1、“ 说 ” 出 魅 力 读后续写中如何“说” 学习目标学习目标 1.1.理解并应用名著中两种表示“说”理解并应用名著中两种表示“说” 的方法的方法 2.2.在给定的语境中用所学到的方法创编一段语篇。在给定的语境中用所学到的方法创编一段语篇。 3.3.欣赏语言之美，提高语言素养，养成主动阅读名著的习惯。欣赏语言之美，提高语言素养，养成主动阅读名著的习惯。 1 1 名著赏析 2 2 名著学习 3 3 综合运用 1 1 名著赏析 Chapter 7 Chapter 7 A Mad TeaA Mad Tea- -PartyParty The table was a large one, but the
2、 three were all crowded together at one corner of it: No room! No room! they cried out when they saw Alice coming. Theres PLENTY of room! said Alice indignantly, and she sat down in a large arm-chair at one end of the table. Have some wine, the March Hare said in an encouraging tone. Alice looked al
3、l round the table, but there was nothing on it but tea. I dont see any wine, she remarked. There isnt any, said the March Hare. Then it wasnt very civil of you to offer it, said Alice angrily. The table was a large one, but the three were all crowded together at one corner of it: No room! No room! t
4、hey cried out when they saw Alice coming. Theres PLENTY of room! said Alice indignantly, and she sat down in a large arm-chair at one end of the table. Have some wine, the March Hare said in an encouraging tone. Alice looked all round the table, but there was nothing on it but tea. I dont see any wi
5、ne, she remarked. There isnt any, said the March Hare. Then it wasnt very civil of you to offer it, said Alice angrily. 2 2 名著学习 The table was a large one, but the three were all crowded together at one corner of it: No room! No room! they cried out when they saw Alice coming. Theres PLENTY of room!
6、 said Alice indignantly, and she sat down in a large arm-chair at one end of the table. Have some wine, the March Hare said in an encouraging tone. Alice looked all round the table, but there was nothing on it but tea. I dont see any wine, she remarked. There isnt any, said the March Hare. Then it w
7、asnt very civil of you to offer it, said Alice angrily. 美颜美颜 一一. . 美颜（添加修饰成分美颜（添加修饰成分） 副词副词 1.Theres PLENTY of room! said Alice1.Theres PLENTY of room! said Alice indignantly.indignantly. 2.Then it wasnt very civil of you to offer it, said Alice 2.Then it wasnt very civil of you to offer it, said Al
8、ice angrily.angrily. 3.That would be grand, certainly, said Alice 3.That would be grand, certainly, said Alice thoughtfullythoughtfully 4. No, please go on! Alice said very 4. No, please go on! Alice said very humblyhumbly; I wont interrupt ; I wont interrupt againagain. . hastily, meekly(hastily, m
9、eekly(温顺地温顺地), readily, wearily), readily, wearily（疲倦地）（疲倦地）, , contemputuouslycontemputuously（轻蔑地）（轻蔑地）, cautiously, gently, sulkily, cautiously, gently, sulkily（闷闷不乐（闷闷不乐 地）地）, triumphantly, triumphantly（得意洋洋地）（得意洋洋地）. . 一一. . 美颜（添加修饰成分美颜（添加修饰成分) ) 介词短语介词短语 1.1. Have some wine, the March Hare said
10、 Have some wine, the March Hare said in an encouraging tonein an encouraging tone. . 2.2. I wasnt asleep, he said I wasnt asleep, he said in a hoarse, feeble voice.in a hoarse, feeble voice. in a mournful tone, in an offended tonein a mournful tone, in an offended tone. 可互换 hastily, meekly(hastily,
11、meekly(温顺地温顺地), readily, wearily), readily, wearily（疲倦地）（疲倦地）, , contemputuouslycontemputuously（轻蔑地）（轻蔑地）, cautiously, gently, sulkily, cautiously, gently, sulkily（闷闷不乐地）（闷闷不乐地）, , triumphantlytriumphantly（得意洋洋地）（得意洋洋地）. 一一. . 美颜（添加修饰成分美颜（添加修饰成分) ) 一一. . 美颜（添加修饰成分美颜（添加修饰成分) ) 非谓语动词非谓语动词 1. Im afraid
12、 I dont know one, said Alice, 1. Im afraid I dont know one, said Alice, rather alarmed at rather alarmed at the proposalthe proposal. . 2 2 What day of the month is it? he said, What day of the month is it? he said, turning to Aliceturning to Alice 3 3 Of course you dont! the Hatter said, Of course
