1、上海市 2021 年高考英语冲刺模拟试卷分类汇编 书面表达专题 2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 1 V .GuidedWriting Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 如今，电子支付（electronic payment）成为潮流，现金的使用频率越来越低。请你简要说明 电子支付在生活中的具体应用，并谈谈你时电子支付是否会取代现金的看法。你的文章 必 须包括： 1.简要说明电子支付在生活中的具体应用；
2、2.电子支付是否会取代现金？为什么？ 【答案】There is a growing trend that electronic payment has dominated our lives, and we are gradually stepping into a cashless society. Take a quick look at your daily life, and you will find e-payment has covered every aspect of life today.Its hard to imagine without Alipay how you
3、can make online purchases on Taobao with a few simple clicks.Without WeChat, how can you unlock a shared bike and pay for the fee? E- payments are also almost universally accepted by brick-and-mortar stores.In one sense, we now literally have everything at our fingertips thanks to electronic payment
4、. Eventually, I believe, e-payment will replace cash.For one thing, it stands out for its incomparable convenience.Not only does it spare us the trouble of carrying cash everywhere, but it also saves us enormous amounts of time that would have otherwise been wasted, for example, in long queues.For a
5、nother, it eliminates the necessity to worry about whether the banknotes youve received are real of fake.E-payment also makes it easier for the government to supervise the circulation of money by offering a transparent environment for electronic payments. Admittedly, e-payment has its own drawbacks,
6、 such as potentially severe consequences if ones account is hacked or stolen.But with the improvement of relevant law and regulations, the problem is sure to be kept at bay. To put it in a nutshell, electronic payment can simplify daily affairs, regulate the flow of money and will ultimately dominat
7、e our everyday life.I am looking forward to a convenient, time-saving and safe cashless society. 2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 2 VI.GuidedWriting Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，学校学生会有四个社团正招募新人（如下图所示） ，你希望加入其中一个。 请你写一封应征信，谈谈
8、你的想法。内容必须包括： 1.你希望加入的社团 2.选择该社团的原因 3.你可以为该社团做些什么 注意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear Sir, I am Li Hua , a senior high school student from Class one Grade three. Hearing the news that the studentunion is recruiting new members for four communities including Science club, English theatre club, Eco club and sport
9、s club in my school, which has attached many students attention.Now I can hardly wait to forwardaformal application , hoping tojoin a community that l am keen on after class As far as l am concerned, l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons. First and foremost,not only should
10、we go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness. In the second place, the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long
11、period. Last but not least, doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as football, basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit so that we are aware that union is strength and know the importance of cooperation. All these reasons make me be absorbed in joining Sport
12、s club. If l am elected to be a member of Sports club, l will take active part in all activities.What l can devote myself to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club
13、 is the best choice.l am fascinated by being a member of Sports club. Id appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. Looking forward to you reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求谈谈自己对于加入社团的选择及内心想法。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应征信（夹叙夹议） 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法（或总分总） 要求： 1.你希望加
14、入的社团 2.选择该社团的原因 3.你可以为该社团做些什么 第二步:列提纲（重点词组） join Sports club do exercises to strengthen physical fitness one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation cultivate our team spirit 第三步：连词成句 1.As far as l am concerned,l am eager to join Sports club because of the following reasons. 2.we also should do
15、 exercises to strengthen physical fitness. 3.In the second place,the reason why l prefer Sports club is that doing sports is one of the most useful ways to have a relaxation after studying for a long period. 4.Last but not least,doing sports that are in need of cooperation among students such as foo
16、tball,basketball and volleyball can cultivate our team spirit. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 用词参考： As far as l am concerned not onlybut also First and foremost In the second place Last but not least 【点睛】高分句型 1 First and foremost,not only should we
17、 go to all lengths to study hard in order to acquire more and more knowledge, but we also should do exercises to strengthen physical fitness.(not only 位于句首的部分倒装) 高分句型 2 If l am elected to be a member of Sports club,l will take active part in all activities. （if 引导的条件状语从句） 高分句型 3 What l can devote my
18、self to the construction of the community is that l can convey the positive theories of sports to my friends and classmates and awaken them to the realization that joining Sports club is the best choice.（what 引导的主语从句） 2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 3 VII.GuidedWriting Directions: Write an English composition in
19、 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 现在中国购物网站非常繁荣， 很多人选择网上购物而不是去商场实体店购物， 你更倾向于哪 种购物方式，并说出你的理由。 注意：请勿出现真实的学校及姓名。 Nowadays, online shopping has become an irreversible trend. Some people claim that online shopping has more advantages while others maintain that physical s
20、tores are better. From my perspective, I prefer online shopping for three reasons. First of all, its super convenience is of vital importance to me because it enables me to save more time and energy for my work. Secondly，more choices and more different kinds of commodities are offered on the Interne
21、t so that I can compare prices，types，qualities and can even refer to peoples comments before choosing the appropriate one for me. Last but not least, online shopping enables me to buy things across different countries without travelling around the world, which is of great convenience on a daily basi
22、s. All in all, online shopping is more appealing to me and will definitely keep accompanying me in the future. 2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 4 V .GuidedWriting（25 分）分） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是 Tom,在网上订了一款 MP3 作为生日礼物送给好朋
23、友，但收到的 MP3 却存在 质 量问题。请你给销售经理写一封投诉信。内容包括： 1.MP3 有质量问题； 2.给你造成的损失； 3.你的合理要求. Dear manager， Im writing to tell you about the MP3 I bought last week from your company on the Internet, which was intended for my good friend as a birthday gift. When I opened the delivery, I was surprised to find the wrappi
24、ng paper broken. What was worse, I find the MP3 doesnt work, no matter how many measures I have taken. With reference to my order No. 1314, there is no doubt that the MP3 you delivered really comes from your company, whose poor quality made me very disappointed, and it is the poor MP3 that made me s
25、uffer a great loss from it.Anyway, it cost me 200 yuan, which I saved for nearly half a year. To some extent, the broken MP3 has not only brought me great economic loss but also lessened my trust as a consumer. As my friends birthday is drawing near, I am anxious to know whether a new MP3 can be red
26、elivered as soon as possible. Please take my case into deep consideration rather than turn a blind eye to my requirement. I would appreciate it very much if much attention could be paid to my requirement! Yours truly, Tom 2021 届上海高考英语冲刺模拟试卷 5 VIII. GuidedWriting（25 分）分） Directions: Write an English
27、composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校学生广播正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（科学技术、兴趣爱好、文学艺术） 中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（旅行、环保、健身）中挑选一个纳入该电视台节目。假设 你是该校学生李华，给广播台长写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。 参考范文：参考范文： Guided Writing Dear Present， Im writing to expre
28、ss some of my opinions towards our schools broadcast which intends to change one of the programs from science technology, interest hobby and literature art and select one of them from travelling, environmental protection, fitness. From my perspective, I would choose “interest hobby” to be the one to
29、 be eliminated. Not only is this topic out of date, but also studentsinterest varies a lot. Therefore, they may be indifferent about othersinterest and hobbies. As for the column to be added, I highly recommend is fitness.As senior high students, so busy are we with our study that we often forget to
30、 do some physical exercise and even dont know how to keep fit to avoid getting ill. If the school broadcast can provide us some useful advice on how to keep fit in a good way, which will benefit us a lot and as a result I believe that it will be more popular among students. Id appreciate it very much if you could follow my advice, and Im looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours Li Hua
