1、人教版八年级下册英语期末作文复习一、写作要点（1） 题干要点要全面（2） 避免出现明显错误e.g: I am like apple.There have some trees.（3） 词汇句子升级（a） 短语代替动词1. I want/need(我想要做、需要做）=I feel like doing 2. Improve =make progress in (在.取得进步)3. Study hard=try ones best to do sth=make an effort to do sth4. I dont know=i have no idea5. Use=make good use
2、of.（b） 副词多用用（c） 形容词具体化1. good=kind/warm-hearted/knowledgeableUnit 1 Whats the matter?本单元以“健康与急救”为话题，要求我们能谈论生活中存在的健康问题或意外事件，并能给出简单的合理的建议，并恰当地表达关切之情，从而培养学生良好的健康意识和保持健康的良好习惯。写作时，学生应该学会用“have+a/an+疾病”来描述健康问题，用should或shouldnt来提建议。素材积累一短语：1.have a cold/fever/stomachache/headache/sore throat感冒/发烧/胃痛/头痛/喉咙痛
3、2. lie down 躺下 3.go to a doctor / see a doctor 看医生4.hurt/cut oneself 伤到割伤自己 5. fall down 摔倒；跌倒6. take breaks /take a break / have a rest 休息 7.by oneself 独自；单独8. take risks 冒险10.right away 立即；马上9.see a dentist 看牙医11.take ones temperature 量体温12.take some medicine 吃点药 13.keep/stay healthy 保持健康(keep fit
4、)14. stay up不睡觉；熬夜 15. put a bandage on sth.用绷带包扎16.take sb.to the hospital带某人去医院 17. put some medicine on the cut 在伤口上面敷药素材积累一句型：1. Whats the matter? 怎么了？2. 2.Youd better. 你最好3. I think you should/shouldnt. 我认为你应该/不应该.4.You need to take breaks away from.你需要远离休息一下。5. Its important/necessary for.to.
5、对来说很重要/有必要。6. First,we should. Second, I think.Thirdly,doing.is bad/good for.首先，我们应该第二，我认为第三，做对有害/有益。6. In a word, if we do., well. 总之，如果我们做，我们将优秀范文1：近年来，学生意外伤害事故频发，给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生，我们该如何有效的自我保护，免受伤害呢？我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛，请你根据下表提示，写一篇短文参赛吧。1. How to Keep Safe2. Traffic traffic
6、 lights,electric bikes(电动车）.3. Swimming rivers, swimming pool.4. Internet ID number, code(密码），unhealthy websites(网站）. 要求：1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数：80-100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。参考词汇：stranger 陌生人；permission 允许How to Keep SafeDo you know that many dangerous things w
7、ill happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldnt cross the road. And we should be careful enough if we ride electric bicycles. Second,we shouldnt swim in the river by ourselves. Its
8、 dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third,we shouldnt tell strangers our ID numbers or codes when we are surfing the Internet.We shouldnt take risks to surf unhealthy websites, either. Whats more, we shouldnt go out with friends without permission. When we are in dang
9、er, asking for help from our parents,teachers or the police is important.After all, life is very important.We should learn something about self-protection so that we can ourselves well.写作练习：假如你是王朋，你在美国的笔友杰克(Jack)来信告诉你说他总是觉得很疲惫，经常感冒，不想吃饭，以至于影响了学习。请你根据下面的英文提示词，给他写封回信，向他提一些建议，信的开头和结尾已给出。70词左右，已给出部分不计入总
10、词数。Dear Jack,I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired,Yours,Wang Peng例文： Dear Jack,Im sorry to hear that you often feel tired, have colds and dont feel like eating anything. Here is some advice. First you should eat breakfast every morning. Eating breakfast can help you study well.Then you shoul
11、d do more exercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also very important to sleep eight or nine hours a night. I think you shouldnt stay up late. Good sleep can make you feel good and study well in the day. Try to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well. Good
12、 health! Yours,Wang Peng Unit 2 Ill help to clean up the city parks.单元话题：本单元的话题是“志愿服务和慈善活动(Volunteering and charity)”，围绕这一话题，要求同学们写一篇以志愿服务为主题的短文，常以我们周围发生的事为背景，以演讲稿、倡议书等形式出现，倡导我们发扬志愿者精神，做一些力所能及的事帮助他人，从而培养同学们乐于助人、与人为善的品质，弘扬社会正能量，构建美好社会。写作时要注意运用情态动词 could来提出合理的建议，熟练运用短语动词和动词不定式。素材积累-短语：1.volunteer to d
