1、原则4 吃透八大应用文写作题型 之道歉信&求助信&电子邮件 专家说考情 高考新考法 学霸好声音 全国卷3套卷3年来考 查过道歉信、求助信 和电子邮件 2020年全国卷考查 求助信 2020全国卷求助外 教Miss Evans帮忙指 导改编一个短剧，体 现对文艺的重视。 1.会运用道歉信、求 助信、电子邮件等的 表达。 2一定要言之有艺 秀文采。 学写考场满分作文 2020 全国卷改编假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文 改编一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件 内容包括： 1剧情简介； 2指导内容； 3商定时间地点。 注意： 1词数80左右； 2结束语已为你写好。 D
2、ear Miss Evans， _ _ Im looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 满分作文第一步：“五定”审题 “三段”谋篇 定体裁 定人称 定时态 定要点、定结构 第一段 开篇 点题 点明写信目的请 求帮助根据英语课文 改编了一个短剧。 第二段 ( 3个 要点缺一不 可) 1.剧情简介； 2指导内容； 3商定时间地点。 求助信 第一 人称 一般现 在时 三段 谋篇 第三段 (巧 妙收尾) 表达期待 满分作文第二步：斟酌词句 设计亮点 1我写信是想请您指导一部根据我们的一篇文章改编的短 剧。 (高频词汇定语从句 被动语态) _ _ 2它讲述
3、了一个名叫黛西的女孩的故事，她和一些野生动物 交谈，并下定决心帮助保护环境。 (非谓语动词作定语定语从句) _ _ I m writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts. It tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks with some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment. 3如果您方便的话，我们可以在本周日
4、早上8点在我们学校 的艺术大厅见面吗？ (1)高频词汇：Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday _？ (2)高级句式( if 条件状语从句)Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday _？ 4我们真诚地希望你们能帮我们这个忙，帮助我们提高业 绩。 (词汇不重，彰显水准)We sincerely hope you can _. at your earliest convenience if it is convenient for you d
5、o us this favor and help improve our performance 满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡 完美成篇 _ _ _ _ _ Dear Miss Evans， Im writing to ask for your guidance on a short play, which is adapted from one of our texts. The text we have chosen is titled “Wildlife Protection”. It tells a story about a girl named Daisy, who talks wit
6、h some wild animals and makes up her mind to help protect the environment. We need you to give us some expert guidance on dialogue between characters, body- action, plot, setting, and so on. Could we meet in our school art hall at 8：00 am this Sunday if it is convenient for you? We sincerely hope yo
7、u can do us this favor and help improve our performance. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 3组不可不记的书信类万用句式 道歉信 一、写作架构要规范 道歉信通常包括以下三个部分：1.向对方表示歉意；2.说明道 歉的原因，对失误或错误进行解释(一般要求考生自由发挥)；3.提 出补救措施，请求原谅。其结构通常为： 二、靓点句式背一番 吸引阅卷人开头句 1Im writing to apologize to you because Im unable to go to the boo
8、kstore with you as planned/at the appointed time.我写信是为了 向你道歉，因为我不能按约定/在约定时间和你一起去书店。 2I really want to accept your invitation and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but Im sorry to tell you that I cant because I am occupied preparing a performance
9、for the coming National Day.我真的很想接受 您的邀请，并借此机会向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画，但我很遗 憾的告诉您，我不能参加，因为我忙于为即将到来的国庆节准备 表演。 3I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.非常抱歉本周六不能教你制 作中国结了。 吸引阅卷人篇中句 1The reason why I wont be available at that time is that my grandfather
10、 fell ill suddenly yesterday and my family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. 我那时没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了，我的家人正在 医院轮流照顾他。所以那天我不得不和他待在一起。 2I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not caus
11、e you too much trouble. 我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这次 更换不会给您带来太多麻烦。 吸引阅卷人结尾句 1Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence. 对于我的缺席给您带来的不便，我再次表示歉意。 2Im awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan. And Im wondering whether it is OK if we go to the exhibition next Saturday morning. 计划突然改变，我感到
12、非常抱歉。我想知道我 们下周六上午去看展览是否可以。 求助信 一、写作架构要规范 求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的 信件类型，因此整篇文章应用一般现在时，其结构通常为： 二、靓点句式背一番 吸引阅卷人开头句 1The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now. 我给你写信的原因是我和 我的朋友露西吵架了，我现在需要你的帮助。 2Would you please do me a favour？你能帮我一个忙吗？ 吸引阅卷人篇中句
13、 1I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, Im not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. Im wondering if you could spare some precious time to go through them and make necessary changes.我刚刚完成了我的求职信和个人 简历。然而，我不太确定我使用的语言和格式。我想知道你是否 能抽出一些宝贵的时间来看看，并做出必要的修改。 2Would yo
