1、 Section 写作指导写作指导 夯基提能作业夯基提能作业 写作方法指导写作方法指导 返回导航 写作方法指导写作方法指导 返回导航 写作指导 人物描写是记叙文的一种。是对人物外貌、个性以及主要事迹和贡 献进行描述。写好人物描写记叙文，应注意以下几点： 首先，应对此人进行简要的介绍，比如生平、事迹、职业等； 其次，挑选出此人一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写，要尽可能详 细，因为这影响到人们对他/她的整体评价； 最后，对此人进行客观地评价，包括其人格、贡献以及闪光点的评 价。 人物描写 返回导航 【常用表达】 1介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征 (1)He had fair hair and blue
2、 eyes. (2)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. (3)She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. (4)Sue was a young woman who was studying art. (5)He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man. 返回导航 2介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价 (1)He became famous for his new th
3、eory. (2)The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. (3)We regard him as our model. (4)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. 返回导航 精品展示 请你根据表格里的内容，用英语介绍简古道尔。 姓名简古道尔(Jane Goodall)博士 研究领域 著名的野生动物研究专家，尤其在研究黑猩猩方面 性格谦虚、坦诚、考虑周到 返回导航 姓名简古道尔(Jane Goodall)博士 成长 过程 1.童年时代，碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜
4、拉德博士的书。受 到极大鼓舞，打算研究动物 2在那个时代，妇女受到歧视，但妈妈支持她 320世纪60年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，用了25年多的时 间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动，完全弄懂了它们的行为 成就 1.成立了几个组织，发起了一项保护动物的运动 2在世界各地演讲，呼吁年轻一代参加“根与芽”活动 3被授予了多个奖项 返回导航 参考词汇：泰山和杜拉德博士Tarzan and Dr Doolittle；“根与 芽”“Shoot and Root” _ _ _ _ _ 返回导航 【审题谋篇】 第一步明确要求 1确定体裁：本文为_ 2确定人称：以第_人称为主 3确定时态：以_和_为主 4话题：记叙
5、女科学家在动物方面的研究 记叙文 三 一般现在时一般过去时 返回导航 第二步提炼要点 1成长过程 2成就 3总结 返回导航 第三步句式升级 1童年时代，她碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的书。 (一般表达)When she was a child, she happened to read a book of Tarzan and Dr Doolittle. (高级表达)In her childhood, she _ a book which is called Tarzan and Dr Doolittle _. came across by chance 返回导航 2她受到了极大的鼓舞，打
6、算将来研究动物。 (一般表达)She was encouraged and planned to study animals in the future. (高级表达)Greatly inspired by it, Jane _ animals one day. intended to study 返回导航 320世纪60年代，简动身去非洲研究黑猩猩，在那里她用了25年 多的时间观察和记录黑猩猩的日常活动。 (一般表达)In the 1960s, Jane went to Africa to study chimps, and there she spent over 25 years obs
7、erving and recording their daily activities. (高级表达)In the 1960s, Jane _ to Africa to study chimps, _ she spent over 25 years observing and recording their daily activities. moved off where 返回导航 参考范文： Dr Jane Goodall, a famous specialist, studies wild animals, especially in chimps.She is a modest, ou
8、tspoken and considerate woman. 返回导航 In her childhood, she came across a book which is called Tarzan and Dr Doolittle by chance.Greatly inspired by it, Jane intended to study animals one day.At that time, women were often looked down on and only her mother supported her decision.In the 1960s, Jane mo
9、ved off to Africa to study chimps, where she spent over 25 years observing and recording their daily activities and fully understood chimps behaviour.Setting up several organizations and launching a campaign to protect animals have made her famous all over the world.In recent years, Jane has deliver
10、ed speeches all over the world to call on younger generations to take part in her project “Shoot and Root” 返回导航 亮点点评： 本文行文流畅，描写到位。诸如modest, outspoken，considerate， look down on和support等高级词汇运用得当。高级句式例如“Greatly inspired by it”为过去分词短语作状语；“Setting up several organizations and launching a campaign to prot
11、ect animals”是动名词短语作主语，这些都 运用得很好。 返回导航 Many prizes have been awarded to Jane Goodall to honor her great achievements. 返回导航 2012年10月9日，巴基斯坦十五岁的女孩马拉拉在放学回家途中遭 到塔利班暗杀，头部中枪。康复后，马拉拉不畏威胁，积极为巴基斯坦 女童争取受教育的权利。联合国将每年的7月12日(她的生日)定为“马拉 拉日”(Malala Day)。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。短文应包括 以下内容： 1简述马拉拉的故事； 2说明教育的重要性(至少两点)； 3谈谈学校
12、教育对你的影响(至少两点)。 注意：词数80左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 返回导航 On October 9,2012，Malala, a 15-year-old Pakistani girl, was shot in the head by the Taliban on her way home from school._ _ _ _ _ 返回导航 参考范文： On October 9,2012，Malala, a 15-year-old Pakistani girl, was shot in the head by the Taliban on her way home from s
13、chool. However, the Taliban failed to silence her.After a miraculous recovery, she was committed to fighting for girls right to education.In honor of her bravery and devotion, the UN declared July 12 (her birthday) as Malala Day. Deeply inspired by the story of Malala, I firmly believe in the signif
14、icance of education.Education enables people to raise their voices for rights and change the world by calling for more equality. 返回导航 When I reflect on my own experience, I feel grateful that I have benefited a lot from my school education. I have acquired knowledge and skills to prepare myself for the future.Besides, school education provides me with opportunities to broaden my horizons and improve myself.
