1、Lead-inPre-writingwhile-writingpost-writingPart 1 Lead-in1.流感 flu2.下定决心做某事 make up ones mind to do sth.3.刺激；激发；促进 stimulate4.头晕目眩的 dizzy5.牙医 dentist6.坚果 nut7.滑板 skateboard8.充满活力的；精力充沛的；动态的 dynamic9.保龄球运动 bowling10.喜剧；喜剧片；滑稽节目 comedy11.每月；每月一次的；月刊 monthly12.提高；增强；增进 enhance13.使恢复精力；使凉爽；刷新 refreshPart
2、 2pre-writingReading1.Who write these two letters?Wang Lu and George Fielding.2.What are the purposes of writing these letters?To inform the editor of their problems and actions they take to solve these problems.Read for general ideaswellmany toothachesflu easilysleep and dizzypassioneat no sugarexe
3、rcise regularlyminutes and did something activebuying sweets,biscuits,and sugary drinksat least 30dynamic and strongerboth body and mindsoundlyin control of her own lifesuffers from flu or toothachesRead for detailed ideasstressed outworn outplaying computer gamesfind other ways to relaxtake control
4、 of his life and his dadrock climbing monthly withchange himself for the betterenergeticDear Editor,Yours Sincerely,signature_bodyRead for structureso of a letterComplimentary close 信尾敬语Salutation 称呼Divide each letter into four parts and try to match the main ideas below to each part.identify proble
5、ms consider what to do describe what he/she has done to change give the resultsProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Read for structures and contentsPart 3While-writing描述想要改变的生活方式What bad habits do you want to change？overeating/eating junk foodInternet addictioncigarette smokingstaying up latealcohol abu
6、setoo stressed outAfter reading these two letters,do you think it is a wise choice to join the camp?Now you are going to join the camp.Write a letter to the editor to tell him your one lifestyle that you want to change.Writing1:投稿关于要改变的生活方式假如你是李华，正在英国参加交换生活动。你想参加Healthy Life 杂志社组织的第二期夏令营活动。请给杂志社的编辑写
7、一封信，内容如下：1.What lifestyle habit you would like to change;2.Why you want to change;3.How you plan to change;4.What result you hope to see.常用句式1.I am writing to share with you something about my lifestyle.2.I am writing to you with the purpose of.3.Im having some trouble in keeping healthy.4.I cant ha
8、ve a good sleep at night,and cant concentrate on my study either.5.When it comes to such a situation,Im at a loss.6.It is important that I(should)lose weight and develop a healthy lifestyle.7.Not only am I used to working out every day but also my family are.8.Exercise is beneficial to our health.We
9、d better run for half an hour every day.9.I hope you will give me some practical suggestions.Dear Editor,I was walking past a shop window the other day when I saw my reflection.At first,I didnt realise it was me.When I saw it was me,I felt sad as I was overweight.I didnt realise how I looked,and now
10、 I really want to change.I really like eating,but I realise I eat too much,and I dont eat good things.I want to change because I want to be able to look at myself and feel happy with how I look.I also want to be healthy.My plan is to change my diet and exercise regularly.I will stop eating sugar,and
11、 only eat at mealtimes rather than eating snacks during the day.I will focus on healthy foods.Then I will exercise every day.I will walk to school and back,and on the weekend,I will go swimming.I have only been doing my plan for a week,but Im already starting to feel better.I havent lost a lot of we
12、ight yet,but I feel positive.I feel confident that I will reach my goal!Yours sincerely,A.SmithSample1Dear Editor,I would like to participate in your summer camp as it would be incredibly beneficial to help me analyse my life choices.My issues are multitudinous and complicated.Firstly,I have difficu
13、lty in waking up early.Im always tired during the day and often feel worn out.This causes me to overeat and snack frequently.I am also constantly late and hence stressed under time pressure all day long.In the evening,I need to relax so I resort to the fallback of my iPhone to check messages and sur
14、f and shop online.I often lose track of time and fall asleep in the early hours of the morning with my phone.PurposePresent tenseProblemSample2During Primary and middle school I was a grade A student,but now I am struggling to keep up with my peers.I really want to get my life back on track.I want t
