1、Book1 Unit 2 Traveling AroundReading for Writing旅行计划写作结构及句式梳理Lead inXian City WallShaanxi History MuseumXian Bell TowerThe Terracotta ArmyA Travel Plan to XianRead for the structure A travel plan to XianPurposePlansTransportThoughtsCloseGreetings旅行计划写作结构 第一段：（对来信作出反馈）引出旅行计划；第二段：详细介绍旅行计划；（时间、目的地、交通方式
2、、活动等）第三段：体会+期待回复。旅行计划句式开头句式：开头句式：1.Im very glad/delighted to know everything goes well in your new school life.（问候）（问候）我很高兴知道你的新学校生活一切顺利。我很高兴知道你的新学校生活一切顺利。2.Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xian,which is amazing.（感谢来信）（感谢来信）感谢您来信介绍您在西安的旅行，真是太棒了。感谢您来信介绍您在西安的旅行，真是太棒了。3.I am writing to tell
3、 you something about my plans for the coming holidays.（写信目的）（写信目的）我写信是想告诉你一些关于我即将到来的假期的计划。我写信是想告诉你一些关于我即将到来的假期的计划。4.My travel plan is as follows./Here is my travel plan.（引出计划）（引出计划）我的旅行计划如下。我的旅行计划如下。/这是我的旅行计划。这是我的旅行计划。旅行计划句式内容句式：内容句式：1.During/over the summer holiday.I am planning to travel to/visit/
4、pay a visit to.（时间（时间+计划）计划）暑假期间，我计划去暑假期间，我计划去.旅行旅行.2.With the summer holiday coming/approaching.I am planning to travel to/visit/pay a visit to.（时间（时间+计划）计划）暑假即将到来，我计划去暑假即将到来，我计划去.旅行旅行3.My first attraction/destination is.（引出地点）（引出地点）because.(原因原因)我的第一个景点我的第一个景点/目的地是目的地是.因为因为.4.What interests/impres
5、ses me most is its unique culture and friendly people.（地点描述）（地点描述）最让我感兴趣最让我感兴趣/印象深刻的是它独特的文化和友好的人民印象深刻的是它独特的文化和友好的人民.旅行计划句式内容句式：内容句式：5.is famous for its admirable/unique/splendid/breathtaking view/sight.（地点描述）（地点描述）.以其令人钦佩以其令人钦佩/独特独特/壮丽壮丽/令人惊叹的景色而令人惊叹的景色而闻名。闻名。7.I am planning to go there by train and
6、 come back by boat.（交通方式）（交通方式）我打算坐火车去那里，坐船回来。我打算坐火车去那里，坐船回来。8.I firmly believe that we will have a wonderful holiday.(旅行期待旅行期待)我坚信我们会度过一个美好的假期。我坚信我们会度过一个美好的假期。旅行计划句式结尾句式：结尾句式：1.What do you think of my travel plan?I cant wait to enjoy the amazing sights there.（旅行期待）（旅行期待）你觉得我的旅行计划怎么样？我迫不你觉得我的旅行计划怎么样
7、？我迫不及待地想欣赏那里的美景。及待地想欣赏那里的美景。2.In my opinion,travel can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.（旅游感受）（旅游感受）在我看来，旅行不仅可以丰富在我看来，旅行不仅可以丰富我的知识，还可以开阔我的视野。我的知识，还可以开阔我的视野。3.I am looking forward to your early reply./I sincerely hope to hear from you soon.（期待回复）（期待回复）我期待着你的早日答复我期待着你的早日答复/我真诚
8、地希望很快我真诚地希望很快收到你的来信。收到你的来信。Its your time!Writing（15 minutes）假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，假定你是李华，十月假期你和家人要去海南岛旅游，请你给请你给RichardRichard写一封回信写一封回信，告诉他你的安排。，告诉他你的安排。目的地目的地中国第二大岛中国第二大岛-海南岛海南岛时间时间1010月月1 1日日-10-10月月6 6日日活动活动岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营岛上远足，海上冲浪，岛上宿营感想感想增长知识，拓宽视野增长知识，拓宽视野10（写作练习一）写作结构：1.对Richard的来信做出反馈；2.详细介绍旅
9、行计划；（时间、目的地、交通方式、活动等）3.体会+期待回复。参考范文参考范文:Dear Richard,Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xian,which is amazing.I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays.（感谢来信（感谢来信+引出计划）引出计划）With the National Day coming,I am planning to travel to Hainan Island to see its beau
10、tiful scenery with my family.(旅行地点旅行地点)We will spend 6 days there,from Oct.1th to Oct.6th.（旅行时间）（旅行时间）Its because of its beautiful scenery that we choose to travel to Hainan Island.（原因）（原因）Other than hiking on the island,we have planed many other activities like surfing in the water,spending the nig
11、hts in the tents.（具体活动）（具体活动）I firmly believe that we will have a wonderful holiday.（旅行期待）（旅行期待）In my opinion,travel can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.Looking forward to your early reply.(旅行感想旅行感想+期待回复期待回复)Yours,Li HuaWrite a reply to Richard.WritingThe West LakeLingyin T
12、empleSong ChengThe Great WallThe Forbidden CityThe Summer PalacePick one city and share your travel plan with him.(Words:80-100)（写作练习二）Dear Richard,Im very glad to know everything goes well in your new school life!My new school life is also amazing.Now,with the National holiday approaching,my parent
13、s and I are planning to pay a visit to the Great Wall.It is one of the wonders in the world,famous for its grandiosity(宏伟宏伟)as well as historic stories behind.I just cant wait to see it.Were also going to visit other places in Beijing,such as the Forbidden city,and the Summer Palace,both of which ar
14、e admirable architectures.I believe we will be amazed by its unique culture and extraordinary views.We are taking a flight to go there.Enjoy yourself and look forward to your beautiful photos.Yours,Xiao LiWhats your understanding of travel?Treasure the life 珍惜生活珍惜生活Relax ourself 放松自我放松自我Admire the scenery 欣赏美景欣赏美景Venture the unknown 探索未知探索未知 Experience the cultures 体验文化体验文化Learn new knowledge 学习新知学习新知 Try to define travel using words beginning with these letters.