13、you dont! the Hatter said, tossing his head tossing his head contemptuouslycontemptuously. I dare say you never even spoke to Time!. I dare say you never even spoke to Time! 4 They were learning to draw, the Dormouse went on, 4 They were learning to draw, the Dormouse went on, yawning and yawning an
14、d rubbing its eyesrubbing its eyes, for it was getting very sleepy., for it was getting very sleepy. 心理描写心理描写 动作描写动作描写 修饰成分修饰成分 副词副词 介词短介词短 语语 非谓语非谓语 母亲不耐烦地说，“没时间，我还要打个重要电话”母亲不耐烦地说，“没时间，我还要打个重要电话” Asked to see the oil painting, mom said Asked to see the oil painting, mom said in an impatient in an i
15、mpatient tone,tone,”No time, baby. Right now I am busy with an ”No time, baby. Right now I am busy with an important talk.”important talk.” patientlypatiently 修饰成分修饰成分 副词 介词短 语 非谓语 母亲皱着眉头，摆了摆手，说，“没时间，我还要打个重要电话”母亲皱着眉头，摆了摆手，说，“没时间，我还要打个重要电话” Waving her hand and frowningWaving her hand and frowning, mo
16、m said, mom said,“No time, baby. No time, baby. Right now I am busy with an important talk.”Right now I am busy with an important talk.” 修修 饰饰 成成 分分 副词副词 介词短语介词短语 非谓语非谓语 The table was a large one, but the three were all crowded together at one corner of it: No room! No room! they cried out when they
17、 saw Alice coming. Theres PLENTY of room! said Alice indignantly, and she sat down in a large arm-chair at one end of the table. Have some wine, the March Hare said in an encouraging tone. Alice looked all round the table, but there was nothing on it but tea. I dont see any wine, she remarked. There
18、 isnt any, said the March Hare. Then it wasnt very civil of you to offer it, said Alice angrily. 二二 . . 变身变身 二二 . . 变身变身 1 I dont see any wine, she 1 I dont see any wine, she remarkedremarked. . 2. No room! No room! they 2. No room! No room! they cried out cried out when they saw Alice coming. when
19、they saw Alice coming. 3.3.- -I believe I can guess that, she I believe I can guess that, she addedadded aloud.aloud. 4.I do, Alice hastily 4.I do, Alice hastily repliedreplied; at least; at least-at least I mean what I sayat least I mean what I say- thats the same thing, you know.thats the same thi
20、ng, you know. 5. Two days wrong! 5. Two days wrong! sighedsighed the Hatter. I told you .the Hatter. I told you . 6.Yes, but some crumbs must have got in as well, the Hatter 6.Yes, but some crumbs must have got in as well, the Hatter grumbledgrumbled: you : you shouldnt have put it in with the bread
21、shouldnt have put it in with the bread- -knife.knife. 7.Why should it? 7.Why should it? mutteredmuttered the Hatter. Does YOUR watch tell you what year the Hatter. Does YOUR watch tell you what year it is?it is? 二二 . . 变身变身 8.It goes on, you know, the Hatter 8.It goes on, you know, the Hatter contin
22、uedcontinued, in this way:, in this way:- 9.And ever since that, the Hatter 9.And ever since that, the Hatter went on went on in a mournful tone, he in a mournful tone, he wont do a thing I ask! Its always six oclock now.wont do a thing I ask! Its always six oclock now. 10.But what happens when you
23、come to the beginning again? Alice 10.But what happens when you come to the beginning again? Alice ventured to ask.ventured to ask. 11. Tell us a story! said the March Hare.11. Tell us a story! said the March Hare. Yes, please do! Yes, please do! pleadedpleaded Alice.Alice. 12. Alice 12. Alice repea
