1、新高考2021读后续写真题讲解史妙欣 MiaMia读The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the
2、kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.When:Where:Who:读The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they m
3、ade the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove(火炉)burner to heat up the frying pan(煎锅).Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too ho
4、t and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink(洗碗池)and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.读Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid(盖子)starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled o
5、ver and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put hi
6、s hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.How:excitementpanickedcalmmessy续What:Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Plot 1Plot 1:与上文衔接：_Plot 2:与第二段衔接与第二段衔接：_ Para 2:The twins carr
7、ied the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Plot 3:与上文衔接与上文衔接：_Plot 4:升华主升华主题题：_爸爸指导、帮助他们爸爸指导、帮助他们他们顺利在妈妈起床前做好早餐他们顺利在妈妈起床前做好早餐当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。这对双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒他们的妈妈。这对双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒他们的妈妈。妈妈很惊讶、感动并了解情况妈妈很惊讶、感动并了解情况双胞胎感谢妈妈平时的付出双胞胎感谢妈妈平时的付出写1.Without a second thought,句子。没
8、有多想/毫不犹豫，.2.A wave of+情绪名词情绪名词+swept over 人人.谁感到一阵xx。A wave of _ swept over _.他们的妈妈感到非常惊讶和幸福。3.As+adj.+words whispered in Bs mind.A.的话在B的脑海里回响。4.It seemed as if+句子。句子。仿佛.It seemed as if _.(savior)仿佛爸爸是上天派来的救世主。surprise and happinesstheir mothertheir father was the savior sent by the heaven写5.No one
9、was more+adj.than sb.没有人比.更.。否定词否定词+比较级比较级=最高级最高级 No one was more _ than _.没有人比他们的爸爸更能支持他们。She believed no one was more _ than _.她觉得没有人比他更幸福。supportive their fatherblissfulherPara 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.1._,he was greatly surprised.知道他们在准备什么后，他非常惊讶。
10、2.So immediately,he offered to get involved in the kids job.3.First,he put the pot of porridge on a _ heat,_ _.首先，他把一锅粥放在小火上，让Jeff小心煮十五分钟。4.And then,he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk.写写:加分项：使用非谓语动词加分项：使用非谓语动词Knowing what they were preparing forgentleasking Jeff to watch
11、 out for it going for fifteen minutes.Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.5._,they started to fry bread together.所有的准备工作都做好了，他们开始一起煎面包。6._ a flash,sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen._ their delight,the breakfast was a success in the end.一瞬间，厨房里弥漫着甜甜的
12、气味。令他们高兴的是，早餐最后很成功。写写:加分项：使用非谓语动词加分项：使用非谓语动词With all preparations doneInToPara 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.1._，the woman heard a“Happy Mother Day!”from her adorable children _.睁开眼睛，女人听到了来自她可爱孩子的“母亲节快乐”，手里还拿着热腾腾的早餐。2._,with _ explanation she better realized how
13、 precious this Mothers Day surprise is.孩子们身后站着他们的父亲,听了他的解释她更清楚这份母亲节惊喜的可贵。写写:加分项：使用高级句型加分项：使用高级句型(定语从句，倒装句，强调句定语从句，倒装句，强调句)Eyes opened/Opening her eyeswho held hot,sweet breakfast before her Behind the children stood their fatherwhose写Para 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mot
14、her up.3.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,_.两个孩子能做好早餐，这是她没想到的。4.The twins hugged their mother tightly together,saying“Thank you mom,we exactly know how hard it is to make a breakfast,but you have done it for us everyday.”Mothers eyes were welled up with tears and nodded.写写:加分项：使用高级句型加分项：使用高级句型(定语从句，倒装句，强调句定语从句，倒装句，强调句)which she hadnt expected
