1、自然灾害的描述(作文讲评)与自然灾害相关的名词、名词词组disasterHow many kinds?How many kinds?consequencesconsequences地震地震洪水洪水 旱灾旱灾火山喷发火山喷发海啸海啸飓风飓风 台风台风龙卷风龙卷风泥石流泥石流滑坡滑坡森林大火森林大火雷暴雷暴暴风雪暴风雪沙尘暴沙尘暴earthquakeearthquakefloodflooddroughtdrought volcano eruption volcano eruptiontsunamitsunamihurricanehurricanetyphoontyphoontornadotorna
2、domudslidemudslide landslide landslide forest fire forest fire thunderstorm thunderstorm snowstorm snowstorm sandstorm sandstorm停电停电停水停水破坏,损害破坏,损害毁坏毁坏紧急情况紧急情况废墟废墟处于危险中处于危险中震惊中震惊中受灾地区受灾地区Aid Aid power cutpower cutwater shortagewater shortage damage damage destroy destroy emergency emergency ruins rui
3、ns in danger in danger in shock in shock stricken area/disaster area stricken area/disaster areaSupplies 供给品救济帐篷 tents/shelters 与自然灾害相关的动词、动词词组1 1 描述灾害发生的时候描述灾害发生的时候发生,爆发发生,爆发喷发喷发惊慌惊慌藏起来藏起来逃跑逃跑被困在被困在倒塌倒塌幸存下来幸存下来遭受遭受.造成巨大损失造成巨大损失break out/strike/hitbreak out/strike/hiterupt erupt panicpanichidehidees
4、cape fromescape fromget trapped/be buried in get trapped/be buried in fall downfall downsurvive survive suffersuffercause great damagecause great damage2 2 救援救援 救援救援 come to rescue come to rescue搭建庇护所搭建庇护所 set up shelters set up shelters 挖出挖出 dig out dig out 捐赠捐赠 donate donate 提供某人某物提供某人某物 provide s
5、th.for sb.provide sth.for sb.从灾难中恢复从灾难中恢复 recover from the disaster recover from the disaster 送水和食物送水和食物 deliver water and food to.deliver water and food to.重建家园重建家园 rebuild the home rebuild the home与自然灾害相关的动词、动词词组2.2.描述自然灾害用到的形容词描述自然灾害用到的形容词可怕的可怕的凶猛的凶猛的破坏性强的破坏性强的不期而至的不期而至的数不清的数不清的失踪的失踪的担心的担心的受伤的受伤的
6、失去意识的失去意识的 terrible/terrifyingterrible/terrifying violent/powerful/fierceviolent/powerful/fierce destructivedestructive unexpectedunexpected countless/numerouscountless/numerous missingmissing be concerned about/be anxious about/be worried be concerned about/be anxious about/be worried about about i
7、njured/hurtinjured/hurt unconsciousunconsciousPara.1:Lead(导语)言简意赅 8月8日,一场强烈的台风(名为Typhoon Morakot)袭击了台湾南部;带来了50年来最严重的水灾;产生了巨大的损失。On August 8th,a violent typhoon called Morakot struck/hit On August 8th,a violent typhoon called Morakot struck/hit the south of Taiwan(southern Taiwan),the south of Taiwan
8、(southern Taiwan),which led towhich led to the most the most serious flood in the past 50 years,as a result/in serious flood in the past 50 years,as a result/in consequence,consequence,causingcausing great damage to the area.great damage to the area.用不同的细节描述灾害带来的影响。伤亡情况伤亡情况:Para.2:Body(正文)Present mo
9、re details据悉,在这次水灾中,460人死亡,35人受伤,62人失踪。It was learned that 460 people were found dead,35 got It was learned that 460 people were found dead,35 got injured and 62 were/went missing in the floods.injured and 62 were/went missing in the floods.伤亡情况;公共设施情况Para.2:Body(正文)Present more details用不同的细节描述灾害带来的
10、影响。基本情况:(翻译)这次水灾来势凶猛,淹没了快半个城市。The flood was so fierce/powerful that it almost submerged The flood was so fierce/powerful that it almost submerged half of the city.half of the city.1.巨浪冲走了车、房子,10000多座房屋倒塌,很多人无家可归。Cars and homes were swept away by huge waves.More than Cars and homes were swept away by
11、 huge waves.More than 10000 houses fell down/collapsed,making many people 10000 houses fell down/collapsed,making many people homeless.homeless.(被动语态,(被动语态,makemake现在分词作结果状语现在分词作结果状语)2.不仅如此,强大的海水还冲垮了桥梁和堤防,使得交通瘫痪。(leave现在分词作状语)Even worse,the powerful seawater washed away levees and Even worse,the pow
12、erful seawater washed away levees and bridges,leaving the traffic brought down.bridges,leaving the traffic brought down.Para.2:Body(正文)Present more details3.受洪水影响,电力中断,居民无法正常生活。Affected by the floods,Affected by the floods,people were unable to live a people were unable to live a normal life as usua
13、l due to power cuts.normal life as usual due to power cuts.Affected by the floods,Affected by the floods,people cannot manage to lead people cannot manage to lead a normal life as usual since the power/electricity was a normal life as usual since the power/electricity was cut off.cut off.4.据估计,造成的经济
14、损失达97个亿。It is estimated that the economic losses caused by the It is estimated that the economic losses caused by the floods amounted to 9.7 billion.floods amounted to 9.7 billion.Para.2:Body(正文)Present more details It was learned that 460 people were found dead,35 got It was learned that 460 people
15、 were found dead,35 got injured and 62 were/went missing in the floods.The floodinjured and 62 were/went missing in the floods.The flood was so was so fierce/powerful that it almost submerged half of the city.Cars fierce/powerful that it almost submerged half of the city.Cars and homes were swept aw