24、tedrepeated her question. Why did they live at the bottom of a her question. Why did they live at the bottom of a well?well? 13. I want a clean cup, 13. I want a clean cup, interruptedinterrupted the Hatter: lets all move one the Hatter: lets all move one place onplace on 1 I dont see any wine, she
25、1 I dont see any wine, she remarkedremarked.(.(评论评论) ) 2. No room! No room! they 2. No room! No room! they cried out cried out when they saw Alice coming. when they saw Alice coming. （大声呼喊）（大声呼喊） 3.3.- -I believe I can guess that, she I believe I can guess that, she addedadded aloud.aloud.（补充说）（补充说）
26、 4.I do, Alice hastily 4.I do, Alice hastily repliedreplied; at least; at least-at least I mean what I sayat least I mean what I say- thats the same thing, you know.thats the same thing, you know.（回应）（回应） 5. Two days wrong! 5. Two days wrong! sighedsighed the Hatter. I told you .the Hatter. I told y
27、ou .（叹着气说）（叹着气说） 6.Yes, but some crumbs must have got in as well, the Hatter 6.Yes, but some crumbs must have got in as well, the Hatter grumbledgrumbled: you : you shouldnt have put it in with the breadshouldnt have put it in with the bread- -knife.knife. （抱怨）（抱怨） 7.Why should it? 7.Why should it?
28、mutteredmuttered the Hatter. Does YOUR watch tell you what year the Hatter. Does YOUR watch tell you what year it is?it is?（喃喃细语，低语）（喃喃细语，低语） 二二 . . 变身变身 8.It goes on, you know, the Hatter 8.It goes on, you know, the Hatter continuedcontinued, in this way:, in this way:-（继续）（继续） 9.And ever since tha
29、t, the Hatter 9.And ever since that, the Hatter went on went on in a mournful tone, he wont in a mournful tone, he wont do a thing I ask! Its always six oclock now.do a thing I ask! Its always six oclock now.（继续）（继续） 10.But what happens when you come to the beginning again? Alice 10.But what happens
30、 when you come to the beginning again? Alice ventured ventured to ask.to ask.（小心地问道）（小心地问道） 11. Tell us a story! said the March Hare.11. Tell us a story! said the March Hare. Yes, please do! Yes, please do! pleadedpleaded Alice.Alice.（恳求）（恳求） 12. Alice 12. Alice repeatedrepeated her question. Why di
31、d they live at the bottom of a well?her question. Why did they live at the bottom of a well? （重复说）（重复说） 13. I want a clean cup, 13. I want a clean cup, interruptedinterrupted the Hatter: lets all move one place the Hatter: lets all move one place on.on.（插嘴）（插嘴） remarkremark cry out cry out addadd re
32、plyreply sighsigh grumblegrumble muttermutter continuecontinue venture to askventure to ask pleadplead repeatrepeat interruptinterrupt 这位男士手拿鲜花，跪在女友身边，恳求道“原谅我吧，这位男士手拿鲜花，跪在女友身边，恳求道“原谅我吧， 我迟到了”我迟到了” The man ,The man ,kneeling by his girlfriendkneeling by his girlfriend, , with a rose with a rose in hi
33、s handin his hand, , pleadpleaded,”Forgive me for my being ed,”Forgive me for my being late.”late.” remarkremark cry out cry out addadd replyreply sighsigh grumblegrumble muttermutter continuecontinue venture to askventure to ask pleadplead repeatrepeat interruptinterrupt “闭嘴闭嘴”她抱怨道，“你毁掉了我所有的希望”她抱怨道
34、，“你毁掉了我所有的希望” “Shut up!Shut up!” she she grumbledgrumbled, , “You ruined You ruined all of my hope.all of my hope. remarkremark cry out cry out addadd replyreply sighsigh grumblegrumble muttermutter continuecontinue venture to askventure to ask pleadplead repeatrepeat interruptinterrupt 眼里噙着泪水，这位足球运
35、动员叹气道，“我们本来可眼里噙着泪水，这位足球运动员叹气道，“我们本来可 以赢得这场比赛的。”以赢得这场比赛的。” Tears welling up in his eyes, Tears welling up in his eyes, the football the football player player sighedsighed, “We would have won the match.”, “We would have won the match.” remarkremark cry out cry out addadd replyreply sighsigh grumblegr
