1、 How to write a letter of advice and get a high mark WhatWhat makes a good composition ? clear and complete content varied sentence structures advanced words and expressions proper transitions beautiful handwriting Content & language 建议信建议信 Ending express your expectations and wishes Beginning state
2、 your purpose Body offer your advice and give the reasons 实战演练实战演练 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友假定你是李华，你的英国笔友TomTom为其学校为其学校“音乐音乐 社团社团”负责人，打算近期在人举行负责人，打算近期在人举行“中国传统音乐周中国传统音乐周” 活动，希望你对此次活动的内容提出建议。请给他写活动，希望你对此次活动的内容提出建议。请给他写 封回信，内容包括：封回信，内容包括： 1.1.你的建议；你的建议； 2.2.表达祝愿。表达祝愿。 注意：注意：1.1.词类词类100100左右；左右； 2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连
3、贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Part 1 : 开门见山，点出写信目的开门见山，点出写信目的就就 某事给出建议某事给出建议 1. 说明事由说明事由 2. 愿意给出建议愿意给出建议 3. 夺人眼球开头句夺人眼球开头句 How to start ? 1. I am _ to know you are going to hold a Chinese traditional Music Weed in your school. 2. I have learned that you have some _ in holding . 3. Id like to _you some _ advice
4、 here. 4. My suggestions are _. offer practical delighted as follows trouble delighted trouble offer practical as follows 1. I am delighted to know you are going to . I would like to offer you some practical advice. (形容词做状语形容词做状语) 2. I have learned that you have some trouble in., my suggesions are a
5、s follows. (独立主格结构独立主格结构) 夺夺 人人 眼眼 球球 开开 头头 句句 夺夺 人人 眼眼 球球 开开 头头 句句 conclusion Delighted to know you are going to , Having learned/ Knowing that you have some trouble in., 1. 给出建议（23个） 2. 陈述理由 3. 亮点出彩篇中句 Part 2 : 给出建议，陈述理由给出建议，陈述理由 1. 建议一，及理由建议一，及理由 2.建议二，及理由建议二，及理由 _(首先首先)，I _(强烈建议强烈建议) you hold a
6、student-centered party, so students can _(享受享受) traditional Chinese Traditional songs, dances and so on. This can _(不仅不仅) help the students experience these _(亲自亲自)， but also _(激发激发) their interest. _(此外此外)，I think it would _ (有好处有好处) if you can also invite some specialists to _(做演讲做演讲) on the _(相关的
7、相关的) topic. This will help students appreciate it more. be of benefit strongly suggest enjoy not only in person arouse In addition First of all deliver a speech related 亮亮 点点 出出 彩彩 篇篇 章章 句句 conclusion 亮亮 点点 出出 彩彩 篇篇 章章 句句 定语从句 部分倒装 First of all, I strongly suggest you hold a student- centered party,
8、 where students can enjoy traditional Chinese Traditional songs, dances and so on. This not only can help the students experience these in person, but also arouse their interest. 非限制性非限制性 定语从句定语从句 In addition, I think it would be of benefit if you can also invite some specialists to deliver a speech
9、 on the related topic, which will help students appreciate it more. Part 3 : 表达祝愿，期待回复表达祝愿，期待回复 1. 表达祝愿表达祝愿 2. 期待回复期待回复 3. 韵味无穷结尾句韵味无穷结尾句 1.I would be delighted/pleased/glad if you will take my advice/suggestions in to consideraion. 2. I hope that my suggestions / recommendations /advice will be ben
10、eficial/of benefit to you. 3. I hope you will find my suggestions/ advice/ recomendations/ helpful /useful /practical /beneficial. How to express your expectation and wishes? Homework 假设你是李华，你的英国网友假设你是李华，你的英国网友 Linda最近在中国学习。她写信向你最近在中国学习。她写信向你 诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的生活 和学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。和学习环境，想家，感到很焦虑。 请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信 。要点如下：。要点如下： 1.表示理解并给予安慰；表示理解并给予安慰； 2.提出建议并给出理由。提出建议并给出理由。 注意：词数注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已左右（开头和结尾已 给出，但不计入总词数）给出，但不计入总词数）
