1、 读后续写专题 山东省聊城市 2020 届高三上学期期末考试英语试题 第二节（满分第二节（满分 25 分）分） 47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的 词数应为 150 左右。 There was something in the elderly womans grace that caught my eye. Although slow and unsure of her steps, the woman moved with deliberation (从容), and t
2、here was no hesitation in her gestures. It was a few years ago, and I had taken a part - time holiday - season job in a video. store at the local shopping mall. From inside the store, I could see the people outside rushing by. The elderly woman entered the store, along with her dau
3、ghter, who was displaying a serious case of impatience, rolling her eyes, sighing and checking her watch every few seconds. I guessed if she had possessed a rope, she would have fastened it to her mother to drag her along to keep step with the rush of other shoppers. The elde
4、rly woman separated from her daughter and began to seek through the DVDs on the nearest shelf. After the slightest hesitation, I walked over and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title written on an old piece of paper. Rather than r
5、ush off to locate the DVD for the woman, I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it. Looking back, I thought I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment. Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother, whod passed away the pr
6、evious Christmas. I missed my mom and still felt regretful about the moments when Id used my impatience to make her life unhappy. As we walked along the back of the store, I introduced its floor plan: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction. The woman seemed
7、glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation. We found the DVD and she thanked me, saying that it was the one shed enjoyed when she was her daughters age. Unwillingly, I accompanied her to the cash register, realizing I had to return the elderly woman to her daughter,
8、 who was still tapping her foot at the front of the store. Paragraph 1: As the elderly woman was waiting in the queue at the cash register, I walked over to her daughter. _ _ _ _ Paragraph 2: Together they made their way toward the stores exit. _ _ _ 【答案】As
9、 the elderly woman was waiting in the queue at the cash register, I walked over to her daughter. “Mind some advice?” I asked. She rolled her eyes and said, “of course not.” I smiled to show her I wasnt criticizing. Cherish her and cherish every single moment you can stay with her,” I sai
10、d. And then I answered her curious expression by saying, “When shes gone, its these little moments that will come back to you. Moments like this. I know.” Having finished saying this, I noticed the elderly woman moving with her deliberation back to her daughter. Together they
11、 made their way toward the stores exit. Then the daughter glanced over her elderly mother. And slowly, almost unwillingly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd. Tears filled my eyes when I w
12、atched them disappearing in the crowd. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写作文。 【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者在录像带工作做兼职时，看到了一对母女一起走进了商 店。女儿非常不耐烦，而母亲只是从容地选着 DVD。看到这里作者想到了自己的母亲，于是在 收银台排队时给了女儿一些忠告。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当那位老妇人在收银台排队时，我走向她的女儿。可知后 文应当描写作者和女儿的对话，作者劝告女儿珍惜现在和母亲相处的时刻；第二段开头是：他 们一起朝商店的出口走去。后文应当描写听了作者建
13、议的女儿和母亲在一起的表现，她把她的 胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，带着明显不习惯的感情，轻轻地把她带回到人群中。作者看着消失 在人群中，热泪盈眶。 【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：in the queue; criticize, deliberation 等高级词汇；时间状语从句 As the elderly woman was waiting in the queue at the cash register, I walked over to her daughter.；非谓语动词的运用 Having finished saying
14、 this, I noticed the elderly woman moving with her deliberation back to her daughter.等高级句式。 山东省泰安市 2020 届高三英语上学期期末考试试题 1. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文续写 的词数应为 150 左右 I was ten years old，when some people from a nearby government school came and told my parents
15、that they should send me to a one-year education camp My parents replied，Whats the use？ Education never got us Villagers anywhere What good will it do to a girl？ Girls should stay at home and learn household work That comes in handy when they get marriedAnd anyway，how can we send o
16、ur child so far away all by herself for a whole year？ But the people persuaded my parentsThey said there would be about a hundred girls coming from different villages and all of them would be safe and taken care of well My parents had to agree finallyThey felt that if other f
17、amilies sent their girls，they would also have to My friend，Mala，was going tooWe were the only two girls from our village，Swaroop ka TalaabWe would sit in the evenings and wonder how things would be in an unknown placeOnce，Mala asked me，Will there be any sand dunes（沙丘）there？I didnt
18、understand her questionHow could any place in the world not have sand dunes？ I have traveled far with my goats，sat on hills and looked at the desert beyondFor miles and miles there is only sand The day before leaving home，I was very nervousI had dreamt of going to this unknown plac