16、ay by huge waves.More than 10000 houses and homes were swept away by huge waves.More than 10000 houses fell down/collapsed.Even worse,the powerful seawater washed fell down/collapsed.Even worse,the powerful seawater washed away levees and bridges,leaving the traffic brought down.away levees and brid
17、ges,leaving the traffic brought down.Affected by the floods,people cannot manage to lead a normal Affected by the floods,people cannot manage to lead a normal life as usual since the power/electricity was cut off.It was life as usual since the power/electricity was cut off.It was estimated that the
18、economic losses caused by the disaster estimated that the economic losses caused by the disaster amounted to 9.7 billion.amounted to 9.7 billion.Para.3:Rescue work+wishRescue work:Rescue work:一听到台湾被洪水袭击,政府迅速指派军队赶往灾区。On hearing the news that the terrible floods hit On hearing the news that the terrib
19、le floods hit southern Taiwan,the government immediately southern Taiwan,the government immediately sent/appointed the army to make their way to the sent/appointed the army to make their way to the disaster area.disaster area.The officials said that the army made every effort to get The officials sa
20、id that the army made every effort to get involved in the rescue work.Much to our delight,nearly involved in the rescue work.Much to our delight,nearly 300 natives/local citizens were rescued from the floods.300 natives/local citizens were rescued from the floods.政府官员说台湾军方全力参与救灾工作,从灾区救出约300名当地居民Para
21、.3:Rescue work+wishWish:Wish:With the strong support from the government and tireless With the strong support from the government and tireless efforts of the citys people,Taiwan will surely get back efforts of the citys people,Taiwan will surely get back up on its feet in the near future.up on its f
22、eet in the near future.Para.3:Rescue work+wish On hearing the news that the terrible floods hit On hearing the news that the terrible floods hit southern Taiwan,the government immediately southern Taiwan,the government immediately sent/appointed the army to make their way to the sent/appointed the a
23、rmy to make their way to the disaster area.The officials said that the army made disaster area.The officials said that the army made every effort to get involved in the rescue work.Much to every effort to get involved in the rescue work.Much to our delight,nearly 300 natives/local citizens were our
24、delight,nearly 300 natives/local citizens were rescued from the floods.With the strong support from rescued from the floods.With the strong support from the government and tireless efforts of the citys the government and tireless efforts of the citys people,Taiwan will surely get back up on its feet
25、 in people,Taiwan will surely get back up on its feet in the near future.the near future.汶川地震是自唐山地震后最可怕的灾难之一。许多房屋建筑被毁,成千上万的人失去家园。幸好,政府采取了紧急措施:许多士兵派去受灾地区及时救援被困人员。大批食物,水,帐篷,药物等运送往受灾地区。志愿者们纷纷伸出援助之手。Practice:Practice:1.许多房屋和楼房被毁,多达10,000,000 人无家可归。(leave(leave现在分词作结果状语)现在分词作结果状语)2.出现山体滑坡,道路被堵同时水电通讯中断。(w
26、ith(with的复合结构的复合结构)A great number of houses and buildings were destroyed,leaving as many as 10000000 people homeless.There were landslides,with roads blocked as well as water supply,electricity and telecommunication cut off.3.使69,197人死亡,374,176人受伤,18,340人失踪(leave+宾语+宾补)4.许多士兵被派往那里营救人们,大量的志愿者提供帮助.5.大
27、批的食物、水、帐篷和药从全中国和世界的其他地方运到地震灾区。It left 69,197 dead,374,176 injured,and 18,340 missing.A great many soldiers were sent there to rescue the people from danger,and lots of volunteers offered help.Large quantities of food,water,tents and medicine were transported from all over China and other parts of th
28、e world to the earthquake-stricken area.抗震减灾的建议:1.公众很有必要掌握应急自救措施2.加强科学研究,力求准确预报地震It is of great significance for the public to learn about some first aid in emergencies.Scientific research should be strengthened to give precise forecasts of possible earthquakes.1.避免无秩序地蜂拥而出2.躲在结实的家具下边3.用手臂或包护着头和颈4.注
29、意避开吊灯、电扇等悬挂物mustnt rush out without orderhide yourself under some hard furnitureprotect your head and neck by your arms or bagavoid things that hang above your head,like ceiling lamps,fans and so on.5.跑动寻找庇护处时,用一些较硬的东西保护脑袋6.杜绝明火,关煤气和电源7.不要使用电梯8.在户外时跑到远离树木、建筑、广告牌、电线等的开阔之处。when you run for safe shelters,dont forget to cover your head with something hard.put out fire and turn off the gas and electricity stop using the liftOnce you are outdoors,try to get into an open area away from trees,buildings,signs and power lines.