1、P?To help solve a To help solve a problemproblemWritingLearning about the text type u Whats the purpose of writing a letter of advice?u How does the writer help solve the problem?WritingDear Rebecca,I understand your feelings.As you mentioned in the email,you put a lot of effort into your schoolwork
2、.If your mother doesnt value that,of course youre going to be unhappy.But remember:every parent has high hopes for their children.Your mother wants you to be successful but she probably fails to see how you struggle.Try these pieces of advice and see if they help improve your relationship.First,talk
3、 to your mother.Make sure she understands your feelings.Choose a good time and start the conversation politely.You can begin with something like,“I know that you expect me to do well at school,but Im struggling sometimes.Can we please talk?”You should also try to meet in the middle when talking to y
4、our mother.Of course,school matters,but relaxation is good for you too.Tell your mother about your interests and ask for more free time8Appreciating a sample letter of adviceto spend on them.For example,if you like listening to music,explain why you enjoy it and how it helps you.make a deal that you
5、 are both satisfied with?Second,put yourself in your mothers shoes and try to understand what she does.I know it isnt easy,but you must be patient.When your mother keeps pressing you to study all the time,think about the reason why she does so.When I was your age,I thought senior high school was tir
6、ing too.I couldnt understand why my parents were so strict with me.However,when I grew up,I realized that they just wanted me to have the best possible future.After that,I became so much closer to my mum and dad.Everything will turn out all right,I promise.Yours sincerely,Cynthia8WritingAppreciating
7、 a sample letter of advicePart 1:Para.1 Show her _ Part 2:Paras.24 Offer _ on how to improve the relationshipPart 3:Para.5 End the letter with _ messageLetter of adviceWritingLearning about the structure I understand your feelings/how you feel.I hope I wish you all the best.Everything will turn out
8、all right,I promise.Try following these pieces of advice and see if they help improve your relationship.First,Second,WritingLearning about the language uI know you have trouble in.after reading your letter.I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.uYouve asked me for advice wit
9、h regard to/regarding.and Ill try to make some useful suggestions here.uT h e f o l l o w i n g a r e m y suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.uIn my opinion/Personally/As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to take the following action.uI hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope
10、my suggestions will be of benefit to you.u I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.WritingLearning about the language Sentence patterns Linking words for listing ideasfirstly,first of all,to begin with,in the first place,for one thingsecondly,moreover,furthermore,addit
11、ionally,in addition,whats more,for another thing,worse still,to make things even worsefinally,at last,in the end,last but not the leastWritingLearning about the language 书信体作文通用模板书信体作文通用模板英语书信结构一般有以下几个部分组成：称呼(salutation)，即写 称呼后面的标点一般只能用逗号。书信结构 正文(body)，即信件内的主要内容。正文第一句句子一般和称呼之间空一至二行。信尾客套语(complimenta
12、ry close)，即写信人在信的右（或左）下角，写上表示自己对收信人一种礼貌客气的谦称。一般有等。采用三种方法：采用分词短语，句末用逗号，不用句号，例如：a.Waiting for your good news,b.Looking forward to your early reply,c.Hoping to hear from you soon,采用，句末用逗号，不用句号，例如：a.With best regards,b.With kind regards to your family,c.With best wishes to you and yours,d.With best wish
13、es for your success and happiness,采用，句末用句号，例如：a.We are waiting for your good news.b.I hope to receive your early reply.c.We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.d.I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.结束语(Complimentary Close)结束语的一般写法如下：Yours truly,Truly yours,Sinc
14、erely yours,Yours sincerely,公函常用：Yours faithfully,Faithfully yours,Yours respectfully,Respectfully yours,私人书信常用：Sincerely yours,Yours very sincerely,Yours affectionately,Yours ever,开头段：四大内容开头段：四大内容1 1、问候、问候/自我介绍；自我介绍；2 2、写信背景；为什么会写这封信、写信背景；为什么会写这封信3 3、写信目的；写这封信想达到什么目的、写信目的；写这封信想达到什么目的4 4、中间段：具体问题中间段
15、：具体问题+具体分析；具体分析；5 5、结尾段：客套话；结尾段：客套话；16Dear Sir or Madam:I am a Chinese student named Li Hua,who is studying in London during the summer vacation.Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings,I am writing to apply for volunteering.As a student who has learned Chinese
