1、School LifeSchool Life Teaching type: a writing lessonTeaching type: a writing lesson Learning Aims 1. Be able to describe an experience. 学会描述一次经历学会描述一次经历 2. Be able to learn some skills to write better. 学会写作技巧以便更好地写文章学会写作技巧以便更好地写文章 3. Be grateful and learn how to get on well with others. 常怀感恩之心并与人和
2、谐相处常怀感恩之心并与人和谐相处 Time Activities Time Activities 6:00 get up 3:30 play basketball 6:40 have breakfast 4:40 go home 7:05 go to school 5:20 have dinner 11:30 have lunch 8:15 go to bed subjects activities timetable When we talk about school life, what can you think of? The power of friendship What did
3、your classmates do when you were in trouble at school? Please describe your experience. 在校园中，当你有困难时，你的同在校园中，当你有困难时，你的同 学曾经为你做了什么？请描述一下学曾经为你做了什么？请描述一下 你的经历。你的经历。 Think When I was in Grade 7; On a rainy afternoon; I was ill and missed many lessons I failed an exam I didnt win the singing competition I
4、 got hurt when playing football I lost my meal card help with/do; with the help of ; encourageto do; cheer up; make; pass by; send to hospital; ask for help; call as a result; at last; in the end; from then on; overcame; catch up with; get well soon; feel confident; feel moved; Please use the points
5、 to describe your experience. 每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处，共同学习和生活一起，每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处，共同学习和生活一起， 一定有很多感触吧，国际中学生论坛上有一个主题一定有很多感触吧，国际中学生论坛上有一个主题 “Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important”的帖子，请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。的帖子，请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。 内容包括：内容包括：1. 你和班级同学们相处的总体感受；你和班级同学们相处的总体感受； 2. 写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让 你感动
6、的一件事；你感动的一件事； 3. 谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。 Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. _ _. Writing Task basic rules (写作基本规则写作基本规则) 1. search（审题）（审题） 2. list（列提纲）（列提纲） 3. draw (画思维导图画思维导图) 4. add(加内容加内容)
7、每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处，共同学习和生活一起，每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处，共同学习和生活一起， 一定有很多感触吧，国际中学生论坛上有一个主题一定有很多感触吧，国际中学生论坛上有一个主题 “Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important” 的帖子，请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。的帖子，请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。 内容包括：内容包括：1. 你和班级同学们相处的总体感受；你和班级同学们相处的总体感受； 2. 写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让 你感动的一件事；你感动的一件事； 3. 谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦
8、相处。谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。 Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. _ _. Step 1: Search审题审题 根据题目关键词根据题目关键词 简单列出文章的结构和要点。简单列出文章的结构和要点。 Step 2: List 列提纲列提纲 （总）第一段：（总）第一段：I feel （总体感受）（总体感受） （分）第二段：（分）第二段：Last week, （
9、一件事）（一件事） （总）第三段：（总）第三段：In my opinion, （建议）（建议） Experience Advice Feelings Time be friendly help eath other grateful happy Incident(事件） Process(经过) lucky Result How to get on well with our classmates Step 3: Draw a Mind-map思维导图思维导图 PK第二回合：第二回合： 1.Group A 和和Group B的同学的同学自由上台自由上台在白纸在白纸 相应位置相应位置写出“写出“F
10、eelings”和和”Advice”相关相关 的词或短语；的词或短语； 2. Group A用黑笔写，用黑笔写，Group B用蓝笔写用蓝笔写； 3. 每人每次只能写一个，同一人可多次上台；每人每次只能写一个，同一人可多次上台； 4. 两组同学写的答案不能一样，先写先得；两组同学写的答案不能一样，先写先得； 5. 每个有效答案得每个有效答案得1分。分。 In my opinion, (建议建议) Last week (时间、事件、经过、结果时间、事件、经过、结果) It is important to get on well with our classmates. I get on well
11、 with my classmates. I feel(总体感受总体感受) 1 2 3 Step 4: Add 加内容加内容 Practice makes perfect! 查查 分分 段段 信信 息息 点点 卷卷 面面 书书 写写 语法 & 表达 School Life 评分标准（满分评分标准（满分15分）：分）： 1. 总体感受。总体感受。 （2分）分） 2. 一件事。（一件事。（6分）分） 3. 做法。做法。 （3分）分） 4. 卷面、书写及字数。卷面、书写及字数。 （2分）分） 5. 好词好句好词好句 。（。（ 2分）分） 参考范文：参考范文： It is important to g
12、et on well with our classmates. I get on well with my classmates. I feel very lucky that I have such lovely classmates. I will never forget the touching thing that my classmates did for me. When I was in Grade 8, I got very bad grades in one mid-term exam. I was so upset that I was afraid to go to s
13、chool. I told my teacher that I needed to rest at home because I was sick. All my classmates wrote wishes on a card and sent it to me. Some of them even lend their notes to me. I was really moved and encouraged. From now on, I will help my classmates who need help. In my opinion, if we can help each
14、 other, we will get on well with each other. School Life 审、列、画、加审、列、画、加 Experience: 时间、事件、时间、事件、 经过、结果经过、结果 How to get on well with our classmates Basic rules： Ways: Homework 1. Exchange the drafts with your partner and help to make some revisions. 2. Complete your writing. School Life Thanks for listening!