36、umble muttermutter continuecontinue venture to askventure to ask pleadplead repeatrepeat interruptinterrupt 关上灯，他喃喃细语道，“我真是太累！”关上灯，他喃喃细语道，“我真是太累！” Having turned off lightHaving turned off light， he he murmuredmurmured to to himself ,himself ,“ I am too exhaustedI am too exhausted” 3 3 综合运用 remark,re
37、mark, cry out , add, reply , cry out , add, reply , sigh, grumble, mutter, sigh, grumble, mutter, continue, ventured to ask, continue, ventured to ask, plead , repeat, interruptplead , repeat, interrupt hastily, meekly(hastily, meekly(温顺地温顺地), readily, ), readily, wearilywearily（疲倦地）（疲倦地）, contemput
38、uously, contemputuously （轻蔑地）（轻蔑地）, cautiously, gently, , cautiously, gently, sulkilysulkily（闷闷不乐地）（闷闷不乐地）, triumphantly, , triumphantly, thoughtfully, indignantly, In a thoughtfully, indignantly, In a voice/tonevoice/tone An old man was tripped on a stone An old man was tripped on a stone and fell
39、and fell down._down._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ remark,remark, cry out , add, reply , cry out , add, reply , sigh, grumble, mutter, sigh, grumble, mutter, continue, venture to ask, plead , continue, venture to ask, plead , repeat, interruptrepeat, interrupt hastily, meekly(hastily, meekly(温顺地温
40、顺地), ), readily, wearilyreadily, wearily（疲倦地）（疲倦地）, , contemputuouslycontemputuously（轻蔑地）（轻蔑地）, , cautiously, gently, sulkilycautiously, gently, sulkily（闷（闷 闷不乐地）闷不乐地）, triumphantly, , triumphantly, thoughtfully, indignantly, In thoughtfully, indignantly, In a voice/tonea voice/tone An old man was t
41、ripped on a stone An old man was tripped on a stone and fell down. and fell down. So painful was he that So painful was he that he he cried outcried out ”help, help”. ”help, help”. Seeing Seeing what happenedwhat happened, Peter rushed to the old , Peter rushed to the old man man hastilyhastily, and
42、 , and ventured to ask in an ventured to ask in an caring tonecaring tone,”are you OK?” the latter ,”are you OK?” the latter looked up and looked up and sighedsighed,”my leg seems ,”my leg seems broken”. Peter broken”. Peter repliedreplied,”I am calling ,”I am calling an ambulance. You will be fine
43、soon.” an ambulance. You will be fine soon.” While waiting for the ambulance, Peter While waiting for the ambulance, Peter cautiouslycautiously lifted up the old man who lifted up the old man who repeatedrepeated “thank you”.“thank you”. remark,remark, cry out , add, reply , cry out , add, reply , s
44、igh, grumble, mutter, sigh, grumble, mutter, continue, venture to ask, plead , continue, venture to ask, plead , repeat, interruptrepeat, interrupt hastily, meekly(hastily, meekly(温顺地温顺地), ), readily, wearilyreadily, wearily（疲倦地）（疲倦地）, , contemputuouslycontemputuously（轻蔑地）（轻蔑地）, , cautiously, gently
45、, sulkilycautiously, gently, sulkily（闷（闷 闷不乐地）闷不乐地）, triumphantly, , triumphantly, thoughtfully, indignantly, In thoughtfully, indignantly, In a voice/tonea voice/tone An old man was tripped on a stone An old man was tripped on a stone and fell down. and fell down. So painful was he that So painful
46、was he that he he cried outcried out ”help, help”. ”help, help”. Seeing Seeing what happenedwhat happened, Peter rushed to the old , Peter rushed to the old man man hastilyhastily, and , and ventured to ask ventured to ask in an in an caring tonecaring tone,”,”are you OK?” the latter are you OK?” the latter looked up and looked up and sighedsighed,”my leg seems ,”my leg seems broken”. Peter broken”. Peter repliedrepl
