1、TopicnRecently some banks extend their business to university campus and offer credit cards to students.A lot of people worry that credit cards may bring harm to students,while others dont think so.What is your opinion?nWrite on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following to
2、pic:nWill Credit Cards Bring Harm to the Students?InstructionsnYou are to write in three parts.nIn the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.nIn the second part,support your opinion with appropriate details.nIn the last part bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summa
3、ry.nMarks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriateness.Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.Will Credit Cards Bring Harm to the Students?n Recently,in order to extend business to university campus,some banks offer credit cards to college students.M
4、any people worry that credit cards may do harm to students,while others dont think so.In my opinion,credit cards are good for students if they are used appropriately.n First,when a student uses credit cards,he neednt bring much cash with him every day.And the less cash he brings,the less he needs to
5、 worry about being stolen.Second,using credit cards can minimize the chances of receiving forged notes.Students are not quite good at distinguishing forged notes,and thus often become victims of coiners.If they use credit cards,it will be very possible for them to avoid receiving forged notes becaus
6、e they dont need to get the changes.Third,using credit cards can help students to know more about credit.If they dont repay their credit account in time,they will have to pay more interests and whats worse,they will get a bad credit record which will bring inconvenience to them in the future.n There
7、fore,I believe that credit cards will not bring harm to students if used reasonably.评分标准n满分15分，分五个等级，14分、11分、8分、5分和2分，可以酌情加一或减一分，但不得加或减半分。n具体标准为：n14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。n11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。n8分：基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。n5分：基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。n2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，语
8、言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。n交白卷，或作文与题目毫不相干，或只写几个单词，以0分计算。n评分对于字数的要求：累计字数在150-170之间，扣1分；130-150之间，扣2分；110-130之间，扣3分；90-110之间，扣4分；90以下，至多给5分。若照抄提示中原句，均不得计入所写字数。n14-15分分 内容切题内容切题,完整完整,条理清楚条理清楚,文章结构严谨文章结构严谨,语语法正确法正确,语言通顺恰当语言通顺恰当,句式用词富有变化句式用词富有变化,基本无语言基本无语言错误。错误。n11-13分分 内容切题内容切题,完整完整,条理较清楚条理较清楚,文章结构较严谨文章结
9、构较严谨,语言比较通顺恰当语言比较通顺恰当,少量语法，拼写错误。少量语法，拼写错误。n8-10分分 内容基本切题内容基本切题,完整完整,条理基本清楚条理基本清楚,文章结构文章结构基本严谨基本严谨,语言基本通顺恰当，少量严重错误语言基本通顺恰当，少量严重错误,一些词一些词使用不当。使用不当。n5-7分分 内容基本切题内容基本切题,完整完整,条理不够清楚条理不够清楚,较明显的较明显的母语痕迹，较多语言错误母语痕迹，较多语言错误,许多词使用不当。许多词使用不当。n2-4分分 内容偏题内容偏题,不完整不完整,思路混乱思路混乱,语句不完整语句不完整,只有只有少数句子可以理解少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误
10、严重。词汇拼写错误严重。TEM-4作文试题及样卷评分作文试题及样卷评分 2006年年TopicnRecently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing,Guangzhou,Xian,Chengdu,Shanghai,Wuhan,Nanjing and Shengyang.The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good
11、 habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money today is better.What do you think?InstructionsnWrite a composition of about 200 words.nYou are to write in three parts.nIn the first part,state specifically what your opinion is.nIn the second part,support your opinion with appropriate details
12、.nIn the last part,bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.nYou should supply an appropriate title for your composition.Sample 1 The Good Habit Nowadays,more and more young people think that it is better that using tomorrows money today than saving money,while in my opinion,
13、I think its right.n For the first,our contrair has to develop.So it calls us to use more money to let the nation develop.n And then,that may make our life more comfortable.For example,I heard a story.There are two man.A use tomorrows money to buy a new houseas he has to pay money to the bank every m
14、onths while B start keeping money.n nTwenty years later,B finally keeping enough money to buy a new house,but A has been lived in it for twenty years and pay enough money to the bank.n At the end,if we have the abilile to pay the list,why we dont use tomorrows money to let our life more wonderful?n
15、So,thats what I think.n5-6分。结构基本符合，但语言过于简单，语法错误多，内容模糊不清，题目不正确，字数少于170。n举例不可信。举例应该真实可信，比如亲身经历、朋友体验或者名人轶事等。n文章结尾太简单。Sample 2：Saving Money is a Good Habit I think saving money is a good habit.Because saving money can make you learn how to use less money to buy more things.Saving money can make you beco
16、me a rich man.If some thing happen one day,you must use some money to solve the problem,but nobody can lend to you the money.Your saving money can help solve the problem.n n Nowdays,some students use their parents money to buy a lot of unnessary things.Such as,Some students change their mobil phone
17、every month.Its not a good habit.Although their parents have a lot of money,they cant use money in that way.Its waste of money.n If you save money as a habit.You can think carefully before you buy everything.“This thing is necessary for me?Can I buy the cheaper one?”All those questions can be asked
18、by yourself.n If you want to buy a very useful thing,but you dont have enough money,you can save money for it.After some time,you can buy it for your-self.n Saving money is a good habit.It make you become rich.It make you learn how to use less money to buy more things.n本卷得分8-9分。文章基本切题，结构基本正确。但语言简单，重
