1、英语参考答案 第 1页（共 9 页）鞍山市普通高中鞍山市普通高中 2022-20232022-2023 年度高三第二次质量监测年度高三第二次质量监测英语参考答案英语参考答案第一部分：听力15 BACCB610 ABACC1115 ACBCB1620 ACABB第二部分：阅读理解第一节：2125 ADBDC2630 DBABC3135 CBCAD第二节：3640 CFGDA第三部分：语言知识运用第一节：完形填空4145 BCCDA4650 ADCAD5155 BDBAC第二节：语法填空56.whom57.taller58.named59.with60.the61.was used62.appea
2、rance63.shows64.to express65.ages第四部分：写作第一节：应用文写作possible versions:范文一Dear Steve,Im happy to hear that youll participate in the Chinese speech contest themed“Studyingin China”.The following are my suggestions.As for the topic,Id like to recommend Chinese traditional culture,as it introduces a realtr
3、easure of human history.Besides,having studied the courses systematically,youre sure tohave a deep understanding of Chinese traditional culture.To do it well,youd better selectimpressive examples to attract the attention of the judges.Furthermore,practice your spokenChinese in order to express yours
4、elf more clearly and fluently.I sincerely hope youll find my suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua英语参考答案 第 2页（共 9 页）范文二Dear Steve,Im glad to hear that youll participate in the speech contest“Studying in China”.Speaking of the topic,I think Chinese ancient wisdom is an ideal option.With a long history and
5、profound cultural connotations,China plays an essential role inthe history of mankind.From Confucius principle of teaching to literature,and from the fourgreat inventions to the Great Wall,its Chinese ancient wisdom that shines like a starthroughout human civilization.This topic will surely attract
6、the judges attention.Besides,providing broad descriptions combined with details is the best way to go.I do hope your speech goes smoothly.Yours,Li Hua范文三Dear Steve,Knowing that youll participate in the“Studying in China”Speech Contest,Im delightedto give you some suggestions.As far as Im concerned,n
7、o topic is more suitable than“Learning Chinese Characters”.Chinese characters are of great significance to Chinese,since they serve as a carrier ofChinas thousands of years of history and show the wisdom of ancient Chinese people.Moreover,Chinese characters are also a representation of the Chinese s
8、pirit.As for other tips,not only should you make your opening as impressive as possible,but also remember to makeeye contact with your audience.Good luck!Yours,Li Hua第二节：读后续写possible versions:范文一：I completely disagreed with Karina about cutting down trees.Since trees were home tohundreds of small an
9、imals,I couldnt believe that Karina could be such a cruel person whowanted to replace the lively forest with a noisy shopping mall.Overwhelmed by anger andconfusion,I shouted at Karina,“How dare you wish to destroy such a wonderful forest?”Shocked by my mean words,Karina stared at me in horror and f
10、ailed to say a word.After awhile,Karina broke the silence,telling me the story of her parents.Later,I suddenly realized Karina had her reasons for believing what she did.Herparents had suffered from unemployment for a long time and could hardly support the family,英语参考答案 第 3页（共 9 页）so she understood
11、the importance of jobs deeply.“But I just want to save our wonderful land,”I explained in a low voice,feeling sorry and guilty.Gently patting me on the shoulder,Karinacomforted me,“Thats fine.”It suddenly dawned on me that a friend was not the same personas me,but a person who accepted me.I smiled a
12、t Karina,and invited her to hang out,afterwhich our laughter soon lingered in the beautiful land again.范文二：I completely disagreed with Karina about cutting down trees.I said，“We have to stopthat.Think of all the birds that would lose their homes!Cant we figure out how to make jobswithout destroying
13、nature?”Hearing what I said,Karina told me super seriously,“Maybewere not quite as alike as we thought.”I felt very upset.Maybe two people with oppositepoints of view just arent meant to be friends,I was thinking.Later,I suddenly realized Karina had her reasons for believing what she did.Nomatter wh
14、at it was,the difference wasnt worth losing a perfectly good friendship over.Weended up having lots more fun at karate camp.And even now,a couple of months later,westill send each other funny pictures of our cats or our baking creations.No two people areexactly alike,and even the best friends disagr