16、 painting since 5 years ago,I am very pleases to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners.Besides,mu fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply.I will appreciate it if I could be given
17、 the opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply.1.1.介绍写作背景介绍写作背景简要阐明写作目的简要阐明写作目的2.2.正文要点正文要点3.3.结束语：表达感谢，期待回信结束语：表达感谢，期待回信1.称呼称呼：Dear Sir or Madam/Yao Ming，2.首句首句:I am writing to 齐头式齐头式 I am writing to 缩进式（空四个字母）缩进式（空四个字母）3.结尾结尾:Yours sincerely,Li Hua 此三项经常会在作文纸上填好了，如果没有就按要求写好。此三项经常会在作文纸上填好了，如果
18、没有就按要求写好。书信常用开头1.告知对方你的身份（不认识的情况）告知对方你的身份（不认识的情况）Dear Sir,I am a studentI am from ClassGrade 2My name is2.问候收信人（彼此认识）问候收信人（彼此认识）Dear Tom,How are you?How is everything going with you?How are you getting on with your studies?3.直接说明写信原因直接说明写信原因。Dear Sir，I am writing to ask/thank/complain/apologize/info
19、rm4.对之前得到的对方的消息表达自己的感对之前得到的对方的消息表达自己的感情。情。Dear Mary,I am delighted/excited/sorry to learn that自荐信：求职I am writing to you to apply for the job/position.感谢信:I am writing to you to show/express my heartfelt gratitude to you.邀请信：I am writing to you to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the.(as ou
20、r guest/judge/instructor).建议信：I am writing to you to give you a hand.求助信：I am writing to you to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor.道歉信:I am writing to you to show/express my heartfelt apology to you.告知信:I am writing to tell you about the details of XX.adj.衷心的；真诚的；真心真意的书信结尾书信结尾1.发出请求或建议发出请求或建议I
21、hope you can take this matter into consideration.I would appreciate it if you could deal with it as soon as possible.I suggest/recommend that2.表达提供帮助的意愿表达提供帮助的意愿。3.再次表示感谢或歉意再次表示感谢或歉意。If you need any more help,please dont hesitate to contact me.Please accept my heartfelt thanks and deepest gratitude.
22、In addition,let me apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused4.期盼回信期盼回信。5.表达祝愿表达祝愿。I expect to hear from you very soon.(Im)looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes to you!Good luck to you!Please give my best wishes to your family!Wish you success in your final exam!I hope you will make
23、 more progress in your English.结尾段自荐信：Id appreciate it if you can take me into consideration感谢信：I would like to thank you again(for what you have done for me/us).我再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢邀请信：We are sincerely looking forward to your coming.建议信：Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you.求助信：Hopef
24、ully your kind and timely help would be offered to me.道歉信：Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologize.28行文流畅度行文流畅度 1 1.表递进表递进.表转折表转折.表因果表因果.表目的表目的.表归纳表归纳and,then,alsand,then,also,o,besides,morever,whabesides,morever,whas s mmore ore,furthermore,furthermore,in in additionadditionhowever,though,ho
25、wever,though,in spitein spite ofof/despite/despite,after all,after all,on the contrary,on the contrary,on the on the other handother hand,instead,instead ofof +doingdoing.becausebecause,since,since,therefore,therefore,so,so,thusthus,consequently,consequently,as as a a result/consequence,result/conse
26、quence,on account of.on account of.in order that,in order that,so that,so that,for the purpose for the purpose ofof，with with the intention ofthe intention ofin general,in general,in brief,in brief,in short,in short,in conclusionin conclusion,in in a word,a word,on the on the whole.whole.6.6.表观点表观点
27、in my in my opinion,as opinion,as far as I am concerned,as for me ,personally far as I am concerned,as for me ,personally，from where I stand,from where I stand,7.7.表陈述事实或理由表陈述事实或理由Firstly ,secondly,thirdly,Firstly ,secondly,thirdly,finally,to finally,to begin with,in addition,besides,what is begin w
28、ith,in addition,besides,what is more,last but not least,more,last but not least,for for one thing,for another;on the one handon the one thing,for another;on the one handon the other handother hand8.8.开启文章开启文章as we know,as is known to all,it is known to all that,as we know,as is known to all,it is kn
29、own to all that,what what is known to all is thatis known to all is that9.9.表强调表强调above all,There is no doubt that,in above all,There is no doubt that,in fact,only fact,only in this way can we,the most in this way can we,the most importantimportant2 2句子成分句子成分残缺不全残缺不全，或多余，或多余1.1.审题审题欠准欠准，内容遗漏，内容遗漏3 3主谓主谓不一致不一致 4 4动词动词时态时态、语态语态的误用的误用5 5词类混淆，词类混淆，人称代词，物主代词混淆人称代词，物主代词混淆6.6.单词拼写单词拼写、大小写大小写、标点符号标点符号的误用等的误用等7.7.卷面卷面凌乱凌乱写作常见问题31最后一点小提示！