14、u please pick up my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the US? Thank you in advance. 你能到机场接我叔叔并把他送到旅馆吗？因为这是他第一次 来美国。提前谢谢你。 3Im wondering if you could give me some practical advice as I know youve organized similar activities. 我想知道你是否能给我一些实用的建议，因为我知道你也组 织过
15、类似的活动。 吸引阅卷人结尾句 1I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume. 如果您能帮我 一个忙，抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历，我将不胜感激。 2Im eager for your timely help./Im eager to get your timely help.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。 电子邮件 一、写作架构要规范 英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同， 具体写作 结构为： 二、靓点句式背一
16、番 吸引阅卷人开头句 1I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago. 我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。 2Im glad to hear from you and Id like to share my experience of helping my parents do housework. 很高兴收到你的来信，我想和你分享我帮助父母做家务的经 验。 吸引阅卷人篇中句 1If necessary, we can arrange a face- to- face discussion sometime
17、 this week. 如果有必要，本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。 2Of all the courses, I like Chinese Painting best because it helps us experience the inner harmony of man and nature and taste the beauty of Chinese culture. 在所有的课程中，我最喜欢国画，因为它让我 们体会到人与自然的内在和谐，品味中国文化之美。 吸引阅卷人结尾句 1Id appreciate it if you could make a response at yo
18、ur earliest convenience. 如果您能在方便时尽早回信，我将非常感激。 2Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. 盼望能尽快收到你的回信。 沙场练兵 写满分作文 Writing 1 道歉信 假定你是李华，原定今年 6 月去纽约旅游并约定探访朋友 Taylor，现因故推迟。请你给Taylor 写信，包含以下要点： 1写信目的； 2推迟的原因； 3告知新计划。 注意： 1词数80左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Taylor， _ _ _ _ _ Yours， Li Hua Writi
19、ng 1 【佳作展台】 Dear Taylor， How are things going with you these days? Im sorry to tell you that I cant make it to New York and visit you in June as previously scheduled. I suppose everybody around the world has been somehow affected by COVID- 19, and Im no exception. The greatest influence on me is tha
20、t the college entrance exam this year in China has been postponed to July. As a result, my summer vacation wont begin until mid- July and I have to reschedule my trip to your city. If the virus is under control soon, I will go and see you in January, during my first college winter vocation. I wish i
21、t would be convenient for you to meet me then. Please stay safe and stay in contact. Yours， Li Hua Writing 2 求助信 2020 浙江省绍兴市4月模拟假定你是李华，将在校报上推荐 一部经典原版英语文学作品。请你给美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮 件，征求其意见，内容包括： 1询问近况； 2求助意图； 3表示感谢。 注意： 1词数80左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ _ _ Writing 2 【佳作展台】 Dear Tom， Its been half a year since y
22、ou returned to America. How is everything going on with your life and study now? I intend to recommend an original English classic to help students in our school broaden their vision and enrich their minds. Classic books provide profound ideas, showing us the right attitude toward life. To be frank,
23、 I find it challenging to select a suitable one. Would you please give me your advice? Hopefully, you will list some works with respective features. I am grateful and looking forward to your early reply! Yours， Li Hua Writing 3 电子邮件 2020 山东省历城二中第一次模拟假定你是李华，获知你的 英国朋友Eric在汉语书法比赛中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮 件，内容包括：
24、 1表示祝贺； 2赠送名家字帖。 注意： 1词数80左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：字帖calligraphy copybook _ _ Dear Eric， Congratulations on your winning first prize in the Chinese calligraphy contest! As is known to all, calligraphy is an important part of Chinese traditional culture. It is really amazing for a foreigner to write Chinese characters so well. Ive already had a copybook of Wang Xizhis works delivered to you. I hope it can be of some help. Im looking forward to your greater progress in the future. Yours， Li Hua