15、ee sometimes.Whats important is that yourespect each other and focus on the good stuff.范文三：I completely disagreed with Karina about cutting down trees.I poured out my feelingson the trees being home to all the birds as well as being able to absorb carbon dioxide,withmuch anger overwhelming me as I a
16、lmost lost my coolness.“Dont you think peopleslivelihood is more important than a patch of wood?”Karina asked me directly.“But not at thecost of cutting down trees!”I said firmly.The argument between us made me feel powerlessand there seemed to be a barrier growing between us.Later,I suddenly realiz
17、ed Karina had her reasons for believing what she did.Karinatook my hand sincerely and said,“I never want to quarrel with you again.Maybe weshouldnt hold on our own views so seriously,and instead,learn to respect each other.”Ithrew myself into her arms.All my feelings of horror,anger,guilt and grief
18、were suddenlygone due to this comforting hug.During the following days we immersed ourselves in the funof karate.There seemed to be delight in every heart,laughter in every face,and cheer in everystep.英语参考答案 第 4页（共 9 页）听力原文听力原文Text 1W:Lets sit outside in the garden.Its such a beautiful day.M:It is n
19、ice right now,(1)but I heard its supposed to be really windy later on.Anyway,Imon my way out.I need to buy a rain jacket before the sporting goods store closes.Text 2M:Hello Carol,I cant remember what Miss Lisa said the writing homework was.W:There is no homework.Instead,we need to bring and present
20、 a book we like.Im buyingmine at the store now.M:Ill go to the library tomorrow morning.(2)Text 3W:So when you were younger,were you as good at football as you are now?(3)M:I was good,but I actually preferred painting and cooking at the time.W:Im sure that all of your fans listening to this show are
21、 glad that you focused your talents.Text 4M:Did you hear that the department store is having a holiday sale?Its on all of their kitchenproducts and furniture.W:We dont need any more kitchen electronics,but I think we can finally buy a biggerscreen to watch movies on.(4)Text 5W:How did you find the i
22、nspiration for your teamwork speech?I felt like I was watchinga film when you gave it.M:First,I tried to listen to other speeches,but I got nothing from them.It wasnt until Ithought about my years at camp that I wrote it.(5)Text 6W:Ill just ask the question that everyone wants to know.How have you b
23、ecome so famousso quickly?Are you just that talented?(6)M:Well,people seem to really enjoy my songs,but I would never get anything done if Ididnt spend so many hours a day creating them.(6)W:After an interview on The Tonight Show you told everyone that you can always be foundin the recording room in
24、 your own house.Do you prefer creating the songs toperforming them?M:I enjoy both,but I actually prefer just playing for my wife and son at home.(7)Text 7M:I was thinking of joining the exchange program this summer.There are five countries that英语参考答案 第 5页（共 9 页）we can go study in until October.I can
25、t decide which country I want to go to,though.W:Well,if you want to sign up you should decide now.I heard some of the countries are nolonger available.Asia and North America both have spaces left though.M:I was thinking of North America,but maybe Ill go somewhere warmer,like NewZealand.(9)W:Just rem
26、ember that our seasons are different.If you go to the south on the other side of theworld their seasons are the opposite.Spring here,is autumn in New Zealand andwinter there,is summer here.(9)M:Youre right,but I do love going to the beaches there.(9)Text 8W:How was your trip to Canada?Did you go sig
27、htseeing everywhere you wanted to?M:I saw so much in the cities.I was amazed by the festivals I attended and the museumsabout the natives.However,I didnt get to visit the mountains that I really wanted tosee because it was just too cold.(10)W:Thats okay.It sounds like you had a good time.I bet youll
28、 be back there someday.Whatkind of food did you eat there?(11)M:I was so surprised at how many different cultures live in Canada.They have typicalwestern food,like we do here,but they specialize in different things.There are far moreFrench and Chinese restaurants.I mainly went to the European-style
29、restaurantsbecause my cousin,Gene,really likes them.(11)(12)W:I thought you went out there for a business trip with your manager,and to meet up with anold friend?M:Yes.That is why I went there,but not the only thing I did while there.Because I wasmoving around a lot,instead of paying for a hotel I s