19、e but I couldnt imagine living without my parents and goatsThey would surely miss meMy mother was sad tooWith tears in her eyes，she packed my clothes and wrapped snacks for me When they took me away，I sobbed the whole wayI kept crying for the first few days in the camp
20、 Then gradually， I started making friends with the other girls There were so many girls We would all study together，play together，eat together and sleep together Sometimes，my parents would send me clothes and foodI also sent messages telling them not to worry and that I was well &n
21、bsp;Para I：At the end of the term I studied hard for the examination_ Para 2：When Mala and I went back home，we became different persons_ 【答案】Para 1： At the end of the term I studied hard for the examination I passed the fifth standard examination The teachers were very happy
22、with meI was happy too because it was time to go back homeBut I was also sad as I would never again see the new friends I had made here（高分句型一）We hardly slept the last night in the campWhile we packed，we kept talking and crying as we would soon part （活 动结束成绩优秀，但是和老师同学感情深不愿离开） Para 2
23、： When Mala and I went back home， we became different persons My parents were overjoyed to see me and I met my goats again Everyone in the village came and asked me how the camp was When I told them how good it was and how much we had learnt，they decided to send their daughters the
24、 next time（高分句型二）We often talked about much fun we had in the campI decided to go to school to study more（回家后告诉家人和朋友自己的收获，他们也愿意把自己的孩子送去训练） 【解析】高分句型： 1But I was also sad as I would never again see the new friends I had made here 但是我也很难过因为我再也见不到我在这里认识的新朋友了 该句中 as 引导
25、一个原因状语从句，I had made here 为一定语从句，修饰 friends 2When I told them how good it was and how much we had learnt，they decided to send their daughters the next time 当我告诉他们那里是如何的好以及我们学到了很多知识时，他们决定下次也把自己的女儿送去 那里训练学习 该句中 when 引导一个时间状语从句，how 引导两个并列的宾语从句，作动词 told 的宾语 我们在写作文的时候，
26、一般应该把亮点句型放在明显的位置，以便于能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球； 同时对于高分句型的使用也要慎重，应该用自己有把握的句子，特别是高考时，应该以正确为 首要目的另外，长短句的搭配使用会使文章显得灵活，不死板，是写作的首选 山东省青岛市 2020 届高三英语上学期期末考试试题 第二节(满分 25 分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写 的词数应为 150 左右。 Sam Watts was a 37-year-old fisherman living and Working in Canada One
27、day， Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day Joining Sam would be his crewman，24-year-old Tom Buck Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming，there was little that would keep him from goingAs he sailed throug
28、h the waves some 120 kilometers from land，Sam let out his three-kilometer-long fishing line. The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshoreThat changed around 1 amWaves rocked the small boat，which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride
29、“Get us out of here!”Tom screamed to Sam “Lets go back!” With the winds and waves kicking up， the boat began to fill with water Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together，but the high waves filled the boat with water，forcing Sam to make a hard desicion He cut the line，
30、losing thousands of dollars worth of equipment and fish in the sea He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours awaySam then called his boss，William Fox，to report his position With dawn coming，Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizonHe was figuring out a rout
31、e through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped.“I couldnt believe it， ”Sam said “We were 24 kilometers off the coast，and the motor died ”High waves raised and dropped the boat， sending the men crashing into the sides“William， William!” Sam yelled into the radio“If you re
32、coming to get me，come now!” “Were coming!”William shouted back Paragraph1： Shortly after，the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore，driving the men farther out to sea _ _ _ _ Paragraph2： The next morning，Stun spotted a fish
33、ing boat in the distance _ _ 五、读后续写（满分 25 分） 一、评分原则 1、本题总分为 25 分，按 7 个档次给分。 2、评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法结构和篇章结构三个方面考量，具体为： （1）创造内容的质量，续写地完整性，以及与原文情境的融洽度。 （2）所使用的词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性 （3）上下文的衔接，全文的连贯性。 3、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语法结构确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定 或调整档次，最后给分。 &nb
34、sp;4、评分时，应注意的主要内容： （1）词数少于 120 的，酌情扣分。 （2）单词拼写与标点符号是写作规范性的重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予 以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 （3）如书写较差以至影响交际，酌情扣分。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求 1、第六档优秀档（2225 分） 创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文的情境融洽度高。 使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解。 有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手