13、o sth.自愿做某事 2.give away 赠送；捐赠3.deal with 处理；应付Melody 4.set up 建起；设立5. care for 照顾 6.take pride in 为感到自豪ody7.cheer up(使）变得更加高兴；振奋起来 8.give out 分发；散发9.be strong in 擅长 10. make a difference to.对有影响、有作用11. help out with sth.帮助解决困难 12.work out fine 奏效；产生好结果e up with 想出；提出(主意、计划、回答等)素材积累-句型：1.I volunteer
14、in/for.我自愿2. I want/would like to.我想 3.Im strong in/good at. I will take part in. 我擅长我将参与4.I hope to. 我希望5. I can help them with/to do sth.我能帮助他们做某事。6. Its meaningful for us to do sth. 对我们而言，做某事有意义。8.We need to come up with a plan to.我们需要想出一项计划来9. We could help to clean up the.我们可以帮助打扫10.We should d
15、o.我们应该做11.be ready to do.准备好做12. not only. but also.不仅而且优秀范文假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则招募中国志愿者(volunteer)的广告。请根据该广告中所提Project 1 Project 2Place: A small village in the west of ChinaPlace: A primary school in the north of Thailand Activities: teach children English visit the old peoples home give Chinese less
16、ons Activities: set up a small librarywork on the farm play games with children注意：1.邮件中必须包含招募广告中的信息，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；审题指导：1.文体：说明文；2.人称：第一人称；3.时态：一般现在时；4.写作时，注意分条阐述自己想参加的项目及其理由；注意连接词的恰当使用，做到衔接自然、过渡合理。模板展示：开门见山，说明自己所选的志愿者项目：Im.L would like to take part in Project.具体阐述选择此项目的理由：Im strong in Engl
17、ish,so. Then I can visit.Besides, I hope to.In my opinion, to help people in need is.表达愿望：Looking forward to your early reply!例文：Dear Sir/Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. I would like to take part in Project1 and choose to volunteer in a small village in
18、 the west of China.Im strong in English, so Im able to teach children English.Then I can visit the old peoples home to help the old do some cleaning. I can also join in some activities to cheer them up. Besides, I hope to work on the farm. I think it must be interesting, I can help the farmers do so
19、me farm work and have great fun. In my opinion, to help people in need is really meaningful.Looking forward to your early reply!Yours.Li Hua Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?本单元的话题是“家务活与许可”，主要围绕家庭中的日常事务展开。写作时要求同学们能叙述自己或他人所做的家务，并谈论对做家务的看法，其目的是让大家学会分担家务，加强家庭成员之间的交流，促进家庭团结等。写作时可议论也可以叙述，或是夹叙夹议，可适
20、当发表感想。人称以第一人称为主。素材积累短语1. do the dishes 清洗餐具 2. take out the rubbish 倒垃圾3. sweep the floor 扫地 4. clean our own rooms打扫我们自己的房间5. fold the clothes叠衣服 6.make the bed 整理床铺7. help with housework帮助做家务 8. wash the clothes 洗衣服9.do chores 做家务 10.a waste of time 浪费时间 11.depend on依靠；信赖 12.begin with our own thi
21、ngs 从我们自己的事情做起13. take care of /look after 照顾；处理 14.in a mess 乱七八糟15.in order to目的是素材积累-一句型：1. Its very important for us to be independent. 独立对我们来说很重要。 2. 2.We should. 我们应该.3. Its our job to do.做是我们的工作。4.I like. but I hate. 我喜欢但是我讨厌5. Different students have different opinions about. 关于不同的学生有不同的看法。6
22、. For example, we can.and so on. 例如，我们可以等。7. I think its our duty to help with some housework. 我认为做一些家务是我们的义务。8. In my opinion. 依我看9. In a word.总而言之优秀范文:哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途。请你以“Help with Some Housework”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。审题指导：1. 文体：议论文；2.人称：第一人称；3.时态
23、：一般现在时；4.写作时，要注意把握写议论文的三个要素，即论点、论据和论证。首先在开篇提出要讨论的问题；然后对所提问题进行论证；最后在结尾部分归纳总结，提出自己的观点。模板展示：开篇点题，表明观点一做家务对孩子的好处：It is reported that.用事实展开论证：As for me, I often help my parents do many chores.In the morning,I.In the evening, I.My parents are very pleased with me. 总结归纳，阐明自己的观点：In my opinion, I think its o
24、ur duty to help with some chores.Doing chores can develop.Help with Some HouseworkIt is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I often help my parents do many chores. In the morning,I take out the rubbish, sweep the floor and water th