30、tayed with Gene.(12)Text 9W:You cant just eat potato chips for a meal.Its not enough.(13)M:Why not?I love the taste of them.Besides,I only eat one small bag for lunch.Its quickand easy.W:Your body needs more than just artificial flavors and junk food.(13)M:I eat plenty of vegetables with my dinner.B
31、esides,I have a big breakfast every morning.Im not really hungry at noon.(14)I dont have much time in between my universityclasses this year.Its not like when I was growing up and you made me food to bringto school.(16)W:Youre not done growing yet,though.If you want to grow up to be big and strong y
32、oushould think more about the food you eat.M:I understand what youre saying,but I dont think it will affect me that much.英语参考答案 第 6页（共 9 页）W:I just want you to live a long life.M:I know,but I just went to the doctor and she said I was very healthy.(15)I exercisethree times a week for that purpose.Wh
33、en I am out of school and have more time andmoney,I can change my habits for something better.Text 10And now for our daily election update.The presidential candidates will be debating inDenver this weekend,and it is going to be an exciting night.Both candidates from NewYork City will be arriving in
34、Denver early tomorrow to begin preparing.They will meetwith the two other candidates and their support teams a few days before the show.(17)Two of the popular talking points to expect are the price of taxes,bus and road repairs.Denverscandidateistryingtofocushardonimmigrationandworldwidecommunicatio
35、ns.(18)Though it will still be over a year until the American public will beallowed to vote,the candidates want to give as much for the nation to decide who they wantto run it.The current president cannot run for office again,because it would go againstthe law.Many people thought he was going to ret
36、ire before the last election,but hedecided to finish what he started.(19)He wants to make sure the policies that he worked sohard on will be put into place.Many of our current presidents supporters are glad that he has stayed and will be verysad when he is no longer in office.英语参考答案 第 7页（共 9 页）请批卷教师
37、一定先仔细研读评分标准请批卷教师一定先仔细研读评分标准，然后严格按照标准进行阅卷然后严格按照标准进行阅卷。在系统后台可在系统后台可以看见老师的单位阅卷时间和赋分情况以看见老师的单位阅卷时间和赋分情况，对于敷衍了事和问题卷过多的教师对于敷衍了事和问题卷过多的教师，教育局会教育局会向学校领导客观反馈。向学校领导客观反馈。一、应用文一、应用文【评分标准】1评分原则（1）本题总分为 15 分，按五个档次进行评分。（2）评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。（3
38、）评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。（4）评分时还应注意：词数少于 60 或多于 100 的，扣 2 分。单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差以致影响交际的，可将分数降低一个档次。2各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（1315 分）覆盖了所有内容要点，表述清楚、合理。使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响理解。有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（1012 分）覆盖了所有内容要点
39、，表述比较清楚、合理。使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档（79 分）英语参考答案 第 8页（共 9 页）覆盖了大部分内容要点，有个别地方表述不够清楚、合理。使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档（46 分）遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点，或一些内容与写作目的不相关。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接
40、手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。未能达到预期的写作目的。第一档（13 分）遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点，或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。完全未达到预期的写作目的。零分未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。二二、读后续写读后续写【评分标准】1评分原则（1）本题总分为 25 分，按五个档次进行评分。（2）评分时，应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰
41、当性和多样性。上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。（3）评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。（4）评分时还应注意：词数少于 130 或多于 170 的，扣 2 分。英语参考答案 第 9页（共 9 页）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差以致影响交际的，可将分数降低一个档次。2各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（2125 分）创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响理解。有效
42、地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。第四档（1620 分）创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高。使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第三档（1115 分）创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关。使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第二档（610 分）内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文情境有一定程度脱节。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。第一档（15 分）内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。零分未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
