1、-Describe a place that you likeLearning goaLsKnowledge objectives:Learn to describe familiar, interesting, exciting or surprising places.Skill objectives: Learn to describe a scene through visual, auditory, tactile, and olfactory perspectives.Emotional objectives:Reflecting on and exploring the hist
2、orical and cultural values of domestic and especially nearby attractions.Thinking quality objectives:felt the authors love for the Irish countryside.review_writing 如何描述你喜欢的地方A.描述一个漂亮或者特殊的地方总体上属于介绍事物的说明文。它的要点内容可包括:地理位置、面积、人口、气候状况、著名的景点以及与众不同之处等。B.写说明文,时态应以现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。题型解读writing 写作攻略 开头:介绍该地方的基本信
3、息(位置,面积等); 主体:描述该地方的一些具体信息(著名的景点,与众不同之处); 结尾:作者对此地点的感受。1.基本框架 介绍事物的说明文,以说明事实为准,写说明文,时态以现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。2.写作特点 注意内容要符合事实,避免全篇都在写自我感受。3.注意事项writing 模板素材常用句型 Located in.is a cit.with a history of(分词结构作状语) .lies in/on.lies near/behind/in front of/by the side of/between/among .stands at the foot of/on th
4、e top of.5 With . on/to the east/west/north/.borders.o the south/ west east/southwriting .covers/takes up a total area of .with a population of . ( with结构作定语) .has a population of. .is a city with a population of. 模板素材常用句型writing It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, cold, sunny, rainy.) lts like s
5、pring all the year round. People in . can enjoy typical tropical climate( 典型的热带气候 ), which is so pleasant that every year, many tourists come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery, among which.is the most popular. The average temperature ranges between 23 and 39 模板素材常用句型writing 模板素材常用句型 .has a history
6、 of. .with a history of. (with 结构作定语) E.著名的原因 .is famous for. The special character of. is attracting more and more touristsfrom all over the world. The places around our city are rich in natural/travelling resources. The city, known as., attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. The ci
7、ty is home to.writing 介绍该地的地理位置、面积、人口等基本信息;介绍该地的气候情况;介绍该地的著名景点;表达情感、寄予希望。 模板素材写作模板Located in., my hometown.is a city (place, province.) with a history of.lies in the southwest of. It covers/has a total area of7,686,850 square kilometres with a population of2.8 million. It is warm (dry, cold, sunny,
8、rainy.) Because. is famous/well-known for., the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery. Besides, the special character of . is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. More importantly, it has many world-famous places of interest, such as. and. I love my hometow
9、n.If you have a chance, I hope you can come here. writing 假如你是南京某校的高三学生李华,你们学校将举办一个演讲比赛,题目为“介绍自己的家乡”,请你写一篇演讲稿介绍自己的家乡。_典例分析writing 典例分析写作分析本文是一个演讲稿,题目是介绍自己的家乡,但是已经给出了李华为南京学生,所以介绍的地点已经明确,属于对一个地方的描述。writing 典例分析词汇和句型位于. lies in/be located in,Located in.,.is one of. belong to属于have/with a population of有
10、人口It covers/has a total area of. square kilometres.面积/占地平方公里 writing 有年悠久的历史 have/with a long history of.以著名be famous/well-known for被誉为 be known/honoured as在方面取得很大的进步 have made great progress in.在方面取得了令人瞩目的进步make significant progress in.writing Ladies and gentlemen, good morning. My name is Li Hua,
11、and I am a student in Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province. located in the southeast of China. It covers an area of 6,587 square kilometres with a population of about 8 million. The city has a long history of over 2,400 years, which was the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like
12、 the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Ming Dynasty. It is so rich in places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City that attracts a large number of tourists from home and abroad. Besides, many modern factories and high buildings are seen everywhere. Most importantly, people
13、 can enjoy the pleasant climate all the year around and the convenient transportation available can make you enjoy the beautiful scenery in the city easily.I love my hometown Nanjing. If you have a chance, I hope you can come here.典例分析范文赏读writing 文章涵盖了题目中所要求的内容,结构条理清楚,段落分配合理。:点明了演讲的主题,介绍了南京的地理位置、面积、
14、人口、气候和历史背景等内容,同时也介绍了几个著名的旅游景点并描述了现代南京的发展情况。:表达自己对家乡的喜爱,并发出邀请。典例分析结构点评writing 文中 besides,most importantly 等连接词汇的使用使文章衔接紧密,逻辑清晰。文中多处使用了复杂的句式,如“.I am a student in Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, located in the southeast of China.”(非谓语动词),“The city has a long history of over 2,400 years, which was the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Ming Dynasty.”(非限制性定语从句)等。典例分析语言点评homeworkMary