1、2022.1浙江首考读后续写：浙江首考读后续写：另类英雄另类英雄-Jane Theme-based continuous writing:to be purposeful and beautiful When Dr.Henderson was assigning(指定)project mates for his psychology class,I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with.Above all,I hoped he
2、wouldnt assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match.As fate would have it（像命中注定一般）,Dr.Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one perso
3、n in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself.He looked at me as though I werent there.I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course.He wasnt mean or abusive毁谤的，虐待的.He just gave me the impression that he co
4、uld do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to say,I didnt look forward to an entire team of being brushed off拒绝，打发,but I tried to make the best of it and didnt say anything for fear that I would make things worse.The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说
5、),set up an experiment to test the hypothesis,do the statistical analysis and present the findings.Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project,I was uneasy.Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-minded
6、ness and good gradesthe exact opposite of me.I actually wanted to drop the class at one point,but stopped short/dead突然停止(说话、行动等)because I didnt want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out临阵退缩.I decided to stick to it no matter what.After long discussions,we somehow agreed to do a study on
7、 the psychological well-being of teenagers.I wasnt sure what it meant exactly,but at least we had a topic.Para.1 We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans._ Para.2 Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease._阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。In the book“Pr
8、ide and Prejudice”,Elizabeth,a country lady met Darcy,who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match.For Elizabeth,Darcy wasnt mean or abusive,but treated her as though her family would hold him back.However,something _(concern)love and trust connected them and their life had
9、 been enriched by their encounter.Both of them learned to grow better,and become a(n)_hero for each other.concerningunlikelycold,indifferentbecome worse,fallstop him moving forwardaccidental meetingGet the gistWhoWhenWhereWhat Dr.Henderson,I,my new teammateWhen doing our projectIn the classI was ass
10、igned to work with a competitive and serious teammate in a project Main idea:When _(assign)project mates,Dr.Henderson announced that I would be working with a_(fierce)competitive and serious fellow.I was_(easy)when we met to discuss the project,_ fear that I would make things worse.At one point,I wa
11、nted to drop the class _ stopped.After having a topic,we drew_ our plans.Then,one day,_ came that he was sick in hospital.assigningfiercelyuneasyforbutupwordTake the hint1.As fate(命运命运)would have it,Dr.Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with t
12、he one person in class I wanted to avoid.2.He looked at me as though I werent there.3.He just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.4.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project,I was uneasy.5.I actually wanted to drop the class at one poin
13、t,but stopped short because I didnt want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out.6.I decided to stick to it no matter what.1.How did I feel about our teamwork?2.What kind of person is my new teammate?3.What is my character?unwilling,anxiousacademically excellent;unfriendly,cold,seriousgent
14、le,easy-going,unwilling to give in,unyieldingBeginningClimaxEndinguneasyDevelop the plotbe assigned a new teammateunwillingdiscuss the projectThe teammate was sick?draw up the plan?Develop the plotPara.1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.1.Did I have the same feeling when we met?(Fee
15、ling)2.How did we draw up our plans?(Action)3.What dialogue would we have?(Dialogue)1.How did I feel when getting the news?(Feeling)2.What would I do with the project?(Action)3.What dialogue would we have?(Dialogue)4.What was the theme of the story?Para.2:Then one day I got word that he was admitted
16、 to the hospital for a serious disease.划线词分类划线词分类Character Dr.Henderson,teammateIncidentproject,findings,gradeActionshare,discussFeelings serious,alone,satisfaction What profound theme can you explore in the text?p A friend in need is a friend indeed.p Where there is a will,there is a way.p Every do
17、g has its day.p Roses given,fragrance in hand.p Learn to accept and appreciate others.p No pains,no gainsp A tough time pushed one to move forwardp A serious man can be your guide and hero to help you grow up.p Never underestimate the power of your potentialfriendshiphard workdeterminationgrowthExpl
18、ore the theme语料积累：Feelings1.妒忌：妒忌：The more we met,the more I envied his intelligence and his ability to cut through to the core issues.2.尴尬：尴尬：The embarrassment was heavy like a dark shadow（像阴影一样沉重）3.Standing frozen as ice,I didnt think about being trapped in such a dilemma that I was flooded with a
19、wkwardness and panic(我感到无比的尴尬和恐慌).4.紧张不安：紧张不安：Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动)+地点,I finally gathered courage and plodded in.5.I shook all over,like sitting on pins and needles 浑身颤抖，如坐针毡6.My heart sank and sweat poured.她的心一沉，汗流浃背7.兴奋：兴奋：Excited but calm,I couldnt wait to inform him of the
20、 good idea8.如释重负如释重负 On hearing the good news,he sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气),grinning merrily at each other.9.I collapsed into my seat,relieved and energized by（变得轻松有活力）the whole tough experience.10.感动：感动：He nodded in gratitude,eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).We started to m
21、eet regularly to draw up our plans.Teammates as we were,he kept engaged in doing researches alone.The more we met,the more I was flooded with awkwardness.At one point,l gathered my courage and asked him why he seemed so serious and kept me at a distance.Without any reply,he was still buried in the s
22、tatistical analyses.I was regretting what I said when he threw me a pile of paper.“Check again,Line 3!”The cold tone pushed me to focus on the project.With time going on,its surprising that I managed to make sense of some puzzling psychological questions and he was not so cold to me.Then one day I g
23、ot word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.Like sitting on pins and needles all day,I rushed to the hospital after class.It shocked me that my seemingly arrogant teammate should be so vulnerable.Having promised I wouldnt let him down,I used whatever spare time to work on the
24、project.When the day came,I went all out to present our findings.To my satisfaction,we were awarded an A！Excited but calm,I couldnt wait to inform him of the good news.He nodded in gratitude,tears blurring his eyes.It was true that everyone had his potential to be better,both in academy and personal
25、ity when fueling passion for them.Sample读后续写备考建议l 分类整理、巩固素材语料：要形成丰富扎实的语料库，按照“心理、动作、场景、人物、启示”等几方面的内容进行分类记忆。各类中又按照主角、身体部位、情绪名词等三类做主语分别记忆一些有场面感的句子。这一块内容最好能够通过默写或者听写来巩固。l 掌握高效的句子升级策略，驾驭长句子：借助于头脑风暴模式，熟知重要的几种句子升级方法，如倒装结构、虚拟语气、各种从句、无灵主语、修饰性副词、主位推进等等，融合动作、心理活动和情绪等元素，练就长短句的交错运用。l 构建合理的结尾模式：多阅读读后续写试题，思考并判断各中类型的文本应该采用什么样的结尾比较合适，并且熟知各种结尾的一般性写法。结尾方式可以分为Message点睛式、环境描写烘托式、展望将来式、回首反思式、自然过程式、首尾呼应式等等。-私家英语
