1、-篇章设计题型解读题型解读 读后续写作为英语高考新题型，是一种读后续写作为英语高考新题型，是一种“给材料给材料作文作文”，它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之，它要求学生在阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据所给出的开头语和关键词语把这篇未写完的后，根据所给出的开头语和关键词语把这篇未写完的文章文章补充完整补充完整。读后续写要。读后续写要紧扣紧扣文章文章前文前文所述，去推所述，去推想之后可能出现的情况，要展开想之后可能出现的情况，要展开合理合理、充分的想象，、充分的想象，构思构思适当的适当的情节情节，写成一篇完整的文章。读后续写有，写成一篇完整的文章。读后续写有助于培养学生的想象能力、创新思维
2、能力和语言表达助于培养学生的想象能力、创新思维能力和语言表达能力。能力。开放型合情合情合理合理忠于原文精神思想正面、向上选材特点1所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；2多以记叙文故事类文章有困难故事无困难故事Paragraph1:Suddenly._Paragraph2:We had._make up a problem solve the problem无困难故事Paragraph1:Suddenly._Paragraph2:We had._turning point（转机）solve the problem有困难故事读后续写ReadWriteFour factors of a narratio
3、n(记叙文四要素)When Where Who What Why/How(起因、经过、结果)Basic informationWhen Where Who What Why/HowMain idea_New Years eve in the streeta poor little girlsuffered from cold and hungerearned not a single pennysurroundingswordactionWriting content (写作内容）feelingout-looking(外貌)找找看surroundings dreadfully(极其极其,非常非
4、常)coldsnowing fastalmost darkas cold as the streetan attic(阁楼，顶楼阁楼，顶楼)；many chinks(裂缝裂缝)the wind and snow penetrated(穿过穿过;进入进入)through.找找看out-lookingbare head and feetred and blue feetmatches in handtattered(破烂的破烂的)apron(围裙围裙)long,fair(浅色浅色的的),curled(卷卷曲曲)hair 找找看actionwanderingdropped offrunningwal
5、ked oncarried trembling(哆嗦哆嗦)sat down drawing her little feet close under her 找找看feelingsabout her father She dared not go home.She had sold no matches,earned not a single penny,and perhaps her father would beat her.about her homeBesides her home was almost as cold as the street.It was an attic;and
6、although the larger of the many chinks in the roof were stopped up with straw and rags(破布破布),the wind and snow often penetrated through.Do you want this poor little girl to die?turning pointLets have a discussion!Paragraph1:The poor girl felt cold,hungry and sleepy,so she closed her beautiful blue e
7、yes gradually._Paragraph2:The clock struck 8 next morning,_turning point（转机）solve the problemFour factors of a narration(记叙文四要素)When Where Who What天气描写环境描写肖像、言、行、心理描写有困难故事 turning point+solution无困难故事 problem+solutionParagraph1:The poor girl felt cold,hungry and sleepy,so she closed her beautiful blu
8、e eyes gradually.Later,an old gentleman passed by and took her home.Later,Later,the snow was getting thicker and thicker.It almost buried this poor little girl.an old gentleman passed by and took her home.In the nick of time(关键时刻关键时刻),a carriage stopped beside the girl.Out came an old kind gentleman
9、 with a walking stick and round hat,warm smile always in his face.“Jesus”,he murmured,when he found the girl lying there with matches in hand.He bent down,held her in his arms and took her home.Paragraph2:The clock struck 8 next morning,The girl opened her eyes and found herself saved.The girl opene
10、d her eyes and found herself saved.the girl opened her eyes and found herself lying in a warm comfortable bed.A worried old couple were sitting beside her.The wife looked kind and soft.She cooked her a good meal.The girl began to tell them her story.Hearing her sad story,they decided to adopt her.Lu
11、cky lady cared for the poor girl again.A brand new happy life came at last.No more cold.No more hunger.The poor girl felt cold,hungry and sleepy,so she closed her beautiful blue eyes gradually.Later,the snow was getting thicker and thicker.It almost buried this poor little girl.In the nick of time,a
12、 carriage stopped beside the girl.Out came an old kind gentleman with a walking stick and round hat,warm smile always in his face.“Jesus”,he murmured,when he found the girl lying there with matches in hand.He bent down,held her in his arms and took her home.The clock struck 8 next morning,the girl o
13、pened her eyes and found herself lying in a warm comfortable bed.A worried old couple were sitting beside her.The wife looked kind and soft.She cooked her a good meal.The girl began to tell them her story.Hearing her sad story,they decided to adopt her.Lucky lady cared for the poor girl again.A bran
14、d new happy life came at last.No more cold.No more hunger.Thanks for Thanks for your listeningyour listening！1.一方面，城市是可爱的。它创造了现代文明，并耀武扬威地显摆着现代文明的物质成果，引诱着人们集聚其中。2.在这里，不仅有四通八达的交通网络、美轮美奂的摩天大楼、令人咋舌的财富神话、繁忙紧张的生活节奏、层出不穷的竞争机会、丰富多彩的文娱生活，而且生活于其中的人们能够分享财富的盛宴、发展的成果，能够编织梦想、追求理想，能够开阔眼界、增长见识，能够施展才华、实现自我。3.另一方面，城市
15、是可怜的。它远离了自然，侵害了人心，异化了人性。我们的不少城市，不仅没能把物质成果转化成让人们快乐、幸福的动力，反而把人们变成了追逐名利的工具。至少目前，在很多城市里，绿色消失了，纯净的水源消失了，清新的空气消失了，安全的食品消失了，人与自然的和谐共处成了遥远的神话，人与人的信任成了黄牙小儿的天真妄想。4.浊雾笼罩下的财富不夜城，不仅侵蚀了星星的亮光，而且泯灭了心灵的光芒，使我们的眼睛近视、散光且老花，失去了辨别真伪、美丑、善恶的天然能力，使我们的心迷茫且苦闷。生活在城市，我们几乎忘了：夜，本该是黑的，本该是有星星的，本该是安静的，本该带着人们心安理得地歇息的。5.如今的城里人，很少享受到夜的
16、黑与美。其实，我心里也明白，城乡各有其美。所以，久居乡村的人们向往城市的繁华，久居城市的人们向往田园的恬静。二者的主要区别在于：城市生贪欲，田园守天心。贪欲破坏自然，让人浮躁，使人隔阂，虽富贵而不能心安；天心带来和谐，让人心静，使人互信，顺应环境总能让人快乐。6.铜山湖远离城市，所以，能够本分地、无欲无求地、自然而然地进行着四季轮回、昼夜更替，春绿夏艳秋静冬安，白天张扬着活力，夜晚安守着宁静。她，不近人亦不远人，不为秋愁亦不为春喜，只顺其自然地存在着，任人亲疏。7.记得易系辞上说过这样的话：圣人与天地相似，所以不违背自然规律；知道周围万物而以其道成就天下，所以不会有过失；乐天知命，没有忧愁；安于所居之地，敦厚而施行仁德，所以能爱。
