1、Body Language in Contiuation Writing身体语言在读后续写中的运用Lets try to describe the people in the pictures and pay attention to their body language.OneCharlot placed his head on his hand and stared at Rachel with sparkling eyes, but Rachel just lowered her head with a frown.手托着脑袋place/rest ones head on ones h
2、and盯着某人看stare at sb.眼睛闪闪发光with sparkling eyesTranslate: Charlot 手托着脑袋，盯着Rachel看，目光炯炯，但是 Rachel只是皱着眉低下了头。 低下头 lower ones head皱着眉 with a frown指着某人 point at sb.低头看某物 look down at sth一言不发 in silence / without a wordPointing at Charlot with his folding fan, Mr Wang criticized him for doing a poor job in
3、the exam, and Charlot looked down at his paper without a word.Translate: 用折扇(folding fan) 指着Charlot，Mr. Wang批评他考试没考好。Charlot低头看着试卷，一言不发。 盯着某人看 fix ones eyes on sb 突然大笑 burst into laughterWith their eyes fixed on Charlot who was being punished, the whole class burst ino laughter.Translate: 看着正在受罚Char
4、lot，全班大笑起来。 凝视某人的眼睛 look into ones eyes 向某人道歉 apologize to sb (for sth)Looking into Mr Wangs eyes, Charlot apologized to him sincerely and promised to keep away from Rachel.Translate: 看着Mr Wang的眼睛，Charlot真诚地向他道歉并承诺离Rachel远一点。 Lets discuss how to describe a persons body language.Two Charlot placed hi
5、s head on his hand and stared at Rachel with sparkling eyes, but Rachel just lowered her head with a frown. Charlot looked down at his paper in silence.1. 单个的动作或连续的动作，直接用谓语或并列谓语表达。注意：一些伴随的动作可以用介词短语作状语表达。 Pointing at Charlot with his folding fan, Mr Wang criticized him for doing a poor job in the exa
6、m. Looking into Mr Wangs eyes, Charlot apologized to him sincerely and promised to keep away from Rachel.2. 同时发生的动作，可以用现在分词作状语表达。注意：现在分词的逻辑主语和主句的主语必须一致。3. 同时发生的动作，也可以用with+宾语+宾补或者独立主格结构作状语表达。With their eyes fixed on Charlot, the whole class burst ino laughter.Their eyes fixed on Charlot , the whole
7、class burst ino laughter. （独立主格结构）注意：独立主格结构的逻辑主语和主句的主语不一致。Example:have ones arms crossed in front of ones chest He had his arms crossed in front of his chest and refused to talk to me. Having his arms crossed in front of his chest, he refused to talk to me. With his arms crossed in front of his ches
8、t, he refused to talk to me. His arms crossed in front of his chest, he refused to talk to me.他把双臂抱在胸前，拒绝跟我说话。（并列谓语）（现在分词作状语）（with+宾语+宾补结构作状语）（独立主格结构作状语）Practice: 用以上任意一种方法翻译下列句子。 看着手中的信，她抑制不住自己的泪水。 手托着下巴，他几乎睡着了。 他拍了拍儿子的肩膀，鼓励他振作起来。 妈妈流着泪把我紧紧拥入怀中。 看着手中的信，她抑制不住自己的泪水。 手托着下巴，他几乎睡着了。Looking down at the l
9、etter in her hands, she couldnt hold back her tears.With her eyes fixed on the letter in her hands, she couldnt hold back her tears.With his chin on his hand, he almost fell asleep.Chin on hand, he almost fell asleep. 他拍了拍儿子的肩膀，鼓励他振作起来。 妈妈流着泪把我拥入怀中。Patting his son on the shoulder, he encouraged him
10、to cheer up.Mom pulled me into her arms, with tears streaming down her face.Mom pulled me into her arms, tears streaming down her face.ThreeLets try to feel the emotions conveyed by the discription of a persons body language.名作赏析朱自清背影节选Seeing Father From the Back -By Zhu Ziqing我说道，我说道，“爸爸，你走吧。爸爸，你走吧
11、。”他他望车外看了看望车外看了看，说，说，“我买几个橘子我买几个橘子去。你就在此地，不要走动。去。你就在此地，不要走动。”I said, “Dad, you might leave now.” But he looked out of window and said, “Im going to buy you some oranges. You just stay here. Dont move around.”我看那边月台的栅栏外有几个卖东西我看那边月台的栅栏外有几个卖东西的等着顾客。的等着顾客。走到那边月台，走到那边月台，须穿过铁道，须穿过铁道，须跳下去又爬上去。须跳下去又爬上去。父亲是一
12、个胖子，走父亲是一个胖子，走过去自然要费些事。过去自然要费些事。 I caught sight of several vendors /vendr/ (小贩) waiting for customers outside the fence beyond a platform. But to reach that platform would require crossing the railway track and doing some climbing up and down. That would be a hard job for father, who was fat. 我本来要去的
