1、Unit 4 A glimpse of the future 表达表达 作文巧升格作文巧升格 续写故事 续写故事，首先要能对所给的故事有深刻的理解，对故事的脉络 和发展的方向有很好的把握，对故事使用的词汇的特点有整体的认 知。然后，根据对故事结构的理解设计合理的情节，完成对故事的续 写。因此，续写故事的关键是： 1掌握所给故事的主旨意图及故事情节的发展方向 这点至关重要。只有把握了故事的主旨意图，才能很好地完成续 写。 2正确理解故事的脉络线索和段落结构，设计续写内容的基本 框架 只有对原文的脉络线索和段落结构有正确的和深刻的理解，续写 的内容才能和原文骨肉相连，契合紧密。 3理清故事中的要点
2、信息和逻辑关系 确保续写的内容和原文要有逻辑上的一致性，并能回应原文的信 息。 4感知故事的用词特点 这样做可以使续写的内容在语言色彩上和所给故事保持一致。 5注意语言的使用 写作中要准确使用语法和词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。 所以，在考虑故事结构的同时，一定要注意使用比较“高级”的词汇 和句式。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。 On a bright，warm July afternoon，Mac Hollan，a primary school teacher，was cycling from his home
3、 to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair，but they had encouraged Mac to carry on，and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled (骑行)along alone， he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place s
4、omeday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man，thats a big dog！”he thought.But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all，but a wolf，quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped.He found out his can of bear spray.With one hand on the bars，he fired the
5、spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal，and to Macs relief，it fell back，shaking its head.But a minute later，it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Macs bike，tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time，and again，it fell back only to quickly restart th
6、e chase(追赶). Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill，hed be easily caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment，Paul and Becky were driving
7、 their car on their way to Alaska.They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later，they spotted what they，too，assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer， they realised that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large
8、 vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast，just a dozen yards away now. Paragraph 1： The car abruptly stopped in front of him._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Paragraph 2： A few minutes later，the other two cyclists arrived._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 Paragraph 1： The car abruptly stopped
9、in front of him.A woman hurriedly opened the door and stretched out her hand， shouting，“Get in！ ”Mac grabbed her hand without hesitation，leaving his bicycle lying on the road and jumped into the car.The moment he shut the door，he caught the glimpse of the fierce eyes and hungry look of the wolf by t
10、he door.A cold feeling crept over his heart and made him shiver.However，the car had left the wolf far behind， which made him sigh with relief.Mac thanked Paul and Becky and afterwards they pulled over by the road to wait for Macs friends. Paragraph 2： A few minutes later，the two other cyclists arriv
11、ed. As soon as they met，his friends worried look faded away.“Where have you been? We saw your bicycle on the road.”His friends asked and these words like a penetrate of sunshine warmed his heart.After Mac explained to them， they said farewell to Paul and Becky in sincerely indebtedness.On the way home，night breeze made him at ease and he couldnt wait to share his experience with his wife and children and show the kindness of the world.
