1、1 M1U4 作文：作文：如何表达观点如何表达观点 1.写作典例写作典例 现在做整容手术很流行。假设你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter 来信向你询问周围 同学以及你对整容的看法。 主要内容： 1.持支持态度的人的理由和看法； 2.持反对态度的人的理由和看法； 3.你的看法。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2.写作思路写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段) (1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题 体裁：议论文 主题：对于整容的看法 (2)二定：确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称和第三人称 (3)三明确：明确写作要点 明确写作要点
2、：支持者的看法一反对者的看法你的看法 (4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关) 首段：支持者的看法 中段：反对者的看法 末段：你的看法 3.素材整理素材整理 (1)关键词语 2 share； plastic surgery； physical appearance； boost confidence； hold； opinion； risk； injury； ignore； look unnatural； make certain facial expression； be judged by；personally；appearance；quality；attractive appearance；a
3、s for me；content； unnecessary (2)完成句子 我写信来分享我的同学和我对于整容的看法。 (share； what 引导宾语从句) I am writing to _ _my classmates and I_ _ the plastic surgery. 一小部分同学认为这是人们提高自己的颜值，增强自信心的一个很好的选择。 (vt.+it+n.+for sb.to do sth.；improve； boost) A small part of my classmates_ _ _ _ _for people_ _their physical appearance
4、and their confidence. 然而， 大部分同学持有不同的观点。(hold) However， most of my classmates_ _ _ _. 首先， 整容手术中受伤的风险不可忽视。(risk；ignore； 被动语态) First， the _of injury in plastic surgery_ _ _. 失败的手术会让人看起来不自然，无法做出面部表情。(主谓宾+宾补； failed) A_one_ _ _ _unnatural and to make certain facial expression. 更重要的是，人们应该以个性而不是外表来评判一个人。(b
5、e judged by； personality) Whats more ，people should _ _ _ _ _ _ appearance. 宝贵的品质是善良、 诚实和勇气， 而不仅仅是美丽的外表。 (valuable； quality； attractive； not just) The_arekindness,honestyandcourage,_ _attractive appearance. 就我而言，我们的内在比外表要重要得多。(比较级； content； cover) 3 _ _me， our_are much_ _ than our cover. 爱自己本来的样子，整容
6、手术不是必要的。(祈使句+连词+陈述句) Love yourself just_ _ _ _and plastic surgery is unnecessary. Keys： share what； think of think it a good choice； to improve； boost hold a different opinion risk； cant be ignored failed； makes the face look； unable be judged by person at y rather than valuable qualities； not just
7、As for； contents； more important the way you are 4.连句成篇连句成篇 Dear Peter， I am writing to share what my class mare w and I think of the plastic surgery.A small part of my think it a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. However， most of my classmates h
8、old a different opinion.First，the risk of injury in plasticsurgery cant be ignored.(被动语态体现了对语法的驾驭能力)A failed one makes the face look unnatural and unable to make certain facial expression. （本句采用了主谓宾宾补的句型） Whats more， people should he judged by personality rather than （被动语 态和高级词组）appearance.The valua
9、ble qualities are kindness， honesty and courage， not just attractive appearance. As for me，our contents are much moreimportant than our cover. Love yourself just the way you are and plastic surgery is unnecessary. 5. 写作训练写作训练 A 假定你是李华， 你的朋友 Lily 因为节食减而生病了，请根据下列要点用英语给 4 她写一封 80 词左右的电子邮，鼓励她加强锻冻，早日恢复健康
10、。 1.表达同情： 2.保持健康很重要； 3.给出建议。 _ _ _ _ _ B 某英语报社正在举行征文比赛，题目是“谈谈你对现代中学生庆祝外来节日的看 法” 。假设你经过调查总结出以下两方面的观点，请根据表格内容写一篇 100 词 左右的文章，表达自己的观点。 赞成反对 1.促进对国方文化的了解 2.西方节日趣味性强 1.学生盲日追求时尚 2.不了解西方节日的历史 3.对中国传统节日兴趣减弱 _ _ _ _ _ 5 One possible version： Dear Lily， Im sorry to hear that you were ill.Every girl hopes to k
11、eep slim.But we know that keeping fit and healthy is very important. Id like to tell you some ways to keep healthy. First， a healthy diet is good for you.Its better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables with rich vitamins and fiber.Dont eat food which contains too much sugar and fat， like cheese ，chocol
12、ate ，etc.Fat and sugar can make you put on weight easily.Second， its very important to have good living habits.You should do regular exercise and have enough rest.Besides， a cheerful state of mind is equally important to our health as healthy diets and regular exercise. Lets keep fit and healthy tog
13、ether. Yours， LiHua B One possible version： Nowadays， many middle school students like celebrating Western festivals， such as Christmas and April Fools Day. In my opinion， celebrating Western festivals is a good way for middle school students to understand more about Western culture.At the same time
14、， many Western festivals are very interesting. However ，there are also some disadvantages of celebrating Western festivals.For example ， some students simply do it because Western festivals are popular among young people.In fact，they know nothing about the history of Western festivals.In some cases， students dont want to celebrate our own traditional festivals because they think that traditional Chinese festivals are out of date. As far as I am concerned， our traditional festivals are the treasure of the nation， so we should attach more importance to them 6