13、，他不肯，只好让他我本来要去的，他不肯，只好让他去。去。我看见他我看见他戴着黑布小帽。穿着黑布戴着黑布小帽。穿着黑布大马褂，深青布棉袍，大马褂，深青布棉袍，蹒跚地走到铁道蹒跚地走到铁道边边.I wanted to do all that myself, but he stopped me, so I could do nothing but let him go. I watched him hobble /hbl/ (蹒跚) towards the railway track in his black cap, black cloth Chinese jacket and dark blue
14、 cotton cloth gown /an/ (袍子). .慢慢探身下去，尚不大难。可慢慢探身下去，尚不大难。可是他穿过铁道，要爬上那边月台，就不是他穿过铁道，要爬上那边月台，就不容易了。容易了。他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向他用两手攀着上面，两脚再向上缩上缩; ; 他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努他肥胖的身子向左微倾，显出努力的样子。力的样子。He had little trouble climbing down the railway track, but it was a lot more difficult for him to climb up that platform after cr
15、ossing the railway track. His hands held onto the upper part of the platform, his legs huddled/hdl/ (蜷缩) up and his overweight body leaned slightly towards the left, obviously making an enormous effort. Translate:Translate: 这时我看见他的背影，我这时我看见他的背影，我眼泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪，眼泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪，怕他看见，也怕别人看见。我再向外看怕
16、他看见，也怕别人看见。我再向外看时，他已抱了朱红的橘子往回走了。时，他已抱了朱红的橘子往回走了。While I was watching him from behind, tears streamed down from my eyes. I quickly wiped them away in case he or others would catch me crying. The next moment I looked out of the window again, father was already on the way back, holding bright red orang
17、es in both hands.Question:What emotions can you feel through the discriptions of the body langage in this passage?Love and care between father and son.Tips:The description of body language can convey ones feelings.Plain but emotional language can impress readers the most.FourLets try to complete a c
18、ontinuation writing by describing a persons body language.After the interview, all the candidates(候选人) were waiting outside the room nervously. The result was soon announced and I was told by the judges that I was not selected again. _ _ It was when I was about to give up that my teacher showed up.
19、_ _ The encouragement from the teacher made a great difference in my life and I decided to try again. frustration/ despairencouragementIt was a year of hard training before I signed up for the same tryout(选拔) again. This was my last chance! _ _ Obviously, the judges could feel my nervousness, so he
20、asked me gently, “Why do you want to become a cheerleader (啦啦队队员)？” _ _. The interview was over and soon it turned out that I was chosen this time! _ _. It was the happiest moment in my life!nervousnesstry to relieve ones nervousness / show confidencehappinessAfter the interview, all the candidates(
21、候选人) were waiting outside the room nervously. The result was soon announced and I was told by the judges that I was not selected again. I was frozen to the spot at the news and tears began to well up in my eyes. It was when I was about to give up that my teacher showed up. Patting me on the shoulder
22、, he convinced me that I was meant to succed if I could gave myself another chance. The encouragement from the teacher made a great difference in my life and I decided to try again. It was a year of hard training before I signed up for the same tryout(选拔) again. This was my last chance! Standing in
23、front of the judges, I could feel my legs trembling and palms sweating. Obviously, one of the judges could feel my nervousness, and he asked me gently, “Why do you want to become a cheerleader (啦啦队队员)？” Taking a deep breath, I began to answer his question confidently with a smile on my face. The interview was over and soon it turned out that I was chosen this time! Upon hearing the news, I jumped to my feet and people around me burst into cheers. It was the happiest moment in my life!
