1、 Page 2 The school life in Grade9 Page 3 Page 4 Page 5 进入九年级，同学们学业压力 变重，在学习和工作的压力日 趋增大的今天，会缓解的人才 会有健康的体魄。中学生是如 何度过假期的呢？某杂志社想 对中学生作一次调查，右图是 他们此次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为杂志社投稿 写一篇完整的调查报告,并提 倡大家进行假日休闲。 visit friends or parents travel stay at home work Page 6 Lets share some pictures! The houses are different
2、in style but they have the same steps of building. How? Page 7 Put them in orderPut them in order _ designing the house_ designing the house _ decorating_ decorating ( (装饰，装修) ) _ collecting material_ collecting material _ building_ building Building a house: 1 4 2 3 _read topic carefully and outlin
3、e-drawing (认真审题 罗列提纲) _ beautifying （美化） _ material collecting _ writing 1 2 3 4 Writing an article: Writing articles is just like building houses. Page 8 书面表达:(English composition) 是江西中考英语中的必考题，分值 为15分，约占卷面总分的1/8。 Page 9 中考英语中考英语书面表达书面表达评分标准评分标准 一档一档13-15分分 信息信息完整完整，表达，表达流畅流畅，无无语言错误或基本无语言错误语言错误或基本无
4、语言错误（非常优秀）（非常优秀） 二档二档10-12分分 信息信息基本基本完整，表达完整，表达较较流畅，有流畅，有少量少量错误，但错误，但不影响意思表达不影响意思表达（基本优秀）（基本优秀） 三档三档7-10分分 能传达能传达部分部分信息，表达信息，表达不够不够流畅，但句子流畅，但句子基本基本可读可读（合格）（合格）9分分 四档四档4-6分分 只能传递只能传递少量少量信息，表达信息，表达不不通畅，只有通畅，只有少量少量句子可读句子可读（不及格）（不及格） 五档五档1-3分分 能传递个别信息，表达能传递个别信息，表达不不清楚，只有清楚，只有个别个别句子可读句子可读（不及格）（不及格） Page
5、10 大病：大病： 离题离题、句子结构、句子结构、要点漏写、要点漏写、 词序、语态、时态等方面。词序、语态、时态等方面。 常见病：常见病：名词单复数、第三人称单数、名词单复数、第三人称单数、 拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。 不治而亡：不治而亡：抄袭本试卷阅读理解，照抄抄袭本试卷阅读理解，照抄 要点提示词，东拼西凑。要点提示词，东拼西凑。 Page 11 How can we write a good composition? Page 12 What is a good composition ?What is a good composition ? “一点”一点”
6、: : 有“亮点”有“亮点” . .有独到之处。有独到之处。 “二整”“二整”: : 书写工整书写工整, ,卷面整洁。卷面整洁。 “三要”“三要”: : 要点，字数要达标要点，字数要达标, , 词汇和语法结构要准确、词汇和语法结构要准确、 上下文要连贯。上下文要连贯。 “四不行”“四不行”: :漏掉内容不行漏掉内容不行, , 写错体裁不行写错体裁不行, ,用错人称不用错人称不 行，用错时态不行。行，用错时态不行。 Page 13 Page 14 1. Cross-question(审题) Style (体裁） Content(题材) Person（人称） Tense（时态） Page 15 进
7、入九年级，同学们的学业压 力变重，在学习和工作的压力 日趋增大的今天，会缓解的人 才会有健康的身体。中学生是 如何度过假期的呢？某杂志社 想对中学生做一次调查，右图 是他们此次的调查结果。根据 你所得的信息，请为杂志社投 稿，写一篇完整的调查报告, 并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 Cross-question(审题) visit friends or parents travel stay at home work Page 16 Style (体裁）：_ Person（人称）：_ Tense（时态）: _ 调查报告 第三人称 一般现在时 1. Cross-question(审题) 据实描写： 适当
8、发挥： 度假方式 细节及提倡假日休闲 Page 17 Head Beginning Body Tail Ending Page 18 2. An outline drawing2. An outline drawing（列要点） List key points (列要点) Page 19 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲 根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 List key points visit friends or parents travel stay at home work 列要点时，内容上不能有遗漏，如有漏点， 按点扣分！Terrible!
