1、Continuation Writing 读后续写读后续写 之之 如何搭建框架如何搭建框架 译林版必修一译林版必修一Unit 2 Lets talk teensLead-in 1.Did you ever have a quarrel with your parents?2.Do you know how to fix a broken relationship caused by a quarrel?Part OneWhat is Continuation Writing?第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。That night,I
2、quarreled with my mother,then stormed out of the house.While on the road,I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket,I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home.At the same time,I went through a noodle shop,and I suddenly felt very hungry.I wished for a bowl of noodles,
3、but I had no money!The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked,Hey little girl,you want to eat a bowl?But.but I do not carry money.I shyly replied.Okay,I ll treat you.the seller said,come in,I will cook you a bowl.A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles.After
4、eating some pieces,I cried.What is it?He asked.,Nothing.I am just touched by your kindness!I said as I wiped my tears.Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles,and my mother,after a quarrel,chased me out of the house.She is cruel!The seller sighed,Girl,why did you think so?Think again
5、.I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way.Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little.Why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom?I was really surprised after hearing that.Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful
6、,and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so,not even a little.注意：1.续写的词数应为 150 左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Just at that moment,many memories came back into my mind._ _ When arriving home,I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table,worried and tired._ _ 350词左右的语言材料 350350词左右词左
7、右的语言材料的语言材料两段开头语两段开头语考考纲纲人与社会人与社会 人与自我人与自我 人与自然人与自然（温情或化险为夷的故事，表达人间有（温情或化险为夷的故事，表达人间有真情、大爱真情、大爱）（主角的自我（主角的自我发展、变化或成长发展、变化或成长）（人与动物或自然（人与动物或自然和谐相处和谐相处）Part TwoHow should we finish Continuation Writing?译林版必修一译林版必修一Unit 2 Lets talk teens读读写写读后读后续写续写思思1.Reading for the basic elements when/wherewhowhat/h
8、owwhy第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。That night,I quarreled with my mother,then stormed out of the house.While on the road,I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket,I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home.At the same time,I went through a noodle sho
9、p,and I suddenly felt very hungry.I wished for a bowl of noodles,but I had no money!The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked,Hey little girl,you want to eat a bowl?But.but I do not carry money.I shyly replied.Okay,I ll treat you.the seller said,come in,I will cook you a bowl.A few min
10、utes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles.After eating some pieces,I cried.What is it?He asked.,Nothing.I am just touched by your kindness!I said as I wiped my tears.Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles,and my mother,after a quarrel,chased me out of the house.She
11、 is cruel!The seller sighed,Girl,why did you think so?Think again.I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way.Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little.Why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom?I was really surprised after hearing that.Why did I not thin
12、k of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful,and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so,not even a little.注意：1.续写的词数应为 150 左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Just at that moment,many memories came back into my mind._ _ When arriving home,I saw my mother sitting
13、at the dinner table,worried and tired._ _ 350词左右的语言材料 1.Reading for the basic elements Tense:_first person perspective第一人称视角第一人称视角1.Reading for the basic elements beginningclimaxendingrising actionfalling actionI had a quarrel with my mother.A seller_The sellers words_Many memories came back into my
14、 mind.When arriving home,I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table,worried and tired.gave me a bowl of noodles.reminded me what my mom had done for me.I:angrymother:angry,sad情感线touched/moved/gratefulashamedregretful,grateful1.Reading for the basic elements Which is the theme?A.a cruel mother B.a w
15、arm-hearted seller C.a family tragedy D.a touching mother-daughter story.Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little.Why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom?I was really surprised after hearing that.Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made
16、me feel grateful,and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so,not even a little.clue线索线索2.Thinking for the endingThe storys ending would be like this:_The purpose of the passage is to_I hugged my mom and we made peace with each other.tell us to be grateful to our parents.2
17、.Thinking for the plotI remembered the things my mom had done for me.(第一段首句第一段首句）I went back home.（第一段尾句）（第一段尾句）What did your mother ever do for you?2.Thinking for the plot1.Why did the mother sit at the dinner table?2.Why was the mother worried and tired?3.What would I do and how did I feel?4.What
18、would the mother say and do?2.Thinking for the plotMy mom had looked for me everywhere.I walked close to her and made an apology.She wiped away tears for me.2.Thinking for the plot首句呼应上文首句呼应上文I remembered尾句衔接过渡尾句衔接过渡I went back home.刻画细节刻画细节the things I remembered首句呼应上文首句呼应上文She must have.尾句卒章显志尾句卒章
19、显志sorry,grateful刻画细节刻画细节say/do/feel范文赏析范文赏析 Just at that moment,many memories came back into my mind.When I was ill,she was always the one taking care of me.When I had trouble with my studies,she never lost faith in me and encouraged me to keep going.When I arrived home during the weekend,she always
20、 prepared my favorite food.All her kindness came back to me.I should be grateful for all(she had done for me).I just realized that all the scolding from my mother was due to the fact that my mother really cared a lot about me.Tears rolling down my cheeks,I made my way home immediately.情绪感受、心理活动描写情绪感
21、受、心理活动描写范文赏析范文赏析 When arriving home,I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table,worried and tired.She must have been looking for me everywhere.I was ready for her anger and shouts.However,before I could apologize,my mother saw me and gently said,“Oh,honey!Youre back!Come inside.You are probably very
22、 hungry?I cooked your favorite noodles.”No longer able to control myself,I stepped forward and cried in her arms.“Im sorry,mom.I should make an apology for my rudeness to you.I shouldnt quarrel with you.Mom,I love you.Thank you for all the things you have done for me.”“I am very happy that you can u
23、nderstand me.My dear,I love you forever.Mom said warmly.We hugged each other as tightly as possible,our eyes filled with tears.That night,I grew up.情绪感受、心理活动描写情绪感受、心理活动描写语言、对话描写语言、对话描写3.Writing for homeworkEvaluation Criteria Is the handwriting beautiful?Does the writing include two paragraphs?Are there any punctuation(标点符号)errors?Is the first word in each sentence capitalized(大写)?Are there any spelling mistakes?Is the last sentence in paragraph 1 a transitional(过渡性的)sentence?Are there any vivid description?Can you feel the theme in your writing?
