1、.回顾原文回顾原文 1.我听说它是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。我听说它是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。2.对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。3.我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。Ive heard that it is an amazing sight,and I cant wait to go.To me,the story of the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.Were also planning to visit several othe
2、r places in Xian.4.我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因为为My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shaanxi History Museum,because5.我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。Were taking the train,leaving the day before the October holiday begins.Lead-in Brainstorming:（1）Do you like travelling
3、?Why?（2）Which city do you want to visit eagerly?Why?（1）Do you like travelling?Why?the benefits of travelling do some exercise and relaxenrich my knowledgebroaden my horizonsmake more friendseat much delicious foodand so on.show great perseverance毅力毅力broaden your hoizonsenrich your knowledgeshow grea
4、t perseverance毅力（2）Which city do you want to visit eagerly?Why?I desire to go to.I have been always longing for.Im eager to go to.I dream about going to.那些年旅过的游wa！云台山红石峡云台山红石峡云台山玻璃栈桥云台山玻璃栈桥YuLong Snow Mountain 玉龙雪山玉龙雪山泸沽湖泸沽湖Blue Moon Valley 蓝月谷蓝月谷中俄边境公路中俄边境公路呼伦贝尔大草原呼伦贝尔大草原.写作任务写作任务 At the last of Ri
5、chards email,he said“Do you have any plans for the coming holiday?Hope to hear from you soon.”1.【写作思路】（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）【写作思路】（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题）一审：确定写作体裁和主题 体裁体裁:应用文应用文-告知信告知信 主题：给主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。行计划及安排。（2）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）相关）时态：一般将来时（对于即将
6、到来的旅行的计时态：一般将来时（对于即将到来的旅行的计划）划）一般现在时（一般描述）一般现在时（一般描述）（3）三明确：明确写作要点）三明确：明确写作要点 要点：要点：对对Richard的来信做出评价和反的来信做出评价和反馈馈 具体的旅游计划（交通方式、旅具体的旅游计划（交通方式、旅游景点、旅行的目的和意义）游景点、旅行的目的和意义）旅游的心得体会旅游的心得体会（4）四分段（与写作要点息息相关）四分段（与写作要点息息相关）结合写作要点，整体分为三个段落，其中结合写作要点，整体分为三个段落，其中第二段为主体部分，详细叙述。第二段为主体部分，详细叙述。1.【写作典例写作典例】假定你是小李，你要给你
7、的朋友假定你是小李，你要给你的朋友Richard写一封回信。告诉他你十月写一封回信。告诉他你十月假期的安排。你要和爸爸妈妈一起假期的安排。你要和爸爸妈妈一起乘高铁去巨野旅游，并告诉他你的乘高铁去巨野旅游，并告诉他你的旅游计划和目的。借此机会，向他旅游计划和目的。借此机会，向他介绍一下巨野的著名景点和人文历介绍一下巨野的著名景点和人文历史。史。注意注意：（1）词数词数100左右；左右；（2）巨野景点：永丰塔）巨野景点：永丰塔(Yongfeng Tower）；）；巨野县博物馆巨野县博物馆(Juye County Museum);金山旅游区（金山旅游区（Jinshan Tourist Area);洙
8、水河公园（洙水河公园（ZhuShuiHe Park)（3）巨野名吃：）巨野名吃：罐子汤（罐子汤（pot lamp soup）；）；蒸菜（蒸菜（steamed vegetables）；）；（4）高铁（）高铁（high-speed railway）；）；2.【写作提示】【写作提示】（1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行,这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。_（2）我写信是为了告诉你我的假期旅游计划。_Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xian,which is amazing.I am writing to tell you my travel plan
9、.（3）我们将乘高铁去巨野去参观永丰塔，它是巨野令人惊叹的景点。我们迫不及待要出发（amazing）We are taking the high-speed railway to Juye to visit Yongfeng Tower,which is an amazing sight,and we cant wait to go.（4）我们也计划参观巨野其他的地方。我爸爸和我都期待去巨野博物馆，因为里面有很多文物。(treasure)(5)我们还打算去金山旅游区和洙水河公园。We are also planning to visit other places in Juye.My dad
10、and I are looking forward to going to Juye County Museum,because there are many treasures inside.We are also going to Jinshan Tourist Area and ZhuShuiHe Park.（6）此外，我们还可以吃很多美味的食物，比如罐子汤和蒸菜。_（7）依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，而且还可以拓宽视野。(enrich my knowledge;broaden my horizons)_Besides,we can enjoy delicious food ther
11、e,such as pot lamp soup and steamed vegetables.In my opinion,travelling can not only enrich my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.连贯成文连贯成文 Dear Richard,Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xian,which is amazing.I am writing to tell you my travel plan over the holiday.We are taking the hi
12、gh-speed railway to Juye to visit Yongfeng Tower,which is an amazing sight,and we cant wait to go.We are also planning to visit other places in Juye.My dad and I are looking forward to going to Juye County Museum,because there are many treasures inside.We are also going to Jinshan Tourist Area and ZhuShuiHe Park.Besides,We can eat delicious food there,such as pot lamp soup and steamed vegetables.In my opinion,travelling can not only increase my knowledge,but also broaden my horizons.In a word,JuYe is worth visiting.Im looking forward to your coming.Yours,XiaoLiThank you!
