1、20222022年各地高三模考读后续写讲解年各地高三模考读后续写讲解学生高分范文学生高分范文+教师原创下水文教师原创下水文1.2022届浙江绍兴届浙江绍兴4月适应考月适应考阅读下面材料阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整使之构成一篇完整的短文。的短文。Birthdays are typically the occasions for delight and feasting.Family and friends get together on the occasion and convey their regards with t
2、he beautiful presents they bring with themselves.I am personally a big fan of birthdays and wait for my birthday approximately a month prior to the day.This year,my birthday came off on last Monday.I didnt know that my parents had arranged a special party for me.At eight oclock in the evening of my
3、lucky birthday,I was alone at home complaining and frowning,and pitying myself for my misfortune.I thought it was going to be a special day filled with presents and fun,but all I received was a Happy Birthday.All of a sudden,the electricity was cut off and there was a complete darkness in the house.
4、I couldnt do anything.Therefore,I decided to go to sleep and end this unlucky day.Out of the blue in that quiet night,I heard a sudden noise coming from downstairs.Startled and terribly shocked,I suspected that someone broke into the house.Immediately,I tried to phone my parents,but no one answered.
5、After a couple of minutes of fear,I started to calm down.Although in the meantime I heard more noises of people talking,I summoned up some courage and started heading for the basement.As I slowly drew closer to the basement,I guessed there were more than one person,but I found it hard to believe.The
6、re couldnt be a lot of people in our basement!Courageously，I opened the door of the basement.There was a complete darkness.There wasnt a single noise.However，as I approached，I heard some laughter and confirmed that there were people.Suddenly，the lights were on and there stood my parents and friends
7、cheering at me with the beautiful presents they had carefully prepared for me.It was a surprise party！The room was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons.Tables and chairs were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets.A gigantic birthday cake was positioned on the innermost table
8、.注意：注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右；左右；2.至少使用至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Now everything was ready and the party was set in motion.The party was over and the guests began to head off.学生范文学生范文：Now everyth
9、ing was ready and the party was set in motion.“Come on.Make a wish.”One of my best friends encouraged me.I took a deep breath,kept repeating the wish to myself silently and blew out the candles.Applause and cheers filled the basement.Then tradition dictated my first cut of the cake.I slowly and sole
10、mnly cut into the cake,separating a piece,as if I was in performance of some sacred duties.The instant I finished,everyone chorused the birthday song for me.“Thank youall of you!”Tears streaming down my face,I muttered in a choked voice.The next three hours witnessed our fun and games which were abs
11、olutely unforgettable.The party was over and the guests began to head off.After saying goodbye to all the guests,I went back to my room to check on the pile of birthday presents.There was no doubt that I was almost crazy about these precious presents,for many of them could be put to good use someday
12、.But I would never forget the efforts made by my parents and friends.The planning that took place beforehand and all the work that this birthday entailed,with many people rendering gratuitous assistance to make the event run smoothly,are immense.Now I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to
13、them.Because of their sacrifice,I was able to spend such a wonderful surprise birthday.2.2022届佛山四月二检届佛山四月二检阅读下面材料阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整使之构成一篇完整的短文。的短文。Mai Lin wasnt doing well enough at school,or at least she wasnt satisfied with herself.She wished she could do better.“Le
14、ts review the material we learned in the last unit,”the history teacher said.“Who can tell us what caused the War of 1812?”Mai Lin sat at her desk,staring ahead.She hoped the teacher wouldnt call her name.They hadnt studied the War of 1812 at her old school and she didnt know the answer.“Alison?”the
15、 teacher asked instead.Oh,perfect,Mai Lin thought.Of course Alison would have the answer.She seemed to have all the answers.Alison was the most popular girl in school always surrounded by millions of boyfriends,best friends,and others.She was like a brilliant sun.Mai Lin hadnt made one or two friend
16、s of her own so far.Her old school was small and low-key,but a shy person like Mai Lin had a chance there.This new school,however,seemed as big as an airport to Mai Lin,and it seemed very hard to get around in it.She still got lost sometimes in the school.Mai Lin frowned(皱眉皱眉)as Alison answered the
17、teachers question.Alison probably never got lost,Mai Lin thought to herself.You could probably put Alison down in the middle of a desert,and within five minutes shed be able to tell you the best way to get home.History class finally ended,and Mai Lin headed for the gym.The class had been playing bas