35、段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。 2、第五档良好档（1821 分） 创造了比较丰富、合理的故事内容，比较有逻辑，续写比较完整，与原文的情境融洽度比较 高。 使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解。 比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。 3、第四档一般档（1517 分） 创造了基本合理的故事内容，有一定逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文的情境相关。 使用了基本恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达不够多样性，表达有些许错误，基本不影响理解。 使用了
36、语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。 4、第三档较差档（1114 分） 创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文的情境基本相关。 使用了简单的词汇和与方法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解。 尚有语句衔接意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。 5、第二档差档（610 分） 内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节。所用词汇有限，语 法结构比较单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解。 未能有效地使用语句间连接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。
37、 6、第一档极差档（15 分） 内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或所写部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文基本脱节。 所用词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解。 未使用语句间连接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。 7、0 分 不作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容完全抄自原文或与题目要求完全 不相关。 山东省临沂市 2020 届高三英语上学期期末考试试题 第二节(满分 25 分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
38、构成一篇完整的短文。续写 的词数应为 150 左右。 One snowy day，the winds grew stronger and the snow turned into a blinding snowstormA farmer sat down to relax before the fire for the evening Then he heard a loud knock， something hitting against the windowHe looked outside but could not see anythingSo he
39、 went outside for a better viewIn the field near his house he saw，of all the strangest things，a group of swans(天鹅) They were apparently flying to look for a warmer area down south，but they had been caught in the snowstormThe storm had become too blinding and violent for the swans t
40、o fly or see their way They were trapped on his farm， with no food or shelter， unable to do more than wave their wings and fly in aimless circlesHe had compassion for them and wanted to help them He thought to himself，the barn(谷仓)would be a great place for them to stayIt was warm a
41、nd safe；surely they could spend the night and wait out the stormSo he opened the barn doors for themHe waited，watching them，hoping they would notice the open barn and go inside However，they did not notice the barn or realize what it could mean for themHe moved closer toward t
42、hem to get their attention，but they just moved away from him out of fearHe went into the house and came back with some bread，broke it up，and made a bread trail to the barnThey still did not catch on Starting to get frustrated，he went over and tried to drive them toward the barnThey
43、 panicked and scattered into every direction except toward the barnNothing he did could get them to go into the barn where there was warmth， safety， and shelter Feeling totally frustrated， he exclaimed，“Why don t they follow me?Cant they see this is the only place where they can survive
44、the storm?How can I possibly get them into the one place to save them?” 山东省青岛市黄岛区 2020 届高三英语上学期期末考试学业水平检测试题 第二节第二节: 读后续写。阅读后续写。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 47.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 The McDonnells lived in a small brick hou
45、se in Larchmont, a suburb of New York City. Jim was foreman of mail carriers at the post office where he had worked for 25 years. Married in 1960, he and Anne were childless. On the evening of the eleventh anniversary of their marriage, carrying out the garbage, Jim McDonnell
46、 slipped on icy steps, and struck his head. A few days later, driving to work, he lost control of the car, hit a telephone pole, and banged his forehead against the windshield. The following day he fell off the stairs, and again he banged his head. Found unconscious, he was hospitalized
47、for three days with a cerebral concussion (脑震荡). One day in the same month, Jim borrowed a friends station wagon and drove to Kennedy Airport to pick up Annes brother and family. When he returned the borrowed car at 10 p.m., he was unaware that the wallet containing his identificat
48、ion had slipped out of his pocket onto the floor of the car. After that, he was never seen again. So what really happened to Annes husband? During his walk home, Jim had indeed blacked out (昏厥), losing all ability to remember who he was and where he lived. What happened then is unc
49、lear. The next thing he knew was that he was in downtown Philadelphia, a city he had never visited before. Seeing signs advertising the services of a James Peters, a real estate broker, Jim adopted James Peters as his own name. He had no past; his only reality was the present. Jame
50、s Peters got a Social Security card, which could be obtained at that time without showing a birth certificate, and took a job in a health club. He next worked at a cancer research institute, cleaning out animal cages. He also got a night-shift job at the P&P luncheonette, where he became well known for his omelets (煎蛋卷), as well as his kindness and good humor. 注意：1所续写的短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1： About
