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3、he call of nationwide labor education,a series of hands-on courses were launched last term in our school,ranging from planting vegetables to making traditional handicrafts.Sewing is one of my favorite courses,where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button,k
4、nitting a scarf,and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine.It was surely a rewarding and fulfilling experience,which not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of laboring.The hands-on co
5、urses have won wide popularity among students and exerted a positive effect on the personal growth of everyone involved.If possible,an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students well-designed works and display their creativity.A good writingstructure 3 partscontent all points coveredlanguage t
6、ransitional wordsadvanced words/phrasesvarious sentences Polish(润色润色)your writing Exchange it with your partner.handwriting 1.Whats the five steps?2.Whats the basic structure?3.Whats the standard(标准标准)of a good suggestion letter?4.Have you learned some transitional words(过渡词过渡词)and good sentence patterns?1.You learn to write by writing.只有写才能学会写！只有写才能学会写！2.There is no good writing;only good rewriting.没有好作文，只有好的改写作文！没有好作文，只有好的改写作文！多看多看 多背多背 多模仿多模仿 多翻译多翻译Two Rules:
