1、1 1命题探索命题探索2 2教材链接教材链接3 3佳句储备佳句储备4 4三阶攻关三阶攻关5 5写作练兵写作练兵命题探索命题探索 分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“英语学习英语学习”这一话题，共考查这一话题，共考查2次，且角度不同：次，且角度不同：2016年从年从“英语不好是因为英语不好是因为不说英语不说英语”还是还是“不说英语是因为英语不好不说英语是因为英语不好”来探讨来探讨如何学习英语如何学习英语；2012年就年就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题这一问题谈谈谈谈自己对教学方式的看法自己对教学方式的
2、看法。分析全国近年真题可知，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：分析全国近年真题可知，全国关于这个话题相关的命题角度有：介绍英语学习情况、反映英语学习中存在的一些问题、介绍英语学介绍英语学习情况、反映英语学习中存在的一些问题、介绍英语学习方法及学习英语的益处习方法及学习英语的益处等。等。教材链接教材链接人教教材中涉及人教教材中涉及“英语学习英语学习”这个话题的单元具体如下这个话题的单元具体如下（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：（可参考对应教材单元记背优秀文段）：佳句储备佳句储备1 1角度角度学习方法及建议学习方法及建议【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】1.Good learners often
3、connect what they need to learn with something interesting.(扩写事例扩写事例)Good learners often connect what they need to learn with something interesting.For example,if they need to learn English and they like music,they can listen to English songs.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 1 P62.Good learners also look for ways to
4、review what they have learned.(扩写方法扩写方法)Good learners also look for ways to review what they have learned.They may do this by reading their notes every day.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 1 P63.Millions of people prefer to visit English learning website to improve English.(扩写好处扩写好处)Millions of people prefer to visit
5、 English learning website to improve English.They can chat with other English speakers freely through the Internet.【句子扩写】【句子扩写】1.Good learners know the best way they can study.(扩写事例扩写事例)_2.Good learners learn from their mistakes.(扩写方法扩写方法)_ Good learners know the best way they can study.For example,
6、they may take notes by writing down key words or by drawing mind maps.Good learners learn from their mistakes.They may do this by writing down both their mistakes and the correct answers next to the mistakes in their notebooks.3.I am always trying to use some important skills that are taught in our
7、English classes,such as skimming and scanning.(扩写好处扩写好处)_4.It is necessary to review the new words now and then.(扩写原因扩写原因)_I am always trying to use some important skills that are taught in our English classes,such as skimming and scanning.With these correct methods,I can improve my reading greatly.
8、It is necessary to review the new words now and then.Even if you learn them well in class,you will feel difficult to remember their meanings unless you meet them often.2 2角度角度对学习对学习(教学方式、学习现象教学方式、学习现象)的看法的看法【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】4.I think youd better use English in class.(扩写原因扩写原因)I think youd better use
9、English in class.When you speak English,you will have a good chance to improve your listening skills.5.From my point of view,study trip is a good way for students to study.(扩写好处扩写好处)From my point of view,study trip is a good way for students to study.When students have a study trip,they can learn ma
10、ny things that they cant learn at school.6.Learning doesnt stop when you finish high school or university.You are learning all the time.(扩写事例扩写事例)Learning doesnt stop when you finish high school or university.You are learning all the time.For example,learning can happen when you go to a museum or wh
11、en you read a book.【句子扩写】【句子扩写】5.I think youd better use both English and Chinese.(扩写原因扩写原因)_I think youd better use both English and Chinese.When you teach in English,its good for our listening.At the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking,reading and writing.6.Some students think that it
12、is very important to have an exam.(扩写原因扩写原因)_Some students think that it is very important to have an exam.By taking exams,they can know how they are getting along with their studies,and the exam results also make them study hard.7.As far as Im concerned,studying abroad is a good way to study.(扩写好处扩
13、写好处)_As far as Im concerned,studying abroad is a good way to study.When we study abroad,we can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.8.Many parents think that taking afterschool classes surely benefits their children a lot.(扩写事例扩写事例)_Many parents think that t
14、aking afterschool classes surely benefits their children a lot.For example,it can help them remember what they have learned in class better and can also help their children improve the subjects that they are not good at.3 3角度角度学习情况学习情况【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】7.Of all the subjects,Sandy likes French best.(扩写
15、原因扩写原因)Of all the subjects,Sandy likes French best.She thinks learning foreign languages is great fun.8.We often have PE.and science on Friday.(扩写感受扩写感受)We often have PE.and science on Friday.What a great day it is!9.My favourite subjects are geography and math.(扩写具体表现扩写具体表现)My favourite subjects ar
16、e geography and math.I can get the most points in every exam.【句子扩写】【句子扩写】9.Among all the courses,I like fashion design best.(扩写原因扩写原因)_10.The courses in this term include my favorites,like cooking and music.(扩写感受扩写感受)_Among all the courses,I like fashion design best.Designing beautiful clothes and b
17、eing a clothing designer one day are great fun.The courses in this term include my favorites,like cooking and music.What a wonderful term it is!11.Many students are not able to spend their time properly.(扩写扩写 具体表现具体表现)_Many students are not able to spend their time properly.They would rather spend m
