1、Unit2 单元写作指导 如何写建议信建议信感知文体常识感知文体常识建议信类属于应用文,是写信人向收信人针对某事提出的建议或忠告。信的内容要包含写信的目的、具体建议以及提出建议的理由等。文章结构一般是“三段式”,通常以 firstly,secondly,thirdly或 to begin/start with,then/later,last but not least等为序依次陈述建议,使用礼貌用语,且语气要温和、委婉。牢记写作素材牢记写作素材(一)增色词汇1.tension n.紧张2.anxious adj.忧虑的,担心的3.target n.目标,对象;靶子4.struggle v.奋斗
2、;斗争5.view n.看法6.normal adj.正常的(二)精彩句型1.You have asked me for advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.你问过我关于的建议。我会尝试提出一些建议。2.Thanks for trusting me.Its my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.谢谢你信任我。我很高兴能给你一些建议。3.I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have
3、 tried whatever you can do to live up to their standard.我相信他们会对你感到满意的,只要他们知道你已经尽了一切努力来达到他们的标准。4.Im willing to discuss the matter with you whenever you need help.无论你什么时候需要帮助,我都愿意和你讨论这个问题。示例写作步骤示例写作步骤【写作要求写作要求】(2022山东沂水高一上期中)假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter沉迷于手机,引起父母不满,因而彼此产生矛盾。Peter写信向你倾诉苦恼,求助于你。请根据以下要点给Peter写一封电子
4、邮件:1.表达对他的情况的理解;2.提出解决问题的建议;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_Yours,Li Hua【审题谋篇审题谋篇】体裁说明文人称第一、二人称时态一般现在时话题针对如何解决矛盾提供建议框架第一段 引入话题:表达理解第二段 介绍细节:如何解决问题第三段 表达祝愿【遣词造句遣词造句】1.词汇使沉迷 v.不高兴的,恼怒的 adj.影响 n.把考虑在内 对有害 addictupseteffecttake.into considerationdo harm to2.句式(1)要点翻译我很抱歉知道你对手机上瘾。这让你的父母很难
5、过。I am sorry to know that you are addicted to the mobile phone.That.你需要手机的实际用途。你可以与你的父母沟通,并在他们的允许下使用。You need the mobile phone for practical use.You can .我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。I wish my suggestions to be of help to you.makes your parents upsetcommunicate with your parents and use it with their permission(2
6、)句式升级用定语从句合并句的两个简单句用条件状语从句改写句用名词性从句改写句I am sorry to know that you are addicted to the mobile phone,which makes your parents upset.If you need the mobile phone for practical use,you can communicate with your parents and use it with their permission.I hope my suggestions will be of help to you.【妙笔成篇妙笔
7、成篇】Dear Peter,I am sorry to know that you are addicted to the mobile phone,which makes your parents upset.I can understand your feeling.After all,most of the teenagers have the same problem.I think you need to take your parents feelings into consideration.Overusing mobile phones will have a bad effe
8、ct on your study.Besides,it is not good for your eyes and does harm to your health.Whats more,if you need the mobile phone for practical use,you can communicate with your parents and use it with their permission.I hope my suggestions will be of help to you.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,L
9、i Hua针对训练假定你是李华,是学校广播站的主持人。一位叫王佳的同学给你来信说,因父母对她过度保护,她感觉没有自由,十分苦恼。请用英文给她写一封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议;3.你的希望。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:过度保护的overprotectiveDear Wang Jia,_Yours,Li HuaDear Wang Jia,More than glad to hear from you,I can understand your feelings.Sometimes parents can become overprotect
10、ive.After all,its their duty to protect their children from harm.But dont be unhappy.Instead,try the following pieces of advice.Firstly,tell your parents what you think about their protective behavior.Tell them you fully understand their love for you,but explain the side effects of overprotection.Moreover,show your parents how responsible you can be and make it clear whenever you need their help.I hope you will find my advice helpful.Wish you all the best.Yours,Li Hua
