1、1 2020 年秋季课程年秋季课程 M1U2 作文作文-如何写一封建议信如何写一封建议信 1.写作指导写作指导 建议信是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、 建议或忠告的信。 建议信可以写给个人， 就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的观点；也可以写给某个组织或机构，就改进其 服务等提出建议或忠告。 建议信除了要遵循书信的格式之外，一般需要说明写信的原因，提出合情合理的 建议及理由，语气礼貌当先。建议角度多样化，避免重复。 内容要简明扼要、目的明确、理由充足、具有合理性和说服力。 常用表达： It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on. 我很高兴为你提供一些关于
2、的建议。 I am writing to express my views concerning. 我写信是为了表达我对的看法。 You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions. 你向我咨询了关于.的建议，我会尽量提出一些建议。 I would like to suggest that. 我想建议 If I were you， I would. 如果我是你， 我会 In my opinion， it would be wise to take the following actions. 在我看来，
3、 采取以下行动是明智的。 I think it would be more beneficial if you could. 我想如果你能会更好。 I wonder if you have considered the following points. 我想知道你是否考虑过以下几点。 I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. 2 我希望这些建议对你有帮助。 2.写作典例写作典例 假如你是 21st Century 报社的编辑李华，你收到一个名叫 Lori 的女孩的来信。 她 向你询问如何交友。请给她写一封回信，并提出建议。 要点提示：
4、1.每个人都需要朋友，了解如何交友极为重要； 2.要交朋友，首先要对别人友好。微笑是吸引别人的吸铁石(magnet) ； 3.要让陌生人觉得你容易相处，要关心别人胜过关心自己： 4.记住别人的名字； 5.与别人有分歧时，不要争吵，要商讨。 要求： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 3.写作思路写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段) (1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题 体裁：应用文建议信 主题：就如何交友提出建议 (2)二定：确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关) 时态：一般现在时和一般将来时 人称：以第一人称(I， we) 和第二人称(you) 为主 (3)三
5、明确 明确写作要点：说明建议的内容；提出具体建议；指出采纳建议的益处。 (4)四分段 (与写作要点息息相关) 根据书信特点一般分为三个段落。书信的开头、主体和结尾三个部分。 4.素材整理素材整理 (1)关键词语 have trouble in,be friendly to,be willing to help sb.,in return,do ones best to, 3 get along with,make an impression on sb.， disagree with， discuss with， think more of (2)翻译句子 我很遗憾你在交朋友方面遇到了麻烦。(
6、have trouble in) _ 每个人都需要朋友，如何交朋友是一个重要的话题。(make friends) _ 要交朋友，你必须对别人友好，并愿意帮助他们。(be friendly to；be willing to) _ 微笑就像磁铁一样吸引着人们。(magnet， draw) _ 对别人微笑， 别人也一定会对你微笑。(in return) _ 你应该尽力让一个陌生人觉得你很容易相处。(easy to get along with) _ 试 着 记 住 别 人 的 名 字 ， 这 会 让 他 们 觉 得 他 们 给 你 留 下 了 印 象 。 (make an impression on
7、) _ 如果你不同意别人的观点，不要争辩，要和他们讨论。(disagree with) _ 你应该多为别人着想，不要总想着自己。(think more of others) _ 不要相信那些在朋友有困难的时候离开他们的人，因为“患难见真情”。 (in trouble) _ Keys：I am sorry you are having trouble in making friends. 4 Everyone needs friends ， and how to make friends is an important subject. To make friends， you must be
8、friendly to others and willing to help them. A smile is like a magnet that draws people. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return.) You should do your best to make a stranger feel you are easy to get along with. Trytorememberothersnames,which will make them feel that they hav
9、e made an impression on you. If you disagree with others， dont argue but discuss with them. You should think more of others than of yourself. Dontbelievethosewholeavetheirfriends when they are in trouble because“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”. 5.连句成篇连句成篇 Dear Lori， Iamsorryyouarehavingtrouble
10、inmakingfriends.Everyone needs friends， and how to make friends is an important subject. Firstly ， （ 衔 接 词 Firstly,Secondly,Finally 的 使 用 让 文 章 层 次 清 晰 ） tomakefriends,youmustbefriendlytoothersandwilling to help them.A smile is like a magnet that draws people. （定语从句） Smile at others andyouarealwayss
11、ure to geta smile in return.Youshould doyour best to make a stranger feel you are easy to get along with.Secondly ， torememberothersnames ，whichwillmakethemfeelthatthey have made an impression on you.（which 引导的非限制性定语从句中又包含了 that 引导的宾语从句）If you disagree with others，dont argue but discuss with them. Y
12、oushouldthinkmoreofothersthanofyourself. Finally，dontbelievethosewholeavetheirfindswhenthey are in trouble because“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”（长难句的使用为文章 增色） 5 I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. Yours sincerely， LiHua 6.写作训练写作训练 A 假如你是李华，有一个好朋友叫王刚，进人高中后，他的学习压力越来越大，常 常熬夜，而白天却打不
13、起精神听课，学习成绩每况愈下，为此他很痛苦，写信求 助于你。请你写一封信给他，提出一些自我调整的建议。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Wang Gang， _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours truly， LiHua B 6 假如你是李华， 你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条 线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你 给他回信， 内容包括： 1.你建议的线路； 2.你的理由； 3.你的祝愿。 注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2.开头和结尾已
14、给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Jim， _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， LiHua C 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假 设你是该栏目的编辑李华，收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你 诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英 文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下： 1.表示理解并给予安慰； 2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右； 2.信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 7 3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 参考词汇：temper n.脾气， 情绪 Dear Worr
15、ied， Imsorrytoknowthatyourehavingsuchabadtimeatthe moment._ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， LiHua 答案： A One possible version： Dear Wang Gang， Im sorry to hear that you are having difficulty in learning.Here are some pieces of advice， hoping they are helpful to you. Firstly， you should follow your teachers advice
16、， as its the first time for us to go through the College Entrance Examination while our teachers have so much experience.Secondly， you are advised to have a good sleep because a lack of sleep may make you have a hard time catching up in your studies， Thirdly， its necessary for you to make full use o
17、f daytime.In a word ，relax yourself and believe in yourself， and I do believe you can be successful! Yours truly， LiHua B 8 One possible version： Dear Jim， Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.P
18、ersonally， I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River， which is the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn alot about China and Chinese people.Moreover， the scenery along the river is amazing， with many well-known sightseeing spots.Thats why I think the trip
19、along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. Hope youll have a good time in China. Yours， LiHua One possible version： Dear Worried， Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont
20、 have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not door say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips： First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second， go o
21、utdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third，remain optimistic about your future，Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours， LiHua 9
