etting) 事件演进事件演进(events)(events) 人物心理人物心理 (state of mind)(state of mind) “Tom!”“Tom!” sheshe criedcried. . “Help!”“Help!” NoNo replyreply. . IfIf onlyonly sheshe hadhad notnot leftleft herher mobilemobile phonephone inin thatthat bagbag withwith TomTom. . JaneJane keptkept moving,moving, butbut thet
41、he fartherfarther sheshe walked,walked, thethe moremore confusedconfused sheshe becamebecame. . AsAs nightnight waswas beginningbeginning toto fallfall, , JaneJane waswas soso tiredtired thatthat sheshe hadhad toto stopstop forfor thethe nightnight. . LyingLying awakeawake inin thethe darkdark, , Ja
42、neJane wantedwanted veryvery muchmuch toto bebe withwith TomTom andand herher familyfamily. . SheShe wantedwanted toto holdhold himhim andand telltell himhim howhow muchmuch sheshe lovedloved himhim. . 真题分析：语言 JaneJane roserose atat thethe breakbreak ofof dayday, , hungryhungry andand thirstythirsty
43、. . SheShe couldcould hearhear waterwater tricklingtrickling ( (滴落滴落) ) somewheresomewhere atat a a distancedistance. . QuicklyQuickly sheshe followedfollowed thethe soundsound toto a a streamstream. . ToTo herher greatgreat joyjoy, , sheshe alsoalso sawsaw somesome berryberry bushesbushes. . SheShe
44、 drankdrank andand ateate a a fewfew berriesberries. . NeverNever inin herher lifelife hadhad sheshe tastedtasted anythinganything betterbetter. . FeelingFeeling strongerstronger now,now, JaneJane beganbegan toto walkwalk alongalong thethe streamstream andand hopehope itit wouldwould leadlead herher
45、 toto thethe lakelake. . AsAs sheshe pickedpicked herher wayway carefullycarefully alongalong thethe streamstream, , JaneJane heardheard a a helicopterhelicopter. . IsIs thatthat forfor me?me? Unfortunately,Unfortunately, thethe treestrees mademade itit impossibleimpossible forfor peoplepeople toto
46、seesee herher fromfrom aboveabove. . A A fewfew minutesminutes laterlater, , anotheranother helicopterhelicopter flewflew overheadoverhead. . JaneJane tooktook offoff herher yellowyellow blouseblouse, , thinkingthinking thatthat sheshe shouldshould gogo toto anan openopen areaarea andand flagflag th
47、emthem ifif theythey camecame backback againagain. . 真题分析：语言 档次档次 描述描述 第五档第五档 （2125） 与所给短文与所给短文融洽度融洽度高，与所提供高，与所提供各段开头语衔接各段开头语衔接合理。合理。 内容丰富内容丰富，应用了，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用所使用语法结构语法结构和和词汇词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。的连接成分，使所续写短文结构
48、紧凑。 第四档第四档 （1620） 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段开头语衔接较为合理。与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段开头语衔接较为合理。 内容比较丰富，应用了内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 真题分析：评分标准 档次档次 描述描述 第五档第五档 （2125） 与所给短文与所给短文融洽度融洽
49、度高，与所提供高，与所提供各段开头语衔接各段开头语衔接合理。合理。 内容丰富内容丰富，应用了，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用所使用语法结构语法结构和和词汇词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了有效地使用了语句间语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 第四档第四档 （1620） 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段开头语衔接较为合理。与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段开头语衔接较为合理。 内容比较丰富，应用了内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准
