1、2022高考英语写作备考之读后续写：To be honest读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When the last customer left KFC, it was already 10:30 pm. Adam, an 18-year-old college student,dragged himself home. He had been working at KFC for over a month that summer vacation.Entering his room, Adam found his younger broth
2、er Bill sitting on the edge of his bed with an uneasy expression on his face.Sorry, Adam. I. I did something wrong, Billsprang up and said nervously.What is it?This afternoon I sneaked (溜) out for a ride on your motorcycle and accidentally hit our neighbor Osman Brooks car. I was so scared and I. I
3、hurried home in panic.Is the car seriously damaged?The left headlight got broken.Its truly your fault and its really dangerous to ride a motorcycle at your age. Besides, its illegal, Adamraised his voice,obviously annoyed. Hearing this, Billlowered his head and bit his lips hard.Anyway,its no use cr
4、ying over spilt milk. I will deal with it tomorrow. Now you go to bed and have a good sleep.The next morning when Adam got up, Bill was stillsleeping soundly酣畅地. Adam was more determined about what he ought to dd as an elder brother.After breakfast, Adam took out all the money he had earned and went
5、 out of the house with it. In the yard he saw his motorcycle, on whose side the scratches (划痕) were clearly visible. Adamshook his head and sighed slightly. Then hesquared挺直his shoulders and quickened his paceto Osmans house.When he arrived, he was welcomed by Osmans wife Mary, who told him that Osm
6、an had gone to the garage to have his car repaired.I have something important to tell him. Can I wait until he comes back? Adamrequested eagerly.Of course. He should be home soon, Mary invited Adam in, served him a cup of coffee and began chatting with him.After half an hour, the door opened and in
7、came Osman. Having said hello to each other, Osman and Adam both sat down on the sofa.注意：1.续写词数应在150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.Paragraph 2: Just then, there came a knock at the door.参考范文Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.“Mr. Brook, Im here
8、 tomake anapology. Yesterday afternoon my brother Bill damaged your car and ran away in panic. We are awfully sorry for that.” “Oh, I see. But its no big deal,” Osman smiled. Then Adam drew out the money from his pocket and said to Osmanwith sincerity, “This is all the money I have. I wonder if it c
9、an pay for your loss.” However, Osmaninsisted that it was only minor damage and declined拒绝to take it.Just then, there came a knock at the door.Osman went to answer it, only to find Bill standing outside. “Morning, Mr. Brook. I Ive come to say sorry for ” Billstammered结巴. But Osman laughed and let hi
10、m in. The two brothers were both surprised and glad to see each other. Osman gave them a thumbs-up大拇指and praised them happily,“Good boys, I trulyappreciate your honesty. Just forget about my car.” Whatever the boys said, Osman wouldnt take the money. Finally, he accepted their suggestion thattheymak
11、e it upto him by doing some work in his garden.评分标准1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑：1）创造内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度；2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性；3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。根据内容情节确定档次根据语言和篇章档次内浮动或根据具体情况适当调整档次最后给分。（不能以孤立的亮点词句作为采分点，不得按点给分。）3.其它注意事项：1）词数少于l20的，酌情扣分；只写一段的原则上不超过10分。2）小错：单词拼写、冠词、介词、大小写、标点符号等错误。
12、（偶尔的小错可忽略不计，但小错较多，应视其对交际的影响程度酌情扣分）大错：时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等（影响所属档次）。时态全错减5分（如果语言较好，可在本档内酌情扣分）。时态部分错误，根据错的程度酌情扣分。3）只要有与原文有关而非完全抄袭原文的句子，就不能判0分。4）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。续写内容解析从给出的前文可知，文中出现了三个主要人物，Bill, Adam和Osman。年轻的弟弟Bill未经哥哥Adam允许，骑他的摩托车外出，撞坏了邻居Osman的汽车。事故发生后，担惊受怕的Bill选择直接逃回家。忐忑不安的Bill一直等到Adam当天夜里下班回家后，向他讲述了
13、事情经过，Adam严厉批评Bill。经过慎重考虑后，Adam决定承担作为兄长应负的责任：替弟弟到Osman家道歉认错。根据续写部分第一段首句“Adam cleared his throat and began to speak.”及文中关键信息“After breakfast, Adam took out all the money he had earned and went out of the house with it.”可以判断，本段应描写Adam如何向Osman道歉，并提出用自己的个人积蓄赔偿损失及Osman对此的反应。本段需要侧重神态、语言和动作描写。根据续写部分第二段首句“Ju
14、st then, there came a knock at the door.”及文章情节合理发展的需要，敲门的人应是文中出现的主要人物之一：Bill。经过激烈思想斗争的Bill，最终选择找Osman认错。本段需描写兄弟俩见面后的反应、Bill的行为表现、Osman对兄弟二人的态度和评价以及事件的最终结局。本段需侧重语言、神态、动作及情感描写，在情感升华上应注意凸显诚实做人的主题，体现正确的价值观导向。注意：1. 第二段敲门的人可以是其他人，故事也可以是不同的结局，只要符合文章主题，体现正能量，故事情节能自圆其说即可。2. 续写部分必须提到 Adam 拿的钱，可以用来赔偿，也可以用来买礼物等。如果丝毫不提及，属于与前文情节脱节，建议降档处理。