18、ost of their spare time on TV or on the Internet instead of picking up a good book to read.4 4角度角度反映学习中存在的问题及学习经历反映学习中存在的问题及学习经历【句子升格范例】【句子升格范例】10.The teacher spoke very quickly.I did not understand her most of the time.(用用so.that.句型升格句型升格)The teacher spoke so quickly that I did not understand her m
19、ost of the time.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 1 P311.My pronunciation was poor.I was afraid to ask questions.(用用because of升格升格)I was afraid to ask questions because of my poor pronunciation.人教九人教九(全全)Unit 1 P3【句子升格】【句子升格】12.Im careless.I made the same mistakes in the exam again.(用用 so.that.句型升格句型升格)_13.I couldnt w
20、ork out most of the difficult problems.I almost lost interest in physics.(用用because of升格升格)_Im so careless that I made the same mistakes in the exam again!I almost lost interest in physics because of failing to work out most of the difficult problems.三阶攻关三阶攻关一阶一阶 审好题审好题 定方向定方向(2016河北河北)关于关于“说英语说英语”问
21、题问题，李华和他的英语老师，李华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的观点持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内容，。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内容，定主题：以探讨定主题：以探讨“说英语说英语”的问题为切入点的问题为切入点定文体：议论文定文体：议论文从中从中选择一个角色选择一个角色，按照所给要求写一篇短文。，按照所给要求写一篇短文。定人称：第一人称或第二人称定人称：第一人称或第二人称(以李华的角以李华的角度阐述时用第一人称；以度阐述时用第一人称；以Miss Wang的角度的角度阐述时用第二人称阐述时用第二人称)定时态：一般现在时，可穿插过去时和将来定时态：一般现在时，可穿插过去时和将来时时要
22、求：要求：(1)用用“Li Hua”或或“Miss Wang”补全短文首句；补全短文首句；(2)写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)词数词数80个左右。个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇：参考词汇：shy;make a mistake;believe inI am_开篇：选开篇：选择角色定择角色定观点观点正文：阐正文：阐述选择观述选择观点的理由点的理由并给出建并给出建议议选择角色，选择角色，阐述观点阐述观点(Miss Wang)列框架列框架列要点
23、列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升Im Miss Wang.Your English is poor because you dont speak English.1.阐述理解阐述理解(a tool of communicaiton）English is a tool of communication.English,like any other language,is a tool of communication.我来写：我来写：_ 二阶二阶 谋布局谋布局 写好句写好句【框架导图一】选择Miss Wang正文：阐正文：阐述选择观述选择观点的理由点的理由并给出建并给出
24、建议议2.给出建给出建议议(speak it everyday;afraid;believe in yourself)You speak it more.Your English will become good.The more you speak it,the better your English will become.我来写：我来写：_ You should speak it every day.You should try to speak it as much as possible every day.我来写：我来写：_ 1.阐述理阐述理解解(a tool of communi
25、caiton）列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升正文：阐正文：阐述选择观述选择观点的理由点的理由并给出建并给出建议议2.给出建给出建议议(speak it everyday;afraid;believe in yourself)You shouldnt be shy and be afraid of making a mistake.Dont be shy or afraid of making a mistake.You should neither be shy nor be afraid of making a mistake.我来写：我来写：_
26、 列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升正文：阐正文：阐述选择观述选择观点的理由点的理由并给出建并给出建议议You must believe in yourself.The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up我来写：我来写：_ 始终牢记始终牢记熟能生巧熟能生巧Always remember:Practice makes perfect!结尾：重结尾：重申主题申主题2.给出建给出建议议(speak it everyday;afraid;believe in
27、 yourself)列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升开篇：选开篇：选择角色定择角色定观点观点选择角色，选择角色，阐述观点阐述观点(Li Hua)Im Li Hua.I dont speak English because my English is poor.It is hard to speak English.I find it hard to speak English.It is hard to speak English.So I hardly speak it我来写：我来写：_ 列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)
28、句子提升句子提升【框架导图二】选择Li Hua正文：具正文：具体说明原体说明原因因I am shy.I am always afraid of speaking English.I am so shy that I am always afraid of speaking English.我来写：我来写：_ I speak English in class.Then I feel nervous.I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class.我来写：我来写：_ 2.因为害羞、因为害羞、紧张、害怕紧张、害怕犯错、害
29、怕犯错、害怕被嘲笑被嘲笑(shy,nervous,be afraid of,laugh at.）列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升1.认为说认为说英语难英语难（hard）I am afraid that my classmates may laugh at me.Im afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English.我来写：我来写：_ 正文：具正文：具体说明原体说明原因因2.因为害羞、因为害羞、紧张、害怕紧张、害怕犯错、害怕犯错、害怕被嘲笑被嘲笑(shy,nervous,be
30、 afraid of,laugh at.）I dont believe in myself.I dont believe in myself.The less I speak it,the worse my English becomes.我来写：我来写：_ 列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升当我的英当我的英语提升时，语提升时，我很愿意我很愿意说它。说它。(improve,enjoy)When my English improves,I will enjoy speaking it.结尾：表结尾：表达自己的达自己的感受感受列框架列框架列要点列要点要点扩
31、句要点扩句(注意时态注意时态)句子提升句子提升三阶三阶 巧衔接巧衔接 成篇章成篇章【高分范文一】选择【高分范文一】选择Miss Wang【高分范文二】选择【高分范文二】选择Li Hua写作练兵写作练兵(2020重庆重庆B卷改编卷改编)某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查，以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生，卷调查，以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生，请结合下图数据和自身口语情况，写一篇短文。请结合下图数据和自身口语情况，写一篇短文。提示：提示：(1)Describe the results of the survey.(
32、2)Tell something about your spoken English(level,plan.)要求：要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数词数80个左右个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)。The results of the survey show that 17%of the students hardly ever practise speaking English._ No doubt that they hav
33、e poor ability of English speaking.About 38%of the students sometimes practise English,just in their free time.Most of the students usually practise spoken English,which accounts for 45%.They have made it a good habit.From the survey,we know 67%students practise English by speaking more in class.And
34、 39%of the students talk with their friends _in English.58%of the students choose other ways to practise their English.As for me,I am quite interested in English,so I put much effort into it.I often listen to English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also a helpful way.As long as I keep on working,I can achieve better grades and improve my spoken English.
