1、1/3 本单元的写作任务是写故事性记叙文,常见的形式有:故事、传记、游记、 日记、新闻报道等。写作时需要注意以下几点: 1要把握住记叙文的六个要素,即时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、 事件(what)、原因(why)和过程(how)。 2要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点 和人物, 然后写事件的原因及发展过程, 最后写结果。 同时在结尾处要尽量自然, 点明文章主题。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文,使整个文章融为一体。 3要把握好人称。在写此类文章时通常用第一人称或第三人称。 4要注意时态的运用。在故事写作过程中,一般用过去时态。在描写背景 或景象时,
2、常用过去进行时,这样显得更加形象生动。 基本框架 1开头交代必要的背景,如:时间、地点、人物等。 2主体交代故事情节(事情的主体)。如:事件的发生、发展和前因后 果。 3结尾事情的结果、感想、愿望等。 常用词块 1常用的连接词 First.Then.Next.Finally;Some.Some.Others;The boys.The girls.; Some.the others.The rest of us/them. 2时间顺序 early in the morning/in the early morning;in the middle of the day/at noon;late i
3、n the afternoon/in the late afternoon;far/deep into the night;in the past/at present/in the future;first,second,next,then,finally;at first,in the beginning;at last, in the end;shortly afterwards,at once,immediately,all of a sudden,suddenly, soon;the moment,as soon as,the first time,not until,next ti
4、me,before,after, etc. 常用语句 精彩开头 2/3 1One day,on the way to. 一天,在去的路上 2Last Sunday,my mother and I were doing.when we saw/heard. 上周日,我和母亲正在做突然这时我们看到/听到 3About.oclock one evening in.,my.was doing. 大约在晚上点,在,我的正在做 丰满主体 1Without delay/hesitation,I/we dialed 120/119. 毫不犹豫,我/我们拨打了 120/119。 2It wasnt long b
5、efore an ambulance/a fire engine arrived. 不久,一辆救护车/消防车到了。 3We tried our best to help.,but. 我们尽最大努力去帮忙,但 4We make every effort to help. 我们努力帮忙 5After a while,many people came to help us. 过了一会儿,许多人过来帮我们。 余味结尾 1At last,.was saved/we succeeded. 最后,被救了/我们成功了。 2Although we were very tired,we felt very hap
6、py. 尽管我们很累,但我们很高兴。 3What an unforgettable experience! 多么难忘的一次经历啊! 国庆节刚过,你有什么难忘的事?请写一封信向你的朋友 Tom 介绍令你难 忘或印象深刻的一件事情。 要求: 1介绍事情要写记叙文。注意写记叙文的句子、连接词和过渡词,不要写 成了议论文,要有文体意识; 3/3 2不必面面俱到,记叙事情要突出难忘或印象深刻; 3词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How are you going?_ _ _ _ Yours, Li Hua 参考范文 Dear Tom, How are you go
7、ing?I am writing to share an unforgettable experience of climbing Yanling Mountain together with my friends with you. At 8:00 am,we gathered at the foot of Yanling Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beau
8、tiful scenery.To our excitement,we all finally reached the top about 2 hours later.Bathed in sunshine,we jumped and cheered with joy.Tired as we were, we were all impressed by this experience. What a wonderful time!How I wish you could have been with us.Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Li Hua