1、 1.声音特效声音特效-拟声词拟声词 2.感官感官 3.否定描述否定描述1.The frozen snow crunched under our feet.冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。crunch v&n.嘎吱作响；嘎吱声嘎吱作响；嘎吱声2.Birds were chattering/twittering somewhere.鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。chatter/twitter/chirp v&n.唧唧叫唧唧叫;叽喳叫叽喳叫3.Wild animals started to roar/howl.野生动物开始咆哮。野生动物开始咆哮。r
2、oar/howl v&n咆哮咆哮 4.The leaves rustled in the wind.树叶在风中沙沙作响。树叶在风中沙沙作响。rustle v&n 发出沙沙的摩擦声发出沙沙的摩擦声5.The river gurgled and burbled.河水汩汩地流淌着。河水汩汩地流淌着。gurgle v&n 发出潺潺流水声；潺潺声发出潺潺流水声；潺潺声6.The thunder was rumbling in the distance.远处雷声隆隆。远处雷声隆隆。rumble v&n 发出隆隆声发出隆隆声；隆隆声；隆隆声7.The fragile little tree cracked
3、and fell in the wild howling wind.这脆弱的小树啪地一下被狂风吹断了，倒在了地上这脆弱的小树啪地一下被狂风吹断了，倒在了地上crack v&n.噼啪作响噼啪作响,折断折断一拟声词作动词一拟声词作动词 1.They heard the twitter/chatter of birds among the bushes.他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喳喳声叽叽喳喳声。2.The dog gave several fierce barks.狗狗汪汪吠汪汪吠了几声。了几声。bark v&n 狗吠狗吠 3.The wolfs long howl pa
4、ralyzed Mac.狼的长狼的长嚎声嚎声让他一动也不敢动。让他一动也不敢动。4.They heard a deep,distant roar of the lion.他们听到远处传来一声低沉的狮子的他们听到远处传来一声低沉的狮子的怒吼怒吼。5.They heard a rustle in the bushes.他们听到灌木丛中一阵他们听到灌木丛中一阵沙沙沙沙声。声。6.The gurgle of the stream soothed me.潺潺潺潺的流水声让我很放松。的流水声让我很放松。7.I heard the rumble of thunder in the distance.我听到远
5、处的隆隆雷声。我听到远处的隆隆雷声。一拟声词作名词一拟声词作名词 1.BOOM,CRASH!The wind was howling outside of my house.We were having a terrible thunderstorm.I was very scared.外面狂风呼啸，我们正经历一场可怕的雷雨，外面狂风呼啸，我们正经历一场可怕的雷雨，轰隆轰隆声不断。声不断。2.CRACK!The fragile little tree was broken in two by the wild howling wind.咔嚓咔嚓一声，狂风把这棵脆弱的小树折成了两半。一声，狂风把
6、这棵脆弱的小树折成了两半。3.PITTER-PATTTER!I was disturbed by the annoying sound of the rain.淅淅沥沥淅淅沥沥的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。的雨声扰乱了我的思绪。4.TICK-TACK!the sound of the old clock gave me the creeps.滴答滴答滴答滴答！这个老式落地钟的声音让我毛骨悚然。！这个老式落地钟的声音让我毛骨悚然。一拟声词作感叹词一拟声词作感叹词高考链接高考链接-2019-2019年浙江高考题年浙江高考题But no more helicopers came and it was get
7、ting dark again._参考答案：参考答案：Jane stopped to find a place to rest.But the annoying rustle of the trees in the wind,the low gurgle of the stream and the distant roar of wild animals made it extremely hard for her to fall asleep.此处运用了拟声词作此处运用了拟声词作名词和排比的用法来凸显名词和排比的用法来凸显Jane在夜晚的孤独无助。在夜晚的孤独无助。视觉上视觉上 enormo
8、us/gigantic/immense/vast 巨大的巨大的 tiny 极小的极小的 small/little小的小的 sparkling/twinkling/glittering 闪闪发光的闪闪发光的 dim昏暗的昏暗的 dark黑暗的黑暗的 lofty高耸入云高耸入云 steep 险峻的险峻的 deep深的深的 narrow狭窄的狭窄的 winding 蜿蜒的蜿蜒的 feathery鹅毛般的鹅毛般的 foggy雾蒙蒙的雾蒙蒙的 misty 有雾的有雾的 sunny 有太阳的有太阳的 如：如：the lofty mountains高耸的山脉高耸的山脉 the dim light昏暗的灯光昏
9、暗的灯光 the sparkling stars 闪闪发光的星星闪闪发光的星星 the dark night 漆黑的夜晚漆黑的夜晚 the feathery snowflakes 鹅毛般的雪花鹅毛般的雪花 one misty morning 一个有雾的早晨一个有雾的早晨二二.感官感官sight/touch/sound/smell 触觉上触觉上 hard 硬的硬的 soft/gentle 轻柔的轻柔的 burning/scorching火辣辣的火辣辣的 icy/freezing冰冷的冰冷的 biting刺骨的；刺骨的；bone-chilling刺骨的；刺骨的；warm温暖的；温暖的；wet/da
10、mp潮湿的潮湿的 silky 丝滑的丝滑的 sharp尖锐的尖锐的 rough 粗糙的粗糙的 bumpy 崎岖不平的崎岖不平的 shaggy毛茸茸的；毛茸茸的；wooden木质的木质的 如：如：the biting wind 刺骨的狂风刺骨的狂风 a little wooden jewelry box 小的木质首饰盒小的木质首饰盒 the gentle breeze 轻柔的微风轻柔的微风 a bumpy road 一条崎岖不平的小路一条崎岖不平的小路高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件 听觉上听觉上 low小声的小声的 high大
