1、 假如你是李华，你班交换生假如你是李华，你班交换生AmyAmy这两天因身体不适，未这两天因身体不适，未能到校上课，请给她写一封邮件，要点如下：能到校上课，请给她写一封邮件，要点如下：1. 1. 表示表示安慰安慰；2.2.询问询问她是否能参加下周六学校举行的足球她是否能参加下周六学校举行的足球比赛；比赛；3.3.邀请邀请她下个月到你家共度端午节。她下个月到你家共度端午节。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数8080左右；左右； 2. 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Homework-checkingtype: a letter of inquiry and invitat
2、ion;content: 3 given points;tense：simple present and future tense;person: the 1st person; the 2nd personDear Army, Knowing that you couldnt go to school because of your healthy problem, Im writing to express my sincerely concerning to you. Having healthy problem is an ordinary thing, so you shouldnt
3、 worry about it a lot. Moreover, the soccer ball games which you expect most will be hold in school next Saturday. I wonder if you can join it in this situation. Oltimately, the Dragon Boat Festival will coming! I sincerely invite you to celebrate it with me if you have free time. Hope that you can
4、accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes for you!health problemsincereconcernwill be held in our schooljoin in itUltimatelyis comingthe soccer game.Dear Amy, Knowing that you couldnt go to school because of your health problem, Im writing to express my sincere concern t
5、o you. The soccer game which you expect most will be held in our school next Saturday. I wonder if you can join in it in this situation. Ultimately, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming! I sincerely invite you to celebrate it with me if you have free time. Hope that you can accept my invitation. Looki
6、ng forward to your early reply. Best wishes for you! Yours, Li Hua higher marks?1. 1.本题总分为本题总分为1515分，按分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。2. 2.评分时，先根据评分时，先根据文章内容文章内容和和语言语言初步确定其所属档次，然后初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3. 3.词数少于词数少于6060和多于和多于100100的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2 2分分。4. 4.应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇
7、和语法结构的应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰丰富富性和性和准确准确性以及上下文的性以及上下文的连贯连贯性。性。5. 5.拼写与标点拼写与标点符号是符号是语言准确性语言准确性的一个方面，应视其对交际的的一个方面，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。影响程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 6.若若书写书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。Requirements档档 次次描描 述述第五档第五档(13-15) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖覆盖所有内容要点所有内容要点。
8、应用了应用了较多的语法结构和词汇较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预。完全达到了预期的写作目的。期的写作目的。第四档第四档(10-12) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。应用的语法结构和词汇
9、能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作。达到了预期的写作目的。目的。 language: correctvaried authentic content: complete specific structure:smoothCriteriaDear Amy, Knowing that you couldnt go to school because of your
10、 health problem, Im writing to express my sincere concern to you. The soccer game which you expect most will be held in our school next saturday. I wonder if you can join in it in this situation. Ultimately, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming! I sincerely invite you to celebrate it with me if you ha
11、ve free time. Hope that you can accept my invitation. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes for you! 语言：语言：语言枯燥乏味语言枯燥乏味内容：内容：1 1) )形式化问候与祝形式化问候与祝愿愿2)2)语气不得体语气不得体结构：结构：1)1)简单简单罗列要点罗列要点2)2)上下语意不连贯上下语意不连贯Common problemsYours，Li Hua language:varied authentic content: complete specific structu
12、re:smoothBeginning: 1. 表示表示安慰安慰 Knowing that you couldnt go to school because of your health problem, Im writing to express my sincere concern to you.表达表达“安慰安慰”的常用句型：的常用句型：Knowing ., I feel terribly sorry about that.Im very sorry to hear that.I regret to hear that.Im much grieved to hear that.Im sho
13、cked to hear of.I cant tell you how sorry/sad I felt when I heard that.I am writing to express my deep sympathy/care for you.(1) Use authentic expressions to communicate properly Knowing that you are absent from school because of illness, I feel terribly sorry about it. Im so sorry to hear that you
14、suddenly fell ill. Hopefully, youll soon be all right. Knowing that you are absent from school because of illness, I am writing to express my deep care/sincere concern for you.1. 现在，我们很难放下手机专注于学习或工作。Nowadays, it is difficult for us to put down our smartphone and pay attention to our study and work.2
15、. 在仪式上，我们对父母为我们所做的一切表达了谢意。During the ceremony, we say thanks to our parents for what they have done for us. During the ceremony, we conveyed/expressed our appreciation / gratefulness to our parents for what they have done for us.Nowadays, it is a challenge / challenging/ tough for us to put down our
16、 smartphone and focus on/ devote ourself to study and work.3.沉溺于手机会对我们的健康，尤其是眼睛造成伤害。Being addicted to smartphones is harmful to our health, especially to our eyes.Being addicted to smartphones is of great harm to / does harm to our health, especially to our eyes.Practice The soccer games which you e
17、xpect most will be held in our school next saturday. I wonder if you can join in it in this situation. Body: : 2.2.询问询问她是否能参加下周六学校举行的足球比赛；她是否能参加下周六学校举行的足球比赛；(2) Use varied structures to state clearly and smoothly As scheduled, the football match which you expect most will take place/be held next Sat
18、urday. Considering your condition, I wonder if you can participate in/take part in it by then.considering your conditionDeeply interested in traditional Chinese art and having received agood education in art, I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings. 二二. 使用使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档非谓语动词使句子简洁高档1) I am deepl