25、e flowers. In the afternoon, I help my mother cook lunch. In the evening, I always wash clothes and do the dishes. My parents are very pleased with me. In my opinion,I think its our duty to help with some chores. We cant depend on our parents forever. Doing chores can develop our independence and th
26、en we can take good care of ourselves.In a word, if I do more housework, my parents and I will be happier.Unit 4 Why dont you talk to your parents?单元话题： 本单元的话题是“人际交往”，主要围绕交往中的一些困惑展开，要求我们能够针对问题或困难提出相关建议。这类话题涉及的写作常以书信、日记等体裁为主，多用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时，行文中注意从实际问题出发，详细描述所提出的建议或看法，以达到切实帮助对方解决困难的目的。写作的重点在于行文中要注意恰
27、当运用情态动词和提建议的句型。素材积累一短语：1.look through 快速查看；浏览 2.work out 成功地发展；解决3.work out 解决 4. in ones opinion 依看pare.with 比较；对比 6.get on with和睦相处；关系良好7.be friendly to 对友好 8. try to be friendlier 试着友好点9. face grades bravely 勇敢地面对成绩 10.see a doctor 看医生11. give sb. some advice 给某人一些建议 municate with sb.与某人交流13. try
28、 ones best to study 尽全力去学习 14.continue to do sth.继续做某事15. take part in some activities 参加一些活动素材积累-一句型：1. Whats wrong with.? 怎么了？ 2. I had a fight with.because. 我因为和吵了一架。3.My problem is that.我的问题是4. Its normal for teenagers to have such problems.青少年有这样的问题很正常。5. I think you should.我认为你应该.6.Why dont yo
29、u.? 你为什么不呢？7.Im afraid I cant.我恐怕不能8. Its a good way to do.做是一种好方法。9.I hope that.我希望10. had better do.最好做11. In my opinion, its important for a student to.在我看来，对学生来说，很重要。我希望你能自我感觉好一些。优秀范文：假如你是陈冲，你的英语笔友埃里克在信中向你诉说了他的苦恼。请你根据他的来信写一封回信，给他提供一些意见。要求：1.语意通顺，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥；2.70 词左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Dear Chen Cho
30、ng,Im really sad these days, and I need your help. My friend,Tom, always plays phone in class. I dont think it is good, but I dont want to hurt our friendship, either. What should I do?Yours, Eric审题指导： 1.文体：应用文；2.时态：一般现在时为主；3.注意事项：本文应使用提建议的句型，并注重连词的运用，使文章前后连贯。模板展示：引出话题：Im really sorry to hear that.
31、Ithink.As a friend, you should.提出建议：First, you need to.表达愿望：I hope my advice may help you.例文：Dear Eric. Im really sorry to hear that. I think playing phone in class is not a good habit. As a friend, you should talk to him and let him know your true feelings. First, you need to ask him to talk about
32、the problem. He plays phone in class. Its not good, because he cant learn anything while he is playing. Next, you can tell him that he can use his phone after class. Dont be afraid that you may hurt your friendship.Thats because a true friend knows that what you do is good for him.I hope my advice m
33、ay help you.Yours,Chen Chong写作练习：Harry在学习和生活中遇到了一些问题，他写信向学校的青少年辅导员Mr.Green求助。下面是Harry的问题和Mr.Green给出的建议。请你以Mr.Green的名义给 Harry回信，告诉他如何解决这些问题。Harrys problems:1.有时感到孤单，不善于交朋友；2.常玩电脑游戏；3.英语成绩不好，同学们嘲笑他。Mr. Greens advice: 1.积极参加各种活动，常和老师、同学交流，学会与他人相处；2.少玩电脑游戏，那对学习和健康不好；3.认真听课，多向老师请教，不要在意别人的嘲笑。要求：1.格式正确，正确运
34、用时态；2.须包含以上信息：3.70个词左右。例文：Dear Harry,I have learned about your problems. I want to offer you some useful suggestions.You said you sometimes felt lonely and was not good at making friends. Just take part in all kinds of activities and communicate with your classmates and teachers more often. Youd bet
35、ter also learn how to get on well with others. It seems that you spend a lot of time playing computer games.Thats not good for your study and health. Try to spend less time on them. You also said you were not good at English and your classmates laughed at you. Pay no attention to those students who