15、o find the discipline to change my sleeping habits and overcome my phone addiction.I also want to find a healthier eating and exercise regime and stick to it.DecisionI would like to attend your boot camp so I can take the steps necessary to firstly reduce my dependency on my phone.Secondly,I will ad
16、opt a more healthy diet and eliminate comfort eating.Finally,I will try my best to become a better time manager balancing exercise with study commitments.The results I want to achieve are a better and more refreshing sleeping pattern.Gain time to focus on my studies.And ultimately have a healthy wor
17、k-life balance.Hopefully,I can join you and find a better self.Yours truly,Li HuaResultHopeSimple future tensePart 4Post-writing建议信几乎不 hardly ever要么.要么.either or感到昏昏欲睡和头晕feel sleepy and dizzylack passion 缺少激情激发动机stimulate motivation下定决心做.make up ones mind to do sth过去常常.used to do sthsleep soundly睡得香
18、甜/好不再no longersuffer from a flu virus感染流感病毒控制be in control of/take control of参与take part in/join sb infeel stressed out 压力大be worn out 感到筋疲力尽的adjust lifestyle调整生活方式get absorbed着迷；专心致志对.着迷be mad for succeed in quitting成功戒除成功戒除replace A with B 用B代替Aenhance the quality 提高质量get refreshed精神振作精神振作feel ene
19、rgetic 感到精力满满的try out new ways尝试新的方式尝试新的方式change myself for the better让自己变得更好让自己变得更好letter of proposalWriting2:建议信第一段：写信目的：了解对方的困难，表达建议的意图 第二段：内容要点：展开建议的具体内容并说明理由（3条为宜）第三段：表达期望：希望建议对对方有用 开头：指出对方问题：Recently,I learned that 表明来意写信的目的是为了给出建议：Here are some humble suggestions for you./Im writing to share
20、my ideas on./So,I am writing to give you a hand.主体：建议一 First of all,what you need to do sth.A建议二 Additionally,if I were you,I would do sth B.建议三 Whats more,I suggest you should do sthC.结尾：希望对方采纳：Hopefully you can follow my advice and make a change from now on./I am looking forward to your good news.
21、建议信开头句1.I am glad to receive your letter and it is my pleasure to give you some advice on.2.Having known that you have some trouble in.I am writing to share some advice with you.3.Thanks for your trusting and now I am honored to offer you some suggestions on.here.给建议的常用句型1.I think you are supposed t
22、o.2.It is intelligent of you/a great idea to.3.Youd better/You may as well.4.If I were you,I would.5.It would be beneficial if.建议信结尾句1.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful/beneficial.2.I would appreciate it if you take my suggestions into consideration/account.3.I would be more than
23、 pleased to see.Dear XX，Im sorry to hear that you have trouble with.Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to.My suggestions are as follows.To begin with,it is a great idea to.(建议一)In addition,it would be beneficial for you if.(建议二)Last but not least,If I were you,I would.(建议三).I hope you w
24、ill find my suggestions useful.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,XX建议信模板建议信模板假如你是李华，在一家报社工作，收到一封读者来信说他朋友陈雷沉迷电脑游戏，希望你能给他一些意见去帮助他戒掉游戏。请根据提示写一封建议信。1.告诉你朋友玩游戏的危害2.培养其他健康爱好3.多参加户外活动注意：字数80左右可适当增加细节，使文章连贯。Dear Worried Friend,Im sorry to hear that your friend Chen Lei is addicted to computer ga
25、mes.Now Id like to give you some advice on how to deal with it.To start with,it is important to tell him that spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on his studies.In addition,you may as well encourage your friend to try new hobbies like playing the guitar or
26、 playing basketball.Last but no least,why not take part in some outdoor activities together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.All the best.Li HuaSample1假如你叫李华,你发现你的英国网友Alice的生活方式不太健康，且容易焦虑不安，体重日渐上升。你想给她提些建议。请你用英语给写封电子邮件，内容包括：用水果代替零食；多运动；乐观面对生活。注意：1.词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入
27、总词数；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。Dear Alice,Recently,I learned that you have a unhealthy lifestyle.So,Im writing to share my ideas on how you can live a healthy life.First of all,what you need to do is to eat more fruits instead of snakes in order to keep you in shape.Additionally,I suggest y
28、ou should do some outdoor activities with your friends as physical exercise is good for controlling your temper.You might as well remain optimistic about life and keep a good mood,which help you refresh yourself.All in all,I sincerely hope that you will find my suggestions useful and make a change from now on.Yours Sincerely,Li HuaSample2