19、复动词，语法错误多。n开始段没有引入主题，而是直接提出作者观点，太突然。而且有许多非完整句。n文章没有深度，思考肤浅。Sample 3:Saving money is a good habitn The other day,I heard a conversation between a boy and a girl.“Why are you always lack of money?As far I know,your parents give you ample money for your daily life”.said the girl.“Yes,I always use tomor
20、rows money today”.Said the boy.“Its a bad habit,and you should your money!”the girl shouted.This is a very common phenomenon among the university students.Owing to their argument,certainly,I am in favor of the girls view.n What possibly contributes to the preference can be listed as follow.In the fi
21、rst place,money is very important for us.We use money buy food,buy clothes and so on.But,money is very precious,because its very hard to make money.So money should be used when its necessary.n In the second place,there are so many poor children who quit school for lack of money in poor religion.So i
22、ts very significant to save our money to help those poor children.And they are look forward to your help!The last but the least important is that if you always use tomorrows money today,you will form a bad habit.But your money is limited.So you may rob others of money.n In short,I hold a firm belief
23、 that saving money is a good habit and we should keep it forever.Its the high time that we took some measures to save money!n9-10分。文章切题，结构正确，有内容，有句式变化。但语法错误多，随意，粗心漏词。n说理缺乏逻辑。比如很多小孩失学不是我们需要节约用钱的理由，再比如钱不够用就会去抢别人的钱吗？n文章的入题不错，但故事交代很马虎，语言也很平凡，且不够简练。n文章结尾主题被简单重复，思想没有升华。Sample 4 n There is no concensus amo
24、ng the people on the issue of the choice between saving money and using tomorrows money today.The attitudes toward this problem vary from person to person.And in my humble opinion,it is essential for us to save more money today instead of using tomorrows money.There are many reasons that may account
25、 for my point,and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.n To start with,we Chinese people boast a good tradition of being economical.The traditional Chinese culture regards waste as a poor moral standard.As a university student,we need to keep on carrying forward our nations fine moral stan
26、dard,i.e.saving.And saving money is conducive not only to the cultivation of a good moral,but also to release the heavy burden resulting from some accidents in the future.In other words,saving todays money could meet our urgent need of it in the future.n nLast but not least,the fierce competition we
27、ll face after we graduate is full of uncertainties.Once we could not find a job which offers high salaries,it will be impossible for us to return the money to the creditors.n To put it into a nutshell,I am a great believer that saving money is a good habit because it really exerts positive impacts o
28、n both the present and the future.n本卷得分12分。语言通畅，词汇丰富，观点明确，条理清楚，结构正确。但有少量语法错误和拼写错误。没写题目（如果有题目可给13分）。n TEM4便条评分标准及样卷便条评分标准及样卷n 2007Note WritingnWrite a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation：nYour classmate,Jimmy,is head of the universitys swimming club.He has invited you to join t
29、he club,but you like some other sport.Write a note,declining his invitation and explaining why.nMarks will be awarded for content,organization,grammar and appropriateness.Sample1:(8分分)n April 22,2007nDear Jimmy,n I received your short message,and Im glad to learn that you have been promoted as head
30、of our universitys swimming club.Congratulations!You deserve that.As to your invitation for me to join your club,Im afraid I cant make it.n As you know,I am unable to swim and staying in water makes me uneasy.Funny,right?Whats more,I joined our schools basketball team two weeks ago.And I guess well
31、exercise a lot for the competition held next month.So there is probably no time for me to learn swimming.Well,maybe you could drop in and watch our competition next month.n Yours,SherrySample 2:(9分分)n April 22,2007nDear Jimmy,n Thank you so much for inviting me to join the swimming club.Id like to b
32、ut Im afraid I cannot.To learn tennis has long been my dream and the best tennis teacher will be leaving next year.So this is the last chance for me and I would like very much to seize it.n Best wishes.n Yours,n TomSection B Note-Writing(10 points)nApril 28,nDr Smith,n An English speech contest in h
33、onor of the 70th anniversary of the university will take place on the evening of May 12(Saturday).The organizing committee would like you to participate as one of the five judges and to give the first prize award.Please let us know if youll be able to come.Wed email you the particulars if you accept
34、 our invitation.nBest regards,nLi PingnChairman of the Organizing Committee of the Contestn一.格式：（占3分）n包括日期，称呼，和结尾三部分，各占一分。n1.日期日期(date):n正确：April 24th,2007/April 24,2007/April 24/24 April 2007/4/24/2007 24/4/2007(Apr.也可以，任何一个日期都可以)n2.称呼（称呼（Heading）:n正确：(Dear)Mike:(,)/(Dear)Hilda:(,)(缺逗号或冒号，扣缺逗号或冒号，扣
35、0.5分分)n位置在日期下面一行左侧。n3.结尾（结尾（Ending）:n 正确：Yours sincerely,/Yours,/Sincerely yours,/Sincerely,(缺逗缺逗号，扣号，扣0.5分分)n Sincerely,Mike,Hilda (若在一行扣若在一行扣0.5)n Yours sincerely （两个单词的首字母都大写扣（两个单词的首字母都大写扣0.5）n 若名字没写或人名XXX 扣扣1分。分。n凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣分。错一部分扣1分。最多扣3分。n二.内容（占2分）n 本便条必须包括如下内容：n1.拒绝（1分）n2.理由（1分）n三.语言（占5分
36、）n1首句需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣1分。n25分中有一分是语言的得体性。语言风格与情景不一致，扣1分（如：Yours truly,Truly yours,If you consent,etc）.只有语言较好才得分。n四评分总体要求：n1语言没有严重错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求（40）,可给910分。n2便条总字数（包括三部分格式在内），要求在5060字；不到40或超过80字扣1分。n3请写出三部分的小分，如2+2+4（格式+内容+语言）n4不要出现0.5 分。n5要求大家阅卷时做到认真仔细，不漏改卷，漏填分数或漏签名。请在每份卷子的错误部分划线，以便复校。n6便条总分为10分，6分为及格线。