18、ketball.Alison,who was as tall and thin and attractive as a tree,was very good at it.Beside her,Mai Lin felt like a very small and foolish ant.Today,however,the gym teacher pointed to a thick rope hanging from the ceiling and said,“Everybody!Youre going to climb this rope today.”注意：注意：1.续写词数应为续写词数应为
19、 150 左右；左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hearing the teachers words,Mai Lin smiled.Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope.学生范文学生范文1：Hearing the teachers words,Mai Lin smiled.She was absolutely in her element,since she had done much weight training and basic movements like running
20、and climbing in her old school.“Now,everyone.Stand in line.Climb in turn,”the teacher ordered.Many students flinched at the sound of the teachers instruction,and of course,failed to complete the rope climbing without courage and appropriate skills.And so was Alison,who stared at the rope timidly and
21、 refused to give it a shot.Finally,it was Mai Lins turn.Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope.She breathed deeply for a few moments in an effort to steady herself.Then she swiftly climbed the rope like a flash,which aroused students applause and cheers.Once she reached the top,she waved
22、one of her arms to the teacher in delight,claiming that she had already accomplished this high-demanding task effortlessly.Her extraordinary feat seemed to deeply impress everyone.When she headed down,everyone gathered around her,praising and admiring.She successfully made acquainted with a few girl
23、s by sharing climbing tricks with them,including Alison.Today,she enjoyed well-deserved success in her peer group.Tomorrow,everything was set to change.学生范文学生范文2：Hearing the teachers words,Mai Lin smiled.She had won a medal in her old schools climbing competition before.Her short figure,strong arms,
24、swift movement were perfectly tailored to climb.Even the smallest ants could show their strength,Mai Lin thought.Her classmates were waiting for their turns to climb the rope,excitedly,but all wound up being stuck in the middle of the rope,awkwardly,Mai Lin,who would be the last one to have a try,wa
25、s confident and well-prepared.Mai Lin stepped forward and got close to the rope.She gripped the rope tightly with her broad hands and began to climb.She was so good at coordinating her legs and arms that she only took 10 minutes to climb to the top of the rope.Then,there came a burst of applause.Aft
26、er that class,the little girl who once was shy and introverted is now a bright star in the school,who establish a friendship with Alison and is satisfied with her new school life.3.2022届浙江金华十校届浙江金华十校4月联考月联考阅读下面短文阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。使之构成一个完整的故事。Dad and Madison were walking through
27、 the party store,gathering decorations for Madisons upcoming birthday party.But I dont want to invite Lucy Gilbert!I dont like her!Madison,you are being unreasonable.If every girl in your class is invited to a party but you,youll feel left out.It would be a big mistake to not invite Lucy to the part
28、y.She never even talks to me!Dad sighed and moved down the aisle.Lucy is a new girl in class.She just moved here a little over a month ago,Think about how that must feel.She doesnt know one single person in the school.She left all of her old friends behind and now she has to try to make new friends.
29、Your party will be a great chance for her to get to know everyone.No,it wont.She will probably sit in the corner and not talk to anyone.Every day at lunch she sits all by herself.She wants to eat alone!Madison shrugged and rolled her eyes.Madison,Im done discussing this.You will invite every girl in
30、 your class,including Lucy Gilbert!On Saturday morning,the family blew up balloons and decorated the house cheerfully.Madison was dressed beautifully for the day,wearing her new blue dress.It was not typical of her to dress herself like this.She usually wore sports clothes because she loved to be ou
31、tside riding her horse Star with a lead rope（级组）（级组）.Madison greeted her friends at the doorstep,picturing various presents her friends would bring her.In the meanwhile,she was wondering whether Lucy would ruin the party if she came.Anyhow,all the girls she invited came finally,including Lucy.The gi
32、rls had a fantastic time by singing and dancing while Lucy sat in the corner silently alone.Later,all the girls gathered around the table as Madison opened her presents.Opening them one by one,Madison thanked her friends,with a bright smile on her face.注意注意1.所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150左右左右;2.应使用应使用5个以上短
33、文中标有下划线的关键词语个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段续写部分分为两段,每每段开头语已为你写好段开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Lucys present was the very last to be opened.Paragraph 2:Deeply moved by what she said,Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands.教师分析：教师分析：第一段的要点包括：第一段的要点包括：1.Mandiso