36、laugh at you. Listen to the teacher carefully and ask your teacher for advice. I hope youll feel better about yourself in the future.Yours,Mr. Green写作练习亲爱的同学，你生活中有烦恼，学习有压力吗？那我们应该如何正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力呢？请根据提示以“How to solve our stress”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，语言表述准确规范，语句通顺连贯，提示内容必须用完。提示：1.积极参加体育锻炼，有一个健康的身体。2.多与老师、家长和
37、朋友交谈，说出自己的烦恼。3.多听听音乐，多看看书。4.尽自己最大努力学习，勇敢面对自己的成绩。5.如果经常压力太大，可以去看看医生。How to solve our stressWe all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them?Firstly, we should take more part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, we need to talk
38、 with our teachers, parents and friends, try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. Its a good way to relax ourselves. Fourthly,we should try our best to study hand and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifthly, if we have
39、too much stress, wed better see a doctor.I hope we can solve our problems and become more and more confident.Unit 5单元话题：本单元的话题是“难忘的事件”，相关的写作任务常是以第一人称描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。时态以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。同时要交代清楚五要素，五要素也就是五W句型： who,when,where,what,why.交代清楚人物的身份、事情发生的时间、地点等，详写事情的发展过程，写清事情的前因后果。另外也可以写一写从该事件中你了解到了什么，得到
40、了什么样的经验教训。 素材积累-一句型：1. During my life, I remember many things well. 在我的生命中，许多事情我都记得很清楚。2. The thing that I will never forget is that.我将永不忘怀的一件事是3.I will never forget.because.我永远都不会忘记因为4. It happened in/on. 它发生于5.I still remember. 我仍然记得6. When I.,I did. 英语老师Melody当我，我7.I was doing., when.我正在，这时8. Whi
41、le I was doing.was/were doing.当我正在时，正在9. From then on, I know. 从那时起，我知道 优秀范文：假设今天是6月3日，星期五，在放学回家的公共汽车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。现在请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。真老师要点：1.一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；2.你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐下来，老人只得站在旁边；3.孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4.你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。 N要求：1.70个词左右；2.日记开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。审题
42、指导：1.本文记叙的是过去发生的事，故时态以一般过去时和过去进行时为主。2.习作中要把握要点，同时以第一人称的角度，按照事情发生的先后顺序进行叙述。可适当发挥，如表明自己的立场及观点等。模板展示：车上见闻：On my way home on the bus, I saw.While he was carrying. I gave my seat to. The old man had to. After a while,the boy.个人观点：I think the boy should not only.but also.例文：June 3, Friday ，FineOn my way h
43、ome on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. While he was Melodycarrying the boys schoolbag and a violin, I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted at his grandpa for water and th
44、en dropped the empty bottle on the bus.When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean. Unit6单元话题：本单元的话题是“传说和故事”，相关的写作任务通常是以第三人称、一般过去时讲述一个经典故事或者描述亲身经历的故事。在进行写作时，可用开门见山的方式让读者直接走进故事；接下来简单介绍故事发展的过程和结局。最后以精练的语言介绍
45、故事的寓意、表述自己的观点或询问对方的感受等。同时还要写清楚故事的内容(what)、人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、起因(why)和情节发展(how)等要素。素材积累-一短语：1. long long ago/once upon a time 很久以前 2.traditional Chinese stories 中国传统故事Melody3.be interested in对感兴趣 4.from that day on 从那天起5. cant stop doing sth.禁/忍不住做某事（couldnt help doing） 6.so.that.如此以至于7. look
46、 forward to 盼望 8.after a while 过了一会儿9. make sb.do sth.让某人做某事 10. hear sb. doing sth.听见某人正在做某事11. try to do sth.试图做某事 12.instead of doing sth.代替做某事素材积累-句型：1. Let me/Im going to tell you.让我/我告诉你2.Once upon a time, there was/were. 从前，有3. At that time, 那时候.4. It happened on the night of. 它发生于的晚上。5. One day. First. Then.Next. Finally/At last.有一天，开始然后接着最后6. The story is trying to show us that.这个故事想告诉我们7. The story reminds us that.这个故事提醒我们8. What do you think of.?你认为怎么样？ 优秀范文：请根据守株待兔这一成语写