11、声的大声的 noisy 吵闹的吵闹的 deafening 震耳欲聋的震耳欲聋的 howling 怒号的；猛烈的怒号的；猛烈的 melodious 悦耳的悦耳的 gurgling 潺潺的（流水）潺潺的（流水）如：如：the deafening applause 震耳欲聋的掌声震耳欲聋的掌声 the gurgling stream 潺潺流淌的小溪潺潺流淌的小溪 the melodious voice 悦耳的嗓音悦耳的嗓音 the howling wind怒吼的大风怒吼的大风高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件 嗅觉上嗅觉上smelly
12、/foul/stinky臭的臭的;难闻的难闻的fragrant 清香的清香的fresh 新鲜的新鲜的sweet甜的甜的strong强烈的强烈的choking 让人窒息的让人窒息的 如：如：the fragrant flowers 芳香的花朵芳香的花朵 the fresh air 清新的空气清新的空气 高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考链接高考链接-2019-2019年浙江高考题年浙江高考题But no more helicopers came and it was getting dark again._参考答案参考答案:J
13、ane sat on the damp潮湿的潮湿的 grass and stared up at the pale 昏暗的昏暗的stars in the vast sky,tears streaming down her dirty face.The bone-chilling刺骨的刺骨的howling怒吼怒吼的的 wind forced her to curl up.She began to regret fighting with her husband and miss his warm hug.此处将触觉、此处将触觉、视觉、听觉结合在了一起。视觉、听觉结合在了一起。高考英语读后续写之环
14、境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件 To tell the reader what is not there is an effect way of showing how unpleasant,comfortless a place is.通过告知读者通过告知读者“没有没有”什么来凸显某地是多什么来凸显某地是多么的不舒适，令人不快。么的不舒适，令人不快。例例1：I could see our ship,but it was wrecked and there was nobody near it.All my friends were dead.
15、I was alive but in a strange wild country with no food,no water,and no gun.鲁滨逊漂流记鲁滨逊漂流记这段文字通过四个否定这段文字通过四个否定nobody,no food,no water,no gun 来体现出鲁滨逊漂流在孤岛上来体现出鲁滨逊漂流在孤岛上的孤立无援。的孤立无援。例例2：There was no cushion,no carpet,no warmth,no light and no comfort.这句话通过四个这句话通过四个no的排比来体现出这个地方什么都没有，让人十分不舒适。的排比来体现出这个地方什么都
16、没有，让人十分不舒适。例例3：There was no light,no twitter of the birds and no little naughty stars in the sky.Everything was dead silent.Not a single sound or movement could be heard.三三.否定描述否定描述高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考链接高考链接-20192019年浙江高考题年浙江高考题But no more helicopers came and it was g
17、etting dark again._此处可以运用否定描述的写作手法来体现此处可以运用否定描述的写作手法来体现Jane的孤立无援的孤立无援如：如：Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest.Jane was stuck in the middle of nowhere with no food,no water,no light,and more importantly,no warm hugs of her husband,Tom.Desperate and hopeless,Jane knelt down,tears streamin
18、g down her face.高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件 All brightness was gone,leaving nothing.We stepped out of the tent onto nothing.Sledge and tent were there,Estravaen stood beside me,but neither he nor I cast any shadow.There was dull light all around,everywhere.When we walked on th
19、e criso shadow showed the footprint.We left no track.Sledge,tent,himself:nothing else at all.No sun,no sky,no horizon,no world.否定描述否定描述高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件 I seldom opened my door in a winter evening without hearing it;Hoo hoo hoo,hooner hoo,sounded sonorously,and the f
20、irst three syllables accented somewhat like how deardo;or sometimes hoo hoo only.象声词象声词高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件运用所学知识续写207浙江高考读后续写第二段的环境描写部分。We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件参考答案：We
21、 drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.I looked out of the car window,winding蜿蜒的蜿蜒的 rivers,fragrant香气扑鼻的香气扑鼻的flowers,warm breeze,gurgling 潺潺的潺潺的streams,lofty高耸的高耸的 mountains,sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fasination.本段运用视觉，嗅觉，触觉和听觉等感官描写来凸显风景的美。本段运用视觉，嗅觉，触觉和听觉等感官描写来凸显风景的美。高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件高考英语读后续写之环境描写共页pptPPT上课课件