34、n 开了礼物，发现了里面有一根缰绳。开了礼物，发现了里面有一根缰绳。2.缰绳系心灵手巧的缰绳系心灵手巧的Lucy所做，以及所做，以及Lucy阐释制作原因。阐释制作原因。第二段的要点包括：第二段的要点包括：1.Mandison深受感动，她同时也对自己之前的冷漠态度表示后悔。深受感动，她同时也对自己之前的冷漠态度表示后悔。2.Mandison 邀请邀请Lucy加入他们的圈子，一起玩。加入他们的圈子，一起玩。3.主旨升华。主旨升华。教师下水文：教师下水文：Lucys present was the very last to be opened.Frowning her forehead into a
35、 knot,Madison wondered what Lucy had in store for her.As she removed the lid from the gift box,a delicately decorated lead rope greeted her eyes,at the end of which a colorful tassel was attached.This amazingly shining gift invited a round of“wows”and“ohs”from Madisons friends,whose fond eyes all fe
36、ll upon Lucy.“I overheard you rode your horse Star,so I bet this hand-made rope might come in useful.If there is anything you dont like,I can modify based on your personal preference.”Deeply moved by what she said,Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands.“Thank you,Lucy!This is the best gift
37、Ive ever received.”Madison choked out.Meanwhile,guilt,shame and self-blame rose within Madisons heart for her previous cold attitude towards such an angelic soul as Lucy.Throwing her arms around the newcomer,Madison gently invited,“Will you play with us and no longer sit alone in a quiet corner?”Nod
38、ding her head firmly,Lucy stepped forward and joined the girls in singing and dancing.Sometimes,the flower of friendship can bud,mature and blossom as long as a listening ear,a golden heart and an adroit hand are present.4.2022届如皋市届如皋市2.5模模阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
39、成一篇完整的短文。整的短文。When I was a baby,my parents gave me anything I wanted.I would play with a toy for a while,get bored,and ask my parents for a new one.Then my dad died when I was 2.And I got even more stuff as my mom,friends,and family gave me more and more stuff to try to make me feel better.My mom co
40、ntinued to treat me to whatever I wanted until 1 was seven and my world crashed.That was when the real estate(房地产房地产)market crashed.My mom had thought buying houses was a good idea as a way to invest her money to take care of us.After the crash,I went from the kid who got a fine iPod and who had the
41、 coolest house,to almost having nowhere to stay.Since then,when I would ask for a new toy or bike,or even to see a movie my mom would say“Im sorry honey but we really cant afford that right now.But my mom had grown up in a family where money was never a problem,so this change was as big for her as i
42、t was for me.My constant requests for toys and video games depend her concern about our financial situation.But wasnt used to hearing no.So,for a year or two,I kept asking for things whether I really needed them or not.Then something happened that would change my way of thinking forever.My mom had b
43、een working really hard all year,just to pay for the necessities,like our rent,and water and power bills.When she asked me what I wanted for my birthday I said that I wanted a new video gaming system.I didnt know that it was expensive.All I knew was that my friends had them and that I wanted one,too
44、.注意注意:1.续写词数应为续写词数应为150左右左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。注意请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。注意:Paragraph 1:On my birthday,I started opening presents,believing that I would get what I asked for.Paragraph 2:From then on I wouldnt ask for anything that I didnt need.作者从一个富家子弟变成了一个近乎家徒四壁的穷娃，怎么和妈妈去适应这个作者从一个富家子弟变成了一个近乎家徒四壁的穷娃，怎么和
45、妈妈去适应这个新环境，妈妈从一个富家小姐变成了一个学会赤手打拼的单亲母亲。而作者自新环境，妈妈从一个富家小姐变成了一个学会赤手打拼的单亲母亲。而作者自己，也从衣来伸手饭来张口的状态变得懂事，体贴，自立根生。己，也从衣来伸手饭来张口的状态变得懂事，体贴，自立根生。第一段的要点是：第一段的要点是：1.作者设想自己的获得游戏机时候的欣喜场景。作者设想自己的获得游戏机时候的欣喜场景。2.母亲没有和自己买游戏机，作者非常难过，失望，愤怒和不解。母亲没有和自己买游戏机，作者非常难过，失望，愤怒和不解。3.母亲坦白家庭惨淡的经济状况，并且道歉，母子两哭成一堆。母亲坦白家庭惨淡的经济状况，并且道歉，母子两哭成
46、一堆。第二段的要点是：第二段的要点是：1.作者开始变得懂事，学会珍惜玩具。作者开始变得懂事，学会珍惜玩具。2.学会节约用钱，甚至自己接一些灵活赚钱。学会节约用钱，甚至自己接一些灵活赚钱。3.家庭经济状况开始好转，作者明白了很重要的道理：自立根生，艰苦创业，家庭经济状况开始好转，作者明白了很重要的道理：自立根生，艰苦创业，节俭最重要。节俭最重要。教师下水文：教师下水文：On my birthday,I started opening presents,believing that I would get what I asked for:Images of the latest gaming s
47、ystem kept crowding in on my mind,which,I believed,would surely invite endless envious looks from my rich friends.However,much to my dismay,a plain-looking birthday card greeted my eyes,on which my mothers hasty handwriting was scribbled,Sorry,James,but I simply had no means of obtaining that gaming
48、 machine.Anyway,happy birthday!I twirled around and met my mothers watery eyes.No longer able to contain her pent-up feelings,she burst out crying on my shoulder and together we collapsed on the ground,tasting the unprecedented bitterness life threw at us.From then on,I would not ask for anything th
49、at I did not need.Meanwhile,dropping out of my circle of rich friends,I learned to treasure all my existing toys and games so that they could be replayed.Also,my old piggy bank was put atop the cupboard and helped me save every penny I made from delivering papers or running errands.Amazed at my grou
50、ndbreaking change,my mom felt her burden shared and was fueled with momentum to move forward.Gradually,our debts were paid off and things took a turn for the better.Obviously,my mother taught me an invaluable lesson with her unbending spirit and unrelenting effort:being spoiled and keeping up will n