19、y interested in traditional Chinese art and have received a good education in art. I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings. Practice非谓语动词非谓语动词 2) I can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings, but also tell the stories behind them. Not only can I explain to the visitors the
20、 beauty of the paintings, but also tell the stories behind them.倒装句倒装句3) I am quite satisfied that I have a good command of English, so I haveno difficulty communicating with others.What satisfies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty communicating with others. 名词性从句
21、名词性从句4) As the Dragon Boat Festival was approaching, my family decided to hold a party to celebrate it. With Teachers Day approaching, my family decided to hold a party to celebrate it. with 结构结构强调句强调句/虚拟语气虚拟语气. Ultimately, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming! I sincerely invite you to celebrate it w
22、ith me if you have free time. Hope that you can accept my invitation.3.3.邀请邀请她下个月到你家共度端午节。她下个月到你家共度端午节。coherence (3) Use proper conjunctives to state logicallyif you are availableHopefully By the way, the traditional Dragon Boat Festival is coming next month. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it w
23、ith me if you are available. Hopefully, you can accept my invitation. By the way, . is approaching/around the corner next month. My family and I are all expecting your coming to enjoy the authentic festive atmosphere with us. I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation/join us.表比较表比较like; similarl
24、y; on the contrary; equally important; compared with; in contrast.表转折表转折yet; while; nevertheless; whereas; although; despite the fact that; on the other hand; even so; instead; unlike; unfortunately表因果表因果therefore; as a result/consequence; consequently; hence; accordingly; thanks to; due to; owing t
25、o; since; considering that表递进表递进whats more; whats worse; worse still; moreover; furthermore; not only but also.; additionally; in addition; apart from.表次序表次序at first; in the first place; first of all; to begin with; above all; then; next; first and foremost; afterwards; the most important of all; ev
26、entually; meanwhile; at the same time;表总结表总结in short/brief/conclusion/summary; to sum up; on the whole; in a word; in general; generally speaking.表例证表例证for example/instance; takeas an /for example; such as; especially.副词副词hopefully; sadly; fortunately; unfortunately; surprisinglyCommon conjunctivesF
27、ill in the blanks, using proper conjunctives.1 _the Spring Festival is around the corner, Im writing to invite you to spend it with my family _ _ you can know more about it.2. The whole family get together to enjoy delicious food, _ chicken, fish, dumplings to celebrate it, during which we visit our
28、 relatives and friends _.3. Nowadays/Currently, most students in our school read little English literature, _because they consider it too difficult, _ because they think it not necessary.Fill in the blanks, using proper linking words. The reasons for my application are as follows._ _, having been ex
29、posed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. _, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. _ _，my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chine
30、se art form. _, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. Id appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes for you! May you recover soon. We are looking forward to your coming back. Wish you speedy recovery. D
31、ont hesitate to tell me if you could come. I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you will be feeling much better.Ending：表达祝愿表达祝愿specificcomplete(4) Send specific wishesAn improved-versionDear Amy, I am so sorry to learn that you suddenly fell ill. Hopefully youll soon be all right. As sch
32、eduled, our football match will take place next Saturday. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take part in it by then. By the way, our traditional Dragon Boat Festival is coming next month. My family and I are all expecting your coming to enjoy the authentic festive atmosphere with us. Wish y
33、ou speedy recovery. Dont hesitate to tell me if you could come. Yours, Li Hua(1) Use authentic expressions to communicate properly(2) Use varied structures to state clearly and smoothly (3) Use proper conjunctives to state logically language: varied/authentic content: complete/specific structure: sm
34、oothSummary假假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括: : 1. 1.询问近况；询问近况； 2. 2.分享班级最新消息；分享班级最新消息； 3. 3.表达祝愿。表达祝愿。 注意注意:1.:1.词数词数8080左右；左右； 2.2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Homework13-1413-14分分Dear Peter, Weve been missing you badly since you had gone back to
35、Ireland for health reasons. Im writing on behalf of the whole class to extend our concern to you. So have you got better now? The class atmosphere is much less active without your humor, but we do study hard and write an essay every other week as you hoped. Also, Mary and I had won the first prize in the school speech contest with your guidance through phone calls. Many thanks for that! May you recover soon. We are looking forward to attending you class again!Yours,Li Hua表达思念表达思念语气委婉语气委婉目的明确目的明确询问近况询问近况分享消息分享消息围绕外教围绕外教表达感谢表达感谢衷心祝愿衷心祝愿