9、Page 20 List key points 1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. visit friends or parents travel stay at home work Page 21 加：加首尾，使文章结构完整。可以采用总分总， 分总结构。做到开门见山，首尾呼应。 Page 22 How do people spend their v
10、acation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning 开头已给出，不计入总词数）开头已给出，不计入总词数） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation! （the ending） 加(add) Page 23 4. Sentence Making a
11、nd Beautifying word phrase sentence Beautifying Page 24 Wriing skill(Wriing skill(一）一）:Make the sentences longer. Page 25 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or p
12、arents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation! (the ending) Chooseget away fromworld-holidays Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Page 26 Writing skill(Writing skill(二二) ): Give some examples to prove the facts or opinions. Page 27 Most people
13、choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people stay at home. 扩：Some people_ stay at home, ( ) watching( ) or ( )( ) Internet to ( )( )( ) rest. some people prefer to stay at home ,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Page 28 Writing skill(W
14、riting skill(三三) ):Use some similar but higer level words or sentence patterns. Page 29 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people prefer to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Some other people visit friends or pa
15、rents. 扩：It_ visit friends or parents. A few people work. 扩：A few people（ ）（ ） work. Come and enjoy your vacation! Page 30 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people prefer to stay at home, like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good res
16、t. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation! Page 31 4. Sentence connection sentences passage Linking words （连接词） Try to use some linking words to make your writing more fluently Page 32 Writing skill(Writing skill(四四) ):Use some link
17、ing words to make your composition more fluently. Page 33 并列and; as well as ; also; 选择or; eitheror; or else; otherwise 原因because ; owing to; due to ; according to ; thanks to 结果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result 时间when ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally ; afterwards. 比较
18、on the contrary ; on the other hand ; like 转折but ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; 递进besides ; moreover ; even ; in addition;also 举例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 总结after all ; in short ; in general ; generally speaking;in a word 语篇衔接的过渡词语 Page 34 连(connect) How
19、do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） Come and enjoy your vacation!（the ending） Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people prefer to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good r
20、est. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the body) Page 35 连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some p
21、eople prefer to stay at home, like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation! Page 36 Writing skill(Writing skill(五五) ):Choose one or two proper proverbs(谚语)to
22、beautify your composition. As the saying goes, Page 37 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people prefer to stay at home,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people ha
23、ve to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending） Come and enjoy your vacation! As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” （the ending） 只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻 Proverb （谚语） Page 38 5. Checking Spelling(拼写) Tense(时态) Grammar (语法) H
24、andwriting(书写) Punctuation marks(标点符号) Page 39 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. according to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the Holidays,Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Intenet to h
25、ave a good rest. And it also make them relaxing to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Page 40 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. Accord
26、ing to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy y
27、our vacation! As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Page 41 6. Copying out 书写规范，卷面整洁 Page 42 誊：誊写。将检查后的作文整洁 地抄写在横线上 卷面整洁不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分。 Page 43 第五档： （1-3分）2分，卷面不整洁，字迹缭乱 Page 44 第四档（一般）： （4-6分）5分，再减去书写、卷面分。 Page 45 第三档： （7-10分）9分，再减去书写、卷面分。 Page 46 进入九年级，同学们学业压力 变重，在学习和工
28、作的压力日 趋增大的今天，会缓解的人才 会有健康的体魄。中学生是如 何度过假期的呢？某杂志社想 对中学生作一次调查，右图是 他们此次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息，请为杂志社投稿 写一篇完整的调查报告,并提 倡大家进行假日休闲。 visit friends or parents travel stay at home work Page 47 Page 48 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to tra
29、vel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people prefer to stay at home, like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation! As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” 优秀作文 展示 14分 Page 49 复习和强化训练要求 1.背:系统地熟读和背诵课文中关于话题的套用句 型和短文,积累写作素材。 2.说:对考纲上和课本中列出的热点话题逐一 进行口头训练，培养造句能力和语感。 3. 写：有计划地进行限时训练，提高应试能力。 借鉴和模仿（背诵）是提高英语写作的有效办法。 10分钟80词-习惯（框架，句型）-得心应手 Page 50 Page 51
